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Posted: 10 years ago
Di... Yeh Kisi or tangent me chala Gaya
I didn't expect it at all. I thought Raman either toh kahega I forgot u ka drama. Or will say Mai apni friend ko pehchaan Ni paya.
But he saying he loves her too is something unexpected.
Emotions Raman k dialogues me bahut thei toh it cant be fake.
But even then second shocker I dint imagine this reaction from Ishita either...
I thought she will ask him to apologize before everyone or kiss her :P

Now I have a question is Raman alive in present or gone... Who is waiting in swarg for her ;)
Prologue me ishu met Raman but that can be hallucination too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir


Hey Pankhu!

U knw wat? Ur cmnt was a huge relief for me...

I am sure u hv read the footnote of the updt...

I was seriously thinking that I hv turned this updt into a crap...

Thnx fr letting me knw it was worthy of reading...


Regarding the songs...I first plan how I want the next updt to be then I look for songs usually...
And then I try my best to fit the song into the updt...I do mk chngs here and there frm wat I had originally planned to make it go well with the song...


I will try to updt ASAP...nahi to I hv a better option...I will gv u the skeleton of the nxt updt and make u write...what say?😃


I will try to updt ASAP...nahi to I hv a better option...I will gv u the skeleton of the nxt updt and make u write...what say?😃

lol i dont mind but aapke baaki readers will be unhappy for the downfall in quality of updates 😭

even though i am more than excited
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Di... Yeh Kisi or tangent me chala Gaya
I didn't expect it at all. I thought Raman either toh kahega I forgot u ka drama. Or will say Mai apni friend ko pehchaan Ni paya.
But he saying he loves her too is something unexpected.
Emotions Raman k dialogues me bahut thei toh it cant be fake.
But even then second shocker I dint imagine this reaction from Ishita either...
I thought she will ask him to apologize before everyone or kiss her :P

Now I have a question is Raman alive in present or gone... Who is waiting in swarg for her ;)
Prologue me ishu met Raman but that can be hallucination too



Isiliye to mai hamesha kehti hun EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED😆

Raman is very much alive...Tu aur Roshnee to Raman ke peeche pad gaye ho yaar...
If u rmmbr the prologue was a dream...But Raman was completely real and totally alive
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanIsh


I will try to updt ASAP...nahi to I hv a better option...I will gv u the skeleton of the nxt updt and make u write...what say?😃

lol i dont mind but aapke baaki readers will be unhappy for the downfall in quality of updates 😭

even though i am more than excited


My readers wont be unhappy...u r an amazing writer...
If u r willing to write i wl be more than happy...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se...
mohobbat ho gyi hai aapse...
ohh meri songs ki rani...
mera aitbaar kar lo...
hum ho gaye hai aapke fan...
iss baat ko Jaan lo...
meri musibaton ko samjho...
late comment ke liye mujhko maaf kardo...

sorry for late and short comment but kya karoon, eyes ka infection and mera dushman cold mujhe abhi bhi tang kar Raha hai

ohhh...u missed jijus biggest fan??????? waah waah kya compliment mila hai. thanks di for this compliment

now back to update. this was not expected from ishita but I think she is rite. no one will believe on Raman but I am believing on him. trust me...

yaar Raman said ki tum khud ek din mere paas aaogi as u are also incomplete without me. kahin iss baat ka wait karte karte ms. iyyer Mrs. angad toh nhi ban gyi??????

bada confusion hai aur solution humko pata nhi hai. toh plz update next part jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se...
mohobbat ho gyi hai aapse...
ohh meri songs ki rani...
mera aitbaar kar lo...
hum ho gaye hai aapke fan...
iss baat ko Jaan lo...
meri musibaton ko samjho...
late comment ke liye mujhko maaf kardo...

sorry for late and short comment but kya karoon, eyes ka infection and mera dushman cold mujhe abhi bhi tang kar Raha hai

ohhh...u missed jijus biggest fan??????? waah waah kya compliment mila hai. thanks di for this compliment

now back to update. this was not expected from ishita but I think she is rite. no one will believe on Raman but I am believing on him. trust me...

yaar Raman said ki tum khud ek din mere paas aaogi as u are also incomplete without me. kahin iss baat ka wait karte karte ms. iyyer Mrs. angad toh nhi ban gyi??????

bada confusion hai aur solution humko pata nhi hai. toh plz update next part jaldi



Kaise eitbaar kar lun
Kaise intezar kar lun
Itna late comment ka mai
Kaise intezar kar lun
Kaise tujhko maafi dedo
Kaise problem teri samjhun😉
Na na na na na
Na na na na na😆


Jus kidding re...
Jiju ki biggest fan akhir tumne tym nikal hi liya Jiji keliye...
Agli baar der ki na to Jiju fan club se tumhe bedakhal kar dungi...


