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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-4
Hi my lovely buddies 😉
I know I'm super late ,kya kare little bit busy..😭
Hope u people understand.😃
Not proofread , please overlook spellings and grammatical mistakes.
please pray for smilesforever98,Aka prabha for speedy recovery.😭
sorry if I not reached to your expectations..😕
if you not like the story, just pm me. I will quit to write fruther😕

In hospital...

Subbu stopped bhalla's to come along with them ,we are family,so we can handle this matter,will you people please leave us and ishita alone ..

Bhalla's not spoke a single word.They know subbu is right,they silently left the place with teary eyes.


IN BHALLA'S MANSION...


Raman directly went to his room and shut the door.Raman sit on the floor,recalling how subbu stopped him .


RAMAN POV..

He was supposed to be with her but he was quiet didn't say anything.Raman was feeling like the land below his leg was leaving him,when subbu took ishita along with him.
The moment he was about to open his mouth and say something, he realized she already gone from my life. I have not stopped her.my heart was graving heavier as though it will bust and he would die. He couldn't realize what this feeling was for and felt he was missing her in his life.

The memories of the past started scrolling in his mind. The way she entered in his life, and got him close to her and left him.
FLASH BACK (3 HOURS BACK)

Raman.. we will talk tomorrow . she pleaded him.
Why? do you have any plan to elope again tonight? huh?

Raman listen to me.. she said
.
He held her both arms and shook her vigorously snapping her words short" you listen to me ishita" we have matter to speak and take decision to make and before all that, i'm not going any where tonight?" u go it ...

His lips swooping down on her, she turned away her face unable to meet his eyes. He moved back a little to look down at her ,and the sight of her flushed face, swollen lips and then as his eyes moved down, her exposed ample cleavage through the thin saree ..she ware ,automatically
His hand encircled her waist and her gasp made his body hotter with the pleasure it made him feel hungry . His hand tightened around her body. so, that she plastered to every hard line of his body and was aware of how she was driving him crazy...

ishita widened her eyes in shock and struggled to be set free, but the man was not ready to let her go as yet.she was struggling now,he realised...
But was it good idea to let her go...A BIG NO ,HIS MIND ANSWERED HIM.

His eyes moved to her face to study her expressions. what her reaction might be at that moment.she looked at him with anger in her eyes and was a bit a fear also, he could see in her eyes.

O teri ,she looked like a poolan devi to murder him right there at any time..

"U scaring me raman" don't do this to me.. she finally said.

He ignored her words, scaring her was never his aim. In fact he never planned things to be the way they had happened till now...he thought to himself.

Ishita felt a prick on her arms, as he touched her arms!
Raman ,you hurting me.. she complained him with teary eyes.
Oh !I'm sorry did i hurt you? he mocked her...
Leave me raman or else? she try to speak remaining words.

or else? what? oh! come on you want to complain on me ,u want to make a call to your amma, appa, subbu to save you from this monster? oh! How can i forgot you are AMUL BABY..to all ,he give evil smirk to her.

She was afraid of him, very afraid , but she won't him to know that , she couldn't talk about the past ,not with anyone. silent was the only solution and she would stick to it although it was getting harder for her with each second of his proximity,killing her. she did not know what she want at that moment, nor did she want to think. His magnetic eyes telling her...what he want from her.
She could feel his tumb gently massaging the sensitive skin of her wrist . she felt she was going weak all overs . His face come close to hers now.. some more close...
Ishita closed her eyes.
With one swift motion he removed her pallu off from her shoulder
.
she yelled with anger..."u are an animal"..

"All Thanks to you chudail, then have an animal taste" ,what u say? huh? his smirk never leaving him...(FLASHBACK END)

Omg ! raman..she was going to kill u soon with desires , if he did not do something fast about it. He was not sure what he wanted to do right then ,but he was sure ,he wanted her more...

He gritted his teeth...omg! this chudail always seemed to be tempt me off the wrong way...she could burn me alive with just a mere galance,its just show u a demo of what she could do to me..

What the hell is wrong with me.I can't handle it anymore .I'll have to show her ,she not effect me again i'm not that old Raman bhalla .
Iss chudail ke vajhhe sai,shagun slapped me. just b'coz of her, everyone hates him ,he cried loudly.

