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Posted: 10 years ago
hey mannu mannu smiply awesome dear i loved it..it's chhottu update but very amezingly written...👏 ...raman is so stubborn na that Aasani se pichha nahi chhodne wala.TERA PICHHA NA CHHODU SONIYE CHAHE BHEJ DE JAIL ME😆...some lines were so beautiful...tum jante hi kya ho pyaar ke baare me..pyaar kya main nahi janta..par mere liye pyaar ka matlab sirf ISHITA...hai👏...song selection was superb...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu



Plz plz plz tell me ki mai jo soch rahi hun vo sahi hai aue angath and raman r one and the same 😉
Name change ke piche koi naye story hogi 😆

Seee i expect the unexpected 😉

socho socho jo bhi sochna hai kyu ki uske paise nahi lagte😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

Teacher didi am i allowed to comment


Of course u r...tera cmnt to is baar sabse spcl hona hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss

res...

Unres...\
Maanu di...
THe story until now is fantastic...
bohot cute story hai...

though i dont know how she ended up marrying someone else ...
Im looking forward to Ishra story...
Even though knowing very well ki they arent gonna end up in a marriage...

Im trying to relate things...
her very first dream...
n stuff but im confused... 😆😆..

Char kadam ka suspense isse better tha di...

iss update mein i expected raman to force hug...
but you see he is trying in Raman way and RKB way...😉😉...
moreover they are kids in a way so... of course...
raman way se hi sahi... jod dijiyega jaldise...
😃😃...

ab waiting for next one...



Hey shrav!

First of all welcome to khwabon ki duniya...
Thnx fr reading it...

@bold complain tha ya compliment?😲

trying to updt soon

PS:THANK YOU PANKHURI
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

Res..
Tera Rasta Main Chhodun Na..yeh baat main aapko keh rahi hun.. 😳🤗


But tu kahan chali gayi mera rasta chod ke...really missing u yaar...
Aajaa na jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu1234

Nice update...update soon


Thnx dear...vl try

PS:THANK YOU PANKHURI
Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sulochana90

beautifully written

please update the next one asap
waiting to read more


Thnx sulo...vl try to updt soon


PS:THANK YOU PANKHURI
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir


Of course u r...tera cmnt to is baar sabse spcl hona hai...



chalo permission mil gayi...i am running to comment now

last comment for the first time
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Posted: 10 years ago
late comment for the first time...all because of you...late permission jo di aur main thehri good student
bina permission ke koi kaam nahi karti siway aapko chedne ke 😆 uske liye i dont need permission

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coming to update

is baar i have to comment smartly 😉

what do i say about the thought process of urs...you call them keede but i would rename them as jaadui keede

aapke dimag mein kya kya aata hai yaar di...aur aata aise hai ki bas saamne waala flat totally...i am sure jeeju ko bhi apni baaton se hi phasa liya hoga aapne

brilliantly planned update...each moment each happening was so well connected what do i say...you tell me that i take a notice of small things but what do you do...har ek din jo story mein ek progression hai us har ek din ko aapne kitne ache se present kiya hai and at the same time not stretching it unnecessarily

secondly the song 👏 batao movie mein kya tha aapne kis tarah use kiya...sachi kamaal hi kar diya...i swear mere dimaag mein yeh song kabhi na aata if i was writing anything similar but then as i say out of the world 😛😛😛

thirdly some lines were just beautiful
"Jab cycle ki malkin ko apne dil me jagah de di hai, to dil ki malkin ko,apni cycle ki jagah dena kounsi badi baat hai?"
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

batao kounsi ladki yeh sunke nahi pighlegi...it just stole my heart 😳😳

an excellently planned update

but i see you didnt continue already 😡😡😡 jaldi karo...i m missing the special ending and just wondering is baar kaisi hogi

hope the comment justifies what i feel 😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi All!

Yaad hun?

I hope ke agar yadon se bhi chali gayi to KHWABON se to nahi gayi hun.

However TUM MERE KHWABON SE JAA NA SAKE...isiliye I am back with Part 11 B...