PS: Maine gupt sootron se kuch patha kiya hai tumhare bare me...Raaz faash hogaya hai tumhara😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir




Kaise eitbaar kar lun
Kaise intezar kar lun
Itna late comment ka mai
Kaise intezar kar lun
Kaise tujhko maafi dedo
Kaise problem teri samjhun😉
Na na na na na
Na na na na na😆


Jus kidding re...
Jiju ki biggest fan akhir tumne tym nikal hi liya Jiji keliye...
Agli baar der ki na to Jiju fan club se tumhe bedakhal kar dungi...


PS: Maine gupt sootron se kuch patha kiya hai tumhare bare me...Raaz faash hogaya hai tumhara😉

hain..??????? 😲 raaz faash hoga????? aisa kya kiya maine meri pyaari jiji????? I can't wait more. pait main dard hoga
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

hain..??????? 😲 raaz faash hoga????? aisa kya kiya maine meri pyaari jiji????? I can't wait more. pait main dard hoga



Ched rahi thi tujhe...mujhe patha chala hai ke tujhe mujhe chedne me bada maza
Ata hai
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir



Ched rahi thi tujhe...mujhe patha chala hai ke tujhe mujhe chedne me bada maza
Ata hai

ohhh...mujhe pata hai kiaapka yeh gupt sootra konsa hai. Woh gupt sotra na bada hi pyaara hai teacher Didi 😳 aur aap bhi. U both Didi's
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi All!

Surprise! This time its not a weekend treat...Its a Weekday Surprise...

Its short

But as it is said Something is better than nothing...

Here it goes...

PS: Proofread. Thanks Pankhuri😉

Part 11 (a) : Tera Rastaa Main Chodun Na


Lost in my repenting thoughts, I came back home.

Uninterested in any other thing, I silently went to my room ignoring everyone in my house.



I locked myself in my room and kept thinking about his words over and over again. One part of me wanted to believe him but my eyes just could not forget what they saw.

As much as I tried to imagine myself with Raman, I only saw RKB with Shagun.



The dusk turned into dark and darkness passed by to bring a new dawn but his thoughts resided in my mind not to leave for a second.



With puffy eyes I went to the school and tried my best to keep myself occupied with things the whole day.

I didn't even meet Simmi as she would remind me of him, unintentionally though.



My brain did divert a few times to think about him but I kept it busy with studies.


After a boring day at school, I proceeded towards the parking at the time of dispersal.



He didn't try to contact me the whole day.

He didn't do anything which would tell me about his presence around.



I am so glad he understood my words and left me to my own self, I thought while still walking towards the parking.



But no!

Just yesterday he told me to wait for the day he will steal me from the world.

He spoke all those romantic words any girl would fall for.

I myself would have fallen if I hadn't seen him with Shagun the previous day.

Then what happened today?

He gave up all his huge words in just one day?

That was his love? That was his will to wait for me?



My mind filled up with so many questions yet again.

I felt disappointed and more than disappointed I felt mislead.



What if I had trusted his words the day before?

I would have made a fool of myself once again.

I would have entered into a one-sided relationship another time.

That's what I feared the most and now I realised that's exactly why I could not bring myself to accept his proposal.

I was broken once and did not have enough courage to break again.



But why am I thinking all this?

Why his acceptance of defeat is disheartening me?

He only did what I told him to.

Why I am not at peace when everything is happening as per my commands?



Muddled in my own thoughts I reached the cycle stand to find my bicycle missing.

Not again I said irritated.



Not at the verge of crying unlike last time, I started to look for my bicycle here and there.

I kept looking around until someone tapped at my shoulder.



""Excuse me. What are you looking for?" someone asked.



"I can't find my bicycle. I had parked it here" I said preoccupied.



"Oh I see! Come I know where your cycle is. Follow me" he said.

Wait! Ye mere sath pehle bhi hua hai!

Oh wait! Is it him again?

I turned around startled.

But there was no one behind me.

Was I hallucinating? Possible!

I have been thinking about him all this time.

Paithyam Ishu! Stop thinking about him, I cursed myself.

But where is my cycle?

