~Chaand Ke Paar Chalo~ ( Part 17 on Page 139 )

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Hello hello hello

i am back with another FF/ss whatever it is called...i never understood the difference between the two thoughšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

i really hope you all like it...just too nervous to post it but will eagerly wait for the feedback

P.S. Aarohi i know you suggested me something and I promise i will work on that as well but as of now this came to my mind so please bear with me

P.S.S. Aru Di...how do i thank you for this beautiful banner...it is just beyond perfectness...it makes my story look beautiful...a mere thanks is less but still i thank you for doing this for me...lots of love to you

lots of love

-Pankhuri

Index

Part 1: Below

Part 2: Page 5

Part 3: Page 18

Part 4: Page 25

Part 5: Page 30

Part 6: Page 40

Part 7: Page 46

Part 8: Page 53

Part 9: Page 59

Part 10: Page 67

Part 11: Page 83

Part 12: Page 90

Part 13: Page 102

Part 14: Page 114

Part 15: Page 121

Part 16: Page 129

Part 17: Page 139

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Part 1:

Abke Jo Bichhden Toh Khwabon Mein Milen

Jis Tarah Sookhe Hue Phool Kitabon Mein Milen...!!!

I am sorry for doing this love but I don't see any other option. At one point of time, we had mutually decided to maintain a distance which eventually didn't happen and we conveniently backed off from our decision. What we lived in past 19 months was a beautiful journey but unfortunately it will have to be stopped. Now it is time to move back and stick to our decision.

You know it is impossible and I have decided to not make it possible at the cost of our loved ones.

I know you need me for almost everything. I too look up to you for every sensible thing I do. We are inseparable in a way but we will separate for this world. I know it is tough; for you, for me but we will have to do this.

I promise we will meet soon in another world which is free of all the negativity. "A world where nothing would matter other than love; a world where our castes, statuses, backgrounds would hold no importance"

Once we reach that world, not even a single person would be able to separate us but until then we will have to wait. We will wait for that day when our love will win-over everything and bind us into an eternal bond.

I promise to bring that day, that moment soon but till then I will be all yours and you will be mine only in our imaginary world. To this real world, we will be strangers.

-Forever Yours

Ishita

He woke up happily and checked his phone as usual only to freak out on reading an E-mail from her. He could not understand what went wrong in just one night.

They had happily met the last evening and everything was fine. Then "what made her do this" was the only question haunting his mind. He knew he would not get the answer until he met her so leaving aside his scary thoughts, he decided to get ready and catch her at their daily hangout place.

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Raman and Ishita were neighbors in a cooperative housing society in Delhi, "Akash Ganga". They had grown up watching their mothers fight over each and everything so obviously they had no friendship. They surely didn't have any hard feelings for each other but no warm feelings either. They had nothing between them. They only met across the doors twice a day; while going to school and while coming back from school. They were those two rare classmates who never ever talked to each other neither in class, nor in school bus nor anywhere else. They knew a single conversation between them could lead to a war of its own kind in Akash Ganga. There weren't any other violent and loud ladies around than their mothers, Mrs. Iyyer and Mrs. Bhalla.

Years passed and this routine continued. Though school got replaced by college but silence remained silence only between them. There was not even that little progression that they could exchange smiles.

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One fine morning when she was waiting for her bus which would take her to her medical college, he came there running. His heavy breathing gained her attention and she looked at him strangely. This was probably the first time when their eyes met this closely. He kept panting trying hard to control his breath while she kept staring him.

The vows that she was made to take on her first day of college to help anyone in need and volunteer to serve people were forcing her to ask him if he was alright but the fear of her mother was not letting her speak. Those genuine vows were more sensible than her mother's illogical reasons to not talk with Bhallas and so she decided to ask.

Ishita: Are you Ok

His ears suffered a mini heart attack or rather an ear attack suddenly hearing her voice. She had been a beautiful girl and he was attracted to her for all the right reasons all these years. But her cold behavior and his mother's disliking towards Iyyers never gave him that strength to even gaze at her.

Getting no response, she asked again.

Ishita: I asked you...is there any problem

Raman: No...i mean yes...i mean there is no problem and yes I am ok...thanks

Ishita: You were breathing heavily so

Raman: I thought I will miss the bus. I came running from the society maybe that's why

Ishita: Ok, just sit and try to calm yourself. Take deep breaths...you will feel better

Raman: Yah thanks...by the way has the bus left already

Ishita: If it did I would have not been here

Raman: Point

Ishita: You don't use the bus right

Raman: Yes I don't but Papa has been transferred to another city so I have nobody to drop me

Ishita: hmm ok. You will have to change another bus to reach your college

Raman: You know my college?

Ishita: Yes I do. Amma told me how your mother was flaunting about you getting admission in the best administration college

Raman: Your mother too showed off so much about you getting admitted to the best medical college in the city

And they both laughed together.

Ishita: There it comes...I should leave

Raman: I will be boarding the same bus Ishu

Ishita: Ishita is my name for outsiders

Raman: But I only heard everyone calling you Ishu

Ishita: Whatever I don't want miss the bus

The bus came and both boarded it together, "their first ever journey together". This is how it started and it became a habit from there.

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Ramannn, his mother shouted to bring him out of his thoughts. He hurriedly got ready and made his way out only to get irked by his mother who still thought he was a kid. She wanted him to eat but he had already lost his appetite reading that email. All he wanted to do now was to question her. He made a convincing excuse and rushed towards the bus stop leaving his sulking mother behind.

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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I am here to comment ...!!!!!!! Tell me one thing .. You will not delete this story right ? If you have other ideas let me know .. I ain't reading this 🤣

Now to the story .. The lines you have chosen in the beginning are really beautiful and if am not wrong is it the premise of the story ?? I wouldn't be surprised 😳 . Puttar ko Subah Subah Shock diya šŸ˜• .. What made her take this decision God knows .. I have too many guesses to make but wouldn't ask till you reveal. The other one was the letter in which she wrote this life we will remain as two individuals but together in our imaginary world .. Haiyee ā˜ŗļø ..!! My Divan dreams 😳

Loved their banter with each other.. So them ..! Looking forward to this new story from your side 😃

Love ya šŸ¤—
Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pankuā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
u knw why the heartsšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...

After so many days reading a story
I know last story is pending šŸ˜†šŸ˜†, will comment soon...

Anyway coming to the update...

Abke Jo Bichhden Toh Khwabon Mein Milen

Jis Tarah Sookhe Hue Phool Kitabon Mein Milen...!!!

I LOVED THIS ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Start of the story only shocking but their Love is so Pure which is visible in her words ...

* - know you need me for almost everything. I too look up to you for every sensible thing I do. We are inseparable in a way but we will separate for this world.

wow panku the lines are so touching just very well done šŸ‘šŸ‘...

*- I will be all yours and you will be mine only in our imaginary world. To this real world, we will be strangers.😭😭

The story line is unique because IshRa never spoke but reason behind it was family...

But Loved the fact IshRa are in deep loveā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Flashback was awesome coz many things was happening for the FIRST TIME, first talk, first EYE LOCK, first time calling Ishu , first laugh together, first journey , HAYEE sounds simple but lovely convo of IshRa

the two Awww and cute moments - the word mini heart attack or ear attack ā¤ļø

Raman calling Ishu ā˜ŗļø


Poor Raman, sacrificing Love for others really painfully, hope this wont happen...

but by reading ur title i feel uniqueness šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...

will be waiting next update..

well written pankušŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...

Finally commentedšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...









Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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res

unres

tune maari entriyaa...
tune maari entriyaa...
toh dil mein baji ghantiya re...
tang..tang...tang...tang... šŸ˜‰

so first of all welcome back petal Didi. I am so happy to see you back. so you kept your promise and came back with new treat. and I am so happy for that. and I told you na that I will liked the story and this concept... this concept is just wow di. you know I truly don't have any idea what u decided and I truly don't wanted to know just wanted to live this journey with you 😊

aaj na sacchi mein mere paas joke maarne ke liye kuch nahi hai because you made me thoda sa emotional 😭 as I know ki aap end mein toh happy ending hi karogi

the letter was little confusing. I was thinking ki ishita me yeh apne parents ka jhagda dekh ke kiya ya apne hi dreamworld mein soch ke bechaare ko latka gayi you know ek baar toh yeh bhi lava kahi ishita ko koi khatarnaak disease toh nahi hai? as she wrote na hum virtual works main ek doosre ke zaroor honge...

ohh!!!!!! tph chaaloo Raman is flat on ishita already and finally today got he green signal. kaash bhallaji ka transfer pehle hi ho jata šŸ˜‰

bas ab toh aao jaldi jaldi date karo aur mystery unfold karo. di aap ki first story ne aapko Goldie banaya tha now I want ki aap is story se jaldi se dazzler bann jaao. so update soon we all are waiting for next part 😊
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pankhu u r back with a bang.
Really Interesting
Nice start
Continue soon.
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Welcome back Pankhuri 😃

I'm so happy to see you back!

There's something so intriguing about this one and as always I'll be awaiting a PM to relish and pass on my reviews!

😳 I'm super excited for this one!
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~Res~
--Edited--

Pari di šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
Welcome back...
Once again you're back with a bang

Hmm... Starting from title
So unique it was
Romantic too...I could feel something like everlasting love 😳

The first two lines...

Abke Jo Bichhden Toh Khwabon Mein Milen Jis Tarah Sookhe Hue Phool Kitabon Mein
Milen...!!!...
Hats off šŸ‘

That letter 😲
What made her do that ? Family ???
But her words in letter clearly shows that she is so much in love with raman...
Those lines were beautifully penned šŸ‘

I will be all yours and you will be
mine only in our imaginary world. To