Part 11 (b) : Tera Rasta Mai Chodun Naa

Kya zarurat thi tujhe uski baat maanne ki?

Mana bhi to kar sakti thi.

Aur tune to ek kadam aage badke use promise bhi kar daala.

Option bhi to nahi tha koi aur.

Emotional blackmailing me phaske kiya the waada...

Jo bhi ho ab soch ke aage kya?

Ab kya karegi?

Nahi gayi to wada khilafi hogi...

Aur chali gayi to khud se kiya waada tod degi...

Ammmaaa! Mai pagal ho jaungi...

I paced back and forth aimlessly ruining the shape of my nails because of continuous biting. It was just 7 AM and I was already ready.


Yes it was much earlier than my usual time but I had no option.



Last evening RKB had followed me till my building and he was even ready to come ahead only if I didn't beg him to let me go.



No, just the begging didn't work and he didn't let me go that easily.



Taking an advantage of my helpless state, he had asked me for a meeting as the bribe. I, not having any option left, had to promise to meet him outside the school campus.



And this is why I was ready to go to school much earlier than the normal timings as I had to meet him at 8 AM.



Getting ready was a different thing but actually going out and meeting was different.



I had committed to him owing to my helplessness but now I was puzzled if it was really right to go.

I was least interested in meeting him but I have grown up learning that one should never break promises.

I wanted to go just for the sake of the promise I made but at the same time, something held me back.

Firstly, can it be considered a promise? It was literally an emotional atyachar. So was I bound to fulfill this promise?



And secondly, if I did consider it as a promise and go ahead with it, there were cent percent chances that he would take this meeting as a green signal for himself. Anyhow he was good at assuming things but I surely didn't want that to happen.



While I was lost in my own world of concerns, Amma's concerned query brought them to a force stop.

"Ishu aaj itni jaldi ready hogayi? Kya baat hai?"

"Wo Amma extra classes hai to..."

Wow! Great Ishu!

Coudn't you come up with a better idea?

Do you think Amma will let you stay here for another minute after hearing the word Extra Class?

Extra class, the lamest excuse came out of my mouth in a hurry.

And that's called getting stuck in your own words.



As expected!

The mention of extra classes and Amma was all hyper.

She literally pushed me out of the house strictly telling not to miss the extra class.

Iyers and studies go hand in hand you see..!!




I pedaled my cycle as slowly as I could, praying all this while to not have him there waiting for me.



But when it comes to him, God too doesn't take my side!



Much to my dismay, there he stood waiting for me.



And as soon as his eyes caught my sight, his face lit up with that dimpled killer smile which manages to take away my breaths like always.



As if the smile wasn't enough, he opened his arms to welcome me in his embrace, as I reached close.


I was back to breathing normally but the sight in front of me compelled me to get off my cycle in a jiffy leaving it crashing to the ground and run towards him.



I crashed into his arms with a strong force that made us both fall, I being on him and his arms wrapped around me and we rolled to our left.


Scared to death I shut my eyes tight while he continued to gaze at me lovingly.



Vroom...honk...honk...


"Arre oh roadside romeo Juliet! Marna hai toh kahin aur jaake maro...Apne saath kyun mujhe bhi maarna chahte ho? Subah subah meri hi gaadi mili thi kya?" beeping of a truck and the curses of the driver brought him out of his trance.



He then realized that I didn't hug him out of love but to save his life.

I opened my eyes on realizing that we were safe now only to meet his eyes that emitted love.



We shared an eye lock for seconds until another vehicle honked at us.


Embarrassed for losing my control for those few seconds, I tried to get up only to be pulled back by him.



He was now playing with my patience and so I looked at him angrily and got up forcibly leaving him right there on the ground.



As I began to brush off the dust from my uniform, I saw him forwarding his hand to me cutely.



"Main kyun karun tumhari help...I don't care for you" I tried to tell him but it looked more like a reminder for my own self that I didn't care for him or rather I didn't have to care for him which I did just few moments ago.



"Achha? You don't care for me! Then why did you came running like a super jet to save me?" he asked while getting up on his own without my support.



"Khud ko itni importance mat do...Tumhari jagah agar koi aur bhi hota toh bhi main yahi karti. Go get a life!" I tried to justify my action putting extra emphasis on the words "koi aur bhi"



"Yeh jeena bhi koi jeena hai jismein tumhara saath nahi? Yeh jeena kisi sazaa se kam nahi mere liye. Isse behtar toh mai mar hi jaata" he replied back dramatically letting his over the top emotions flow free.

Zinda Hoon Lekin Woh Baat Nahi Hai

Haathon Mera Tera Jo Haath Nahi Hai




"Joke tha? Hasi nahi aayi" I tried to ignore his drama in the form of comedy.



"Joke kehkar is haseen ishq ka mazaak na banao ae haseen" his drama continued.



"Lagta hai tumhe kisi paagal kutte ne kaat liya hai...yah phir girne se seedha tumhare dimaag pe asar ho gaya hai...kaisi behki behki baatein kar rahe ho" I replied tired of his over drama.



"Deewana Nahi Aashiq Hoon Tera

Ishq Ke Siwa Kya Kaam Hai Mera" as if his drama wasn't too much already, his cheesy poetry also started popping out.


Ishq Ka Hai Naam Bada

Maine Kiya Hai Kaam Bada




"Kuch filmy lines bol dene se koi aashiq nahi ban jaata...aur tumhari in betuki baaton ka mujhpe koi asar nahi hone wala hai...na aaj na kal na kabhi aur...islie tumhare liye behtar yahi hoga ki tum apna dimag aur apna time dono kisi productive kaam pe laga do" I replied losing my patience to his irritating dialogues.



"Chahe meri aashiqui tumhe deewangi lage ya chahe meri baatein tumhe betuki lage...main bas itna jaanta hoon ki maine tumse pyaar kiya hai...aur jab tak mujhe mere pyaar ki manzil nahi mil jaati main chalna nahi chodunga" he reverted seriously this time.

Karke Magar Aadha Chodun Na



"You are just impossible" I scoffed not having it in me to listen to him for even a second more, I tried to move away from there only to welcome another tactic from him.

He cupped my cheeks and forced my vision into his eyes.

Tere Rukh Se Yeh Chehra Modun Na



As our eyes met for the second time, that meeting made me weak.

I started to lose myself deep into his eyes which looked full of love.



A battle began between my heart and my mind.



My heart gave me 100 reasons to believe him but at the same time my mind too gave me 101 pleas to not believe him.

MIND: Kya kar rahi hai Ishu? Tu kamzor nahi pad sakti...

HEART: Aur taqat nahi hai mujh me khud ko dhoka dene ki. I love him...

MIND: Galti kar rahi ho tum...I am warning you...

HEART: Maine pyar kiya hai. Isme mera kya kasoor hai?

Chaahat Hai Meri Kasoor Nahi Hai

MIND: Pyar karna galat nahi hai. Par jisse tum pyar karti ho wo galat hai.

HEART: Janti hoon. Par kya karun kuch aur option bhi to nahi hai. I am feeling completely helpless.

MIND: Helpless nahi, emotional ho rahi ho. Aur isi emotion ka woh fayda utha raha hai.

Dil Jazbaati Hai Majbur Nahi Hai

HEART: To kya mai un sare sapnon ko bhool jaun jo mai bachpan se dekhti ayi hun?

MIND: Nahi! Us waade ko yad rakho jo tumne inhi sapnon ke tootne par khud se kiya tha. Mat bhoolo Ishita ke tum kis daur se guzri ho. Mat bhoolo wo waada jo tumne ye sochke kiya tha ke chahe kuch bhi ho jaye tum phir se wahi khwab nahi dekhogi jinke tootne ka zakhm abhi bhara nahi hai.

Sir Yeh Bhale Phoot Gaya

Jism Mera Toot Gaya

Khud Se Kiya Waada Todun Na


And by the time my mind and my heart fought, I could not stop myself from asking my own self if I was wrong to dream again.

Was it not right to believe his words and accept his love?

Was I making myself prone to one more heartbreak?

But this was not a movie in which your confusions could end by self thoughts.


I would have continued to ride on my dilemma trip if he didn't bring me out of it.

"Ishita kuch toh bolo please" he literally begged.



I actually had nothing to say so I found staring blankly as a better option.



"Kya tumhe ab tak yakeen nahi hua ki main Raman hoon...tumhara khud ka Raman...Ek meherbani karo mujh pe...tum hi bata do ki main aisa kya karun jis se tumhe yakeen ho jaaye" he requested.


And my silence continued with slight addition: Tears started to flow down my eyes not bothering what signal would they give to him.


He was quick to grasp what those tears meant.


"Jab tum mujhse pyaar karti ho toh kyun rok rahi ho khud ko? Kyun khud ko rok ke khud hi ko takleef de rahi ho? Mat roko khud ko Ishita aur apna bana lo mujhe" he tried to knock in some sense in me while wiping off my tears.



"Is waqt tumhe apna nahi sakti. Par ek waada karti hoon aaj tumse...jis din mere dil ne mujhe kaha ki tum hi mere Raman ho us din main nahi rokungi khud ko. Khud aage badhke apna lungi tumhe. Lekin tab tak tuplease mujhe force mat karna" I said coming to a conclusion over the battle of my heart and mind.

I did not wait for his reponse and started walking away.


I halted in my track for a few seconds as I heard him say, "Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole, tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega" he gave a promise in return of my promise.

Baandhun Sehra Kafan Odhun Na



Those words were something I would have never wanted to hear.

They weren't just words but his deep love.

Not having any words to give him back, I ran from there and didn't stop until I reached my class.



On reaching the class, all I knew was that I sat on the bench, hands crossed on the table and my head hidden in my arms.

I cried and just cried until I felt a tap on my shoulder.

I got up and turned to find him standing right behind me.



"Tumhe ek baar mein samajh nahi aata kya...kyun aa gaye phir mere peeche? Chale jao yahan se" I spat angrily.


"Ek baat kehni baaki reh gayi thi...wahi kehne aaya hoon" he replied in his usual sweet tone.



"Kya kehna hai jaldi kaho aur phuto yahan se" I replied my anger rising to the zenith.



"I love you" he said passing a flying kiss to me.


And that was the limit.



"I hate you" I retorted.



"But I still love you" he repeated those words yet again with a wink.

"Just go away. Mujhe tumhara chehra bhi nahi dekhna hai. Chale jao" I raised my hands to push him away.


"Par kyun? Maine ab aisa bhi kya kar diya ki tum mujhe bhaga rahi ho?" my ears heard a feminine voice.


And my silly mind got worried about his voice.

What happened to his voice suddenly I thought but thankfully didn't ask.



I then rubbed my eyes to clear my vision and found Vandu standing there beside me staring at me helplessly.



That made me realize that I was dreaming, dreaming about him once again unwantedly.



"Arre Vandu tum!?" I asked surprised



"Toh aur koun? Aur tu kya bak rahi thi abhi?" she asked confused.

"Nahi kuch nahi. Woh shayad koi sapna dekh liya tha" I tried to rub off.



"Kaisa sapna? Aur tu class mein kyun so rahi thi? Itni jaldi kyun aayi tu school?" she started the interrogation.



Having nothing to tell, "woh actually" came out of my mouth.

And just then the bell rang as my savior and we all went out for praying in the morning assembly.



We all stood there with our eyes closed and hands folded. We were told to pray for a good day ahead but how could one pray with a preoccupied mind.



My mind was full of his thoughts, the latest dream being the hot topic.



"Kya yeh uparwale ka ek ishaara hai mere liye? Mujhe yeh samjhane ke liye ki tum meri zindagi ka woh hissa ho jo kabhi mujhse aur meri zindagi se juda nahi ho sakte.
Kya yahi wajah hai ke...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake???"


-------------------------------To be continued-----------------------------


PS: THANKS PANKHURI

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