#2 New Ishra SS: Muskuraane Ki Wajah Tum Ho...(chap 17- chap 28 ) - Page 46

Originally posted by: avni_19

Simplyyy beautiful! Loveddd itt...esp the party seq n the emotional raman. Looks like raman might disclose his past to her. But ishu will help him overcome this pain.

Beautifully written.

thanks avni di for liking this part. I loved that u all liked their small moments. ya past wll be revealed soon. just wishing ki aap sab ko pasand aae

Originally posted by: sireesha76

simply superb

beautifully written

thanks dear for this beautiful comment,

Originally posted by: maanvir

Res...

remind me to unres if I dnt do it bfr Thursday ok?

Finally unres...

Special cmnt to maine pehle hi de diya hai...ab official cmnt de rahi hoon😳

Firstly thnx fr the dedication...

But mai koi shrey nahi lena chahti kyunki honestly mera koi contribution nahi raha hai tere is write up...

But its really sweet of u to credit me just because a teeny weeny part of dis chapter is inspired by my writing style...

I am honoured and thanx a lot for that...

Nw cmng to the updt...

It was a lovely updt...

Its gud to see that IshRa r shedding their inhibitions and coming closer...

Song choice was perfect...

Bt u still hv to work on incorporating the story into the lyrics...

Plz dnt mind...being ur didi i thought it was my duty to point out ur weaknesses as well...

I m too happy with the length of the updte...

End me ye kya tha?

Show me Shgun ki prominence kafi nahi thi jo tune idhr b usko ghused diya?

Just kidding😛

Sorry fr the dely in unres...

chalo message aaya. lungi dance moment for me
vaise toh yeh past mere liye bohot special hai. mujhe itna beautiful surprise milega maine assume bhi nahi kiya tha. love u both for that.
now back to update, I am happy ki u enjoyed the length. mujhe laga sab bore na ho jaae but thank you for liking thus again. are yaar aap log shaggy se dekhi mat ho. I think after knowing the reason, aap log shaayad zyada nahi kosoge usko
and u are rite, I need to learn more now. abhi koi perfection nahi hai aur seekhme ke liye mujhe padhna padega. isliye aap story likhna resume karo samjhi.
thanks for this comment again di

Originally posted by: Tc_Tc

Read both threads in one go... Very well written

Idk y but it kind of reminds me of ArShi

kya??? 2 threads in one go???? yaar badi himmat chahiye but glad u liked all parts. ArShi means Arnab and Khushi na???? actually I never watched that serial but I am glad u able to connect this story with them

Originally posted by: ayezarahmat

amazing one dear thanks for d pm ur late update is justified by d long update

thanks for liking this part dear. I am glad that u enjoyed the update. ha ha ha and yes long part is justified with the late update

Originally posted by: Nidapanjwani17

VN r u updating further yr

sorry for delay dear but will probably today

Originally posted by: anisha960

beautiful storu
loved d slow n steady progress in their relationship
each updte increases d curiosity level !!
lookng forward too read d updates
updte soon !!

thanks for your kind comments dear. I am gkad that this shirt is able to hook u all. ya ya I will update today and sorry for delay again

Originally posted by: usaonly

Awesome update I thought Ishu success in Bring Raman out of his shadow and be happy but only 2 wweks his nightmare coming back . Poor them. The party was nice and everyone happy and enjoy. Th e quality time they spend together was beautiful and their relationship was change equation now.they still not sure and confess their feeling yet and they did not cross their boundary😳but the last short was so hurt for Ishu what happen to Raman why he come home drunk and did he met with Shagun. Please continue and thank you for awesome update. Sorry for late reading and comment dear.🤗🤗

hi jum di, there is no need to be sorry di. personal works are also imp na. I am happy that u are enjoying this progress. ya her nightmare cane true only after 2 weeks. yes the party sequence was truly nice. they are still confused with the changed equation but don't worry everything will became smooth again. Sorry for delay in replies and in update. will try to update today

Originally posted by: shemimehrin

update soon

yes will update today

Originally posted by: ..Isha..

Hii Aroohi di I know I'm very late I'm so srry..
My 5 chp are pending.. me jaldi jaldi pd kr comment kronge.. 😃 iss br itta late ne hoga.. paka.. Even I didnt congo you for new thread
So congo di.. 😃 😆
Res.
I will be back soon 😛

hi Isha. are I know u have 12th and its really OK dear. u have 5 pending chap? no worries. take your time and read it. will wait for your unres. and thanks for wishes for 2nd thread