I loved you :- FF note on page 12 14.08

Prologue:-

"Ashok. I need him Ashok. I can't live without him. He is my only family. He is my only love" cried Ishita in her fianc's arms. Ashok as a perfect gentleman, consoled her and whispered against her soft tresses,
"He is gonna be alright. Trust me and Trust god"


"Shagun, I need to go to the hospital. Aditya is unwell. Please take care of yourself and Ruhi" panicked Raman
"Raman, easy. He will be alright"
"I hope"


Raman and Ishita's eyes met and hatred had been replaced by concern for their son. Who is in his deathbed.


How is it guys? Should I continue?



Part1:- page1
Part 2:- page4
Part 3:- page7
NOTE

This is a very unique story! Nice Prologue! I'm waiting for IshRa's love story!

Totally different story...

this is very different
sounds interesting
update soon

Hey aishu ,u come up with another unique story.yipee..
Fabulous story line..
One misunderstand cause divorce and childrens suffered alot.

Adi suffered alot,poor child..shagun is happy to see ishra together..yeh naya twist hain.

Thank god yeh par no negative characters,only grey shades of characters exist.

Ruhi is sharam daughter ?ishu said adi is only son in her life,raman file custody case for adi?.i really pity for ishu condition.she not moved on with ashok..and raman moved on with shagun?

Waiting for more disclose of past and how ishra met?how their marriage take place,how they seperated..?
Continue soon.
thanks for pm..

Hey folks

This is something about this particular story
Here, I emphasise how a silly matter or a mere misunderstanding can cause divorce but probably love doesn't extinct.
And point to be noted, Shagun and Ashok are not negative characters here. Even if they act to be in some point of time, it is the situation that makes them
Here all my characters are somewhat gray. Be it Raman or Ishita or the Bhallas or anyone.
No one is perfect in the story and it is about flaws of an individual and the consequences
I don't know how this will turn out to be
I hope I can do justice to this story
Thank you for bearing me all along

Different story... Looking forward to it continue soon...

Interesting
Nice concept
Please continue
Thanks for pm

hey its really nice please continue!!!

loved it .very unique and different story. looking for more.sorry dear but i didn't get the last line of part 5.update soon .thanx for pm.