My first ss# FROZEN LOVE,part-7, updated on pg.49 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Sorry I'm late
Just read it
It's awesome...
Heee...gotta see our angry young man
Yet to know who is he <img src="http://www.sherv.net/cm/emoticons/confused/i-dont-know-smiley-emoticon.gif" alt="" />
So you better update soon 😊

i will continue it..and thanks for your appreciation.
glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: Nazz_naz

Nyc prologue... continue soon ...

thank u dear

Originally posted by: hana_y

congrats for turning green now n congrat for first ss dear

nice ss cont it om me please for next

thank u hana..

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

Janani I'm so glad you decided to post your work! I must say you are brilliant as a first time writer! Terrific start and please PM me the rest of the updates!

Congratulations on becoming a Dazzler and for starting your first fic! 😃

awwe so sweet of u umera..right?
Thanks for your appreciation dear,thanks for your lovely wishes.im glad to know,u liked my work..

Originally posted by: usaonly

Congratulations Janani for the first story and turn to be IF DAZZLER dear.🥳🥳Veryinteresting start please continue and PM me for next update.😊

hey jum,thanks for your lovely wishes.im waiting for your comment.

PART-1

Not proofread...please overlook spelling/grammatical errors.enjoy reading..


"Listen!"he shouted making her jump in her spot with fear.

she started to cool down and think.she knew if she tried to free herself again,he would only hold her down and it wouldn't help at all.so she kept silent and with her eyes signalled to him that she was ready to listen to him.


"Man,what do you think of yourself?hmm...QUEEN VICTORIA SAMJTHE HO APNI APKO?

DO YOU KNOW HOW YOU LOOK?HOW YOU AFFECTED ME?"he slightly smiled when he remembered the first time he saw her...

BEAUTIFUL was all that came in his mind.No she didn't look like every second girl he saw.she was just a BREATH OF FRESH AIR in the crowd.

The simplicity of her look reflected on her personality.she didn't wear makeup or jewellery since her smile was all that was needed.

she didn't need to have a perfect figure b'coz she just looked perfect the way she was with her curves.

His lips curved in to a smile as she tucked a strand of her long black hair behind her ear.A normal yet extraordinary indian beauty that was so rare to find.That's who she was the first time he saw her...


As he was so immersed in the thought of her first look,he didn't realise when she took advantage and slowly removed his palm away and started to yell at him.


"U Just leave me! U are not in your sense! Just leave my cabin right now or else i will call the guards and the police."


"yeah! I'm not in sense! B'coz when i'm in my sense,u don't give me a chance to speak...U just affect me alot damm it...!

Why are u doing this to me ...I love u! "he yelled out making her angry as well and she yelled back...


"Think about your family! Think about SHAGUN, you disgusting man!


That's all for today..
Thanks a ton for your sweet comment and encouragement.

Im updating this from my mobile.so pms is difficult to send u people.understand me and give your lovely support..love u all.

Res
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Is he married Jaanu 😕
Oh common yaar...
Is he having affair with Ishita after marrying Shagun 😆
Silly me
Awesome update...
But chottu... 😔
Update soon 😊

I love u...but she replied think about shagun😲...

its nice but shagun .is he engaged or married to her.u give us long comments and the update was soo chotu. oh raman was flat on ishita from first sight.interesting .want to read more .continue soon dear.thanx for pm i recieved it.

very nice update..liked it...but it's a chhotu sa plz next time try to update big one...