~Chaand Ke Paar Chalo~ ( Part 17 on Page 139 )

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Pankhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: mayraa
Wonderful story...
Want to read more...

thank you so much 😊

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: --abha--
WOW!!!!!! AMAZING UPDATE...
So emotional and beautifully written pankhuri...Their pain, hurt, love , desperation, anger , helplessness all can be seen...I can imagine how they felt...

He is trying to clear all the mess his mother and brother made...She is trying not to hurt her mother inturn hurting herself...

Mihika words that break up between bf and gf not soulmates...

Beautiful...They want to be with each other...and this journey to be together is what i am looking forward tooo...

Loved it...

Can't Wait for next part...
Update soonish...

that was such a cute comment Abha...i have this huge smile on my face right now...i am so glad you liked it so much

thanks a lottt for such kind words of praise...the first line where you said you could imagine all that gave me satisfaction

thanks again

i will pakka update soon 😊

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: ..Anamika129..
Res again 😛
main nahi sudherungi 😳

lolll mat sudhar 😆

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: aarohi26
res finally

👏👏👏👏👏

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
res

special love wali gun

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan
Res 😡

Unresd for 3rd part 😡

dara do bache ko 😭

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: pcnsb
Wow!!!
amazing update...!

I loved it...

Great work...!!

but I read it before you could PM me...

Still thanks for the PM.. :)

Nandini

yes i happened to be late with PMs this time...sorry

and thank you Nandini for so much praise...i am overwhelmed really

thanks a lottt 😊

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan
Unres finally 🤣 🤣
dekho chaand aaya...chaand nazar aaya 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣

Initially felt really bad for her behavior with Raman for sending out that email. I loved how he lashed out on her but in the end when she shared everything with him I felt really and for the two who loved each to other to bits. If it was any other person she wouldn't have bothered but such words from your parents really affects you a lot.

so right...parents are the most important and sometimes some wrong decisions are also required to be made for them 😭😭😭

What do I do with Mrs. Bhalla 😡. Her stupid wealth and her ego can both die together. True, If Raman had stepped in to the issue his mother would have blamed the Iyers more.

please borrow my gun and kill her... but don't forget to return after that...i need to shoot akshu too

But my favorite line was his distraught state when he sat down wilting in his sorrows.

😊😊😊...your love for that avataar for Raman Bhalla

Also ... EEEKKKSSS...!!! Their kissies ❤️ and I ended up thinking about their C all over again. Gosh blushing like crazy.

yes yes yes 😳...every time we are going to read romance now...we are going to imagine C and drool and blush and what not

It's beautiful and words are short 🤗 ❤️

aww thank you so much...big wala thank you and us se bhi bada wala hug🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 ...assume that i have kaanoon ke haath 😆😆😆

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Awww amazing update. I just want to cry..poor ishra. I loved those answers he give to his mom n romi nalayak.. hmphhh!

I hope ishra patchup yaarrr.. yeh dooriyan baardash nahi hote mujhe...

Cont soon.. loved it totally. Looking forward for their confrontation. I hope its for patchup.