Enough was enough raman,he wiped his tears as his inner voice made an appearance , as she said" U ARE NOT A CRYING BABY". No ,raman tu itni aasani se haar nahi maan sakti,tu sabka vishwas paana hoga,kal tum sab kuch tek karna hoga...

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NEXT DAY MORNING AT 9am.

Raman slowly snuck in to shagun room.she standing near the open window, she silently watching outside. He slowly walked towards her, putting his hands on her arm he turned her around to face him.


Her glistering eyes and the tears running down her face stopped him from continuing. He was shocked to see her in that status.Every tear drop adding to his guilt. she saw him , he is also cried alot? he is in guilt? she thought.

Shagun,mujhe bolne ka ek mauka do,mein tumhe sab kuch pehle hi bata na chahata tha ,lekin mein nahi bata sak thi.Tum meri baat sun rahi hona?tum sun nahi padaiga chahe kuch be hojaye...


He waited for her to respond, but she continued looking at him, waiting to hear what could make raman went to this extend to hurt ishita...how he could possibly justifying him breaking her trust on him..

shagun listen to me,he continued ,I'm not done anything wrong with ishita .YOU KNOW SHAGUN, I HATE HER,SHE AFFECTS ME IN ALL SENSE...I JUST WANT TO TORTURE HER.I HATE THAT CHUDAIL...

Hearing this shagun looked up at him,shock written all over her face,but he was unable to look at her eyes .He looked at her ,hoping after all that he done nothing would be able to separate them..

Wait a minute. .what you said ,come again shagun asked raman.
Before raman going to continue ,shagun phone's ring.


Wait.. ha hello..haa okay,is she fine , thank god vandita. she is safe...thanks for calling me and please inform me about her health condition...she turn to raman and told him
. Raman you know, ishita is perfectly fine. In fact vandita said, you saved ishita's life. Omg ,raman I'm sorry .I didn't tell anything to your defence . It's doesn't mean that i didn't love you . How can i not trust you . I'm sorry for that not defending you in front of everyone.

Raman was so overcome with joy at being so easily forgiven by shagun, his arms circled her as he pulled her close and wrapped her in a tight hug...
Mean time her phone ring, they broke the hug and she excused herself...raman left the place
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Hello...

Shagun, please come over to the coffee day .so that i can get a glimpse of you and feel relived and let's come up with a plan to get this issue solved.I hope you are not angry on me shagun , you will understand the situation , right ? .please don't let me down...

Hmm..i will come ,she answered the caller.😭
Tears roll down from shagun eyes .she not informed to anyone . I can't take any chance .she need to go and meet him , as soon as possible...
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Coffee Day...at 11 am.

Mean while , a man is waiting for her arrival...Don't know what situation she will be in,his minds kept on thinking will she come or not.?
Suddenly, he felt her presence and turned around, in the fraction of seconds he turning around ,he cuddled her ,she could feel his hot breath ...her eyes was teary .I'm sorry, please forgive me .I didn't support you ,when you needed me the most . I'm ashamed of my behaviour shagun..

Subbu ,I'm not angry 0n you...haa I'm disappointed that you didn't say anything.Now I understand what was running in your mind .subbu assured her he will take care of everything,he will find out the solution to get back to her. will u please trust me shagun ? she smiled and said YES.
TO BE CONTINUED...
FOR PMS BUDDY ME...
I'WILL WAIT FOR YOUR RESPONSE.😃

Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
janani_divan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 4 is updated
have a look
ishrasoul thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
so subbu and shagun are upto some plan...
interesting dear
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shagun and Subbu love each other.
Then why the hell she is with Raman .
It becomes more interesting .
Brilliant . Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok I'm shocked.. but I kinda expected it...
ReSt hmmm don't know what to say
nice update..
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg subnu n shagun are in love lovely updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb writing dear...
Read all the parts
Loved it... Interesting...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
im getting confused here
that subbu n shagun loves each other
then y d hell r they with ishra
aur yeh raman kis baat ka justification de rha tha he is wrong he have to except it
n jst apologise to ishita
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

im getting confused here
that subbu n shagun loves each other
then y d hell r they with ishra
aur yeh raman kis baat ka justification de rha tha he is wrong he have to except it
n jst apologise to ishita


wait for next update dear,your wish will fulfilled in next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Ok I'm shocked.. but I kinda expected it...

ReSt hmmm don't know what to say
nice update..
continue soon


even i also dnt know sush darling..
thanks for comment..

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