IshRa SS - Crossroads Chapter 15 Pg 88 *CONCLUDED* - Page 61

Hey Neeti!

Awww...
I can fill dis space with an awww...
Bcz dis updt made me go awww...

I am serious!
U knw I had butterflies in my stomach wen Raman said I love u damn it...
Oh wat a scene...

I hv a habit whch is gud & also bad at times dat I visualise everything dat I read...
N until I get a clear picture of wat is happening there I read dat part again & again so dat it fits into my imagination...
This is y I get irked at times and if the story dsnt fit into my imagination or I am unable to visualise it I quit reading that story...
But I am glad dat with ur story I didn't hv to go thru the trouble of reading it again and again coz it easily came into my vision...bcz each part u wrote was so well described dat it didn't take much effort in visualising it...
Dats the first thing I lyk abt ur story...

the second thing I lykd is that der is no unnecessary dragging of the plot...
everything happened quick yet had its own beauty...

Great job dear...

I read dat u r going to end dis with the next update...
I wudnt force u to continue this story...bcz I knw dis wud b the best tym to end it as per the plot in ur mind...
But yeah I wud ask u to begin writing anthr story ASAP...
reading ur works is alwys a treat...
So plz do write more & plz pm me...

Thnx...have a great day 😃

amazing update
loved it so much 😃
liked ishra confrontation and confession 👏
loved d way ishita put an end to raman's continuous blabbering 😆😳
jassi aunty's dhaba got famous bcoz of ishra 😆
loved ishita's 'i luv u' chit to raman 😳
plz don't end it so soon dear 😭
eagerly waiting for d next update 😊

Part 13

Neethi you are stupendo fantabulousically fantastic...
It was the besest update..
Amma is arggghhh... What to say about her. What ever she did was wrong but still it was bcz she loves her daughter a way to much
Subbu is such a namard...
N Raman aww my hero has no effect on knowing about her incapability
Running to read next

P.s. Yes everything is normal in life now

👏 three cheers for Neethi hip hip hurray hip hip hurray hip hip hurray...
Girl u nailed it again.
the confession n reply all was so dreamy...

Jassi aunty 😆 aww at her best hehe.

But it is ending 😭

Start a new one 😉

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Yayyaeee. Finally an update.

Yaayyee, me the first one to comment. I super loved the update. Loved their confession and kiss outside the dhaba. Lol, Jassi Aunty again caught hold of them. Pls don't end so soon. Give some romantic scenes after their marriage. You know what I mean. ☺️

Originally posted by: kimty1230

nice update dear
confession was nice
update soon

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Awesome Neethi...

The Way he confronted her is really good...

His Confession is nice..

Her way to shut him up is good too😆

Dhaba owner got famous coz of them..

Bhalla family rocked here...

Her "ILU" letter is nice way to get him...

Superb update overall...

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

omg amazing!!!!

i loved their confession and stuff!!!

u r too gud babe!!! I'm not joking!!!

update soon

Originally posted by: Divanii

😳 👏

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

I'm not at all amazed... U have already spell bounded us by ur writing pattern... Today ur story has justified IshRa... Loves the every moment of it... Loved Raman... Loved Ishita... Loved IshRa...

Awesome update dalin'...

Thanks for the PM...