"There is your cycle" I saw a finger pointing into a direction.



"Woh toh RKB ki jagah hai" words came out of my mouth automatically. And with that I realized that what just happened was not my hallucination. The person who redirected me to my bicycle was not anyone else but him, RKB.



"Meri cycle yahan pe kyun hai? Tumhe to pasand nahi ke koi tumhari jagah pe apni cycle rakhe" I asked surprised on finding my bicycle in the danger zone and the danger yet being calm.



"Jab cycle ki malkin ko apne dil me jagah de di hai, to dil ki malkin ko,apni cycle ki jagah dena kounsi badi baat hai?" he replied winking.

Ayyo! Why am I having these huge butterflies in my stomach?

No Ishita! You can't give in so easily.

I felt my cheeks warming up.

I had to do something immediately to cool them down.

I knew exactly what to do and I instantly put on the mask of cold attitude.

"Tum pagal hogaye ho" I spat angrily.



"Haan...Tumhare pyar me pagal" he replied smiling deadly.

And that was enough to add on to my annoyance.



"Kyun mere peeche pade ho...aakhir tum chahte kya ho?" I asked irked.



"Jyada kuch nahi...bas pyaar ke badle pyaar" he replied keeping that deadly smile of his intact.



"Stop it please! Meherbaani karke mujhe akela chod do...band kardo mere peeche aana" I requested a little softly this time.



"Pyar kiya hai tumse, meherbani nahi. Aur agar pyar ke badle pyar maang raha hun to isme ghalat kya hai Ishita?" he responded.

Meharbaani Nahi Tumhara Pyaar Maanga Hai



"Aur mai ye achhi tarah janta hun ke tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho. Isiliye haq se maang raha hun" he added confidently.

Tumhe Manzur Hai Tabhi Toh Yaar Maanga Hai



Not having any words left to have a verbal fight with him, I tried to ignore him and move ahead to take my bicycle only to be blocked by him.



"Hat jao...Warna guard ko bulaungi" I said angrily jerking his hand which tried to cage me.



"Bula lo jise bulana hai. Mujhe kisi ka darr nahi. Jis gali jis sadak, jis shehar se tum guzrogi, mujhe har jagah aise hi khada paogi" he said maintaining the lead.

Gairon Ke Darr Se, Tere Shehar Se

Hai Kasam Rishta Todun Na



Going weak because of his believable words and knowing that I will not be able to resist anymore, I begged to him to let me go.


"No" he said while shaking his neck in refusal.

Tera Rastaa Main Chodun Na



Composing myself a little, I decided to face him and end it all for once.

"Tumhe kya lagta hai aise zabardasti karke, mera rastaa rok ke, tum mujhe haasil kar loge? Kya zabardasti hi pyar hai tumhara? Mai bhi kisse pooch rahi hun? Pyar ka matlab bhi malum hai tumhe?"



"Sahi kaha tumne. Mujhe nahi patha ke pyaar kya hai kaise hota hai kyun hota hai? Mujhe to bas itna malum hai ki pyaar ka matlab hai Ishita. Iske alawa pyaar kya hai main nahi jaanta" he replied in a soft voice this time.

Agar Yeh Hai Nahi Toh Phir Jaane Pyaar Kya Hai



"Aur mujhe mere pyaar par itna yakeen toh hai ki ek din main tumhe, tumhare yakeen aur tumhare pyaar teeno ko jeet hi lunga" he continued.

Mere Jeet Hai Tu Kise Parwaah Haar Kya Hai



"Oh no! Miss Shaali" I clamped my mouth looking behind him.

He immediately turned back to look in that direction.

Finding him distracted, I quickly mounted my bicycle and sped away.

Until he realized that Miss Shaali was nowhere around, I had disappeared.



"Aaj toh main bach gayi par yeh sab yahan nahi rukne wala. Kal maine use kitna kuch kaha par us par zara bhi asar nahi hua. Aaj phir aa hi gaya woh mere peeche. Ek din, do din, teen din...kab tak main aise bhaagti rahungi usse?" I kept questioning myself while cycling towards home.



Tring I heard and came out of my thoughts.



I turned to see who was in a hurry to ring the bell at me.



And there he was riding his bicycle just beside me.

Far yet close, separate yet together.



I looked at him angrily while he chose to wink at me and smile mischievously.

Tera Rasta Chodun Na

Chodun Na Main Tera Rastaa Chhodoon Na


-----------------------To be continued--------------------


Eagerly waiting for comments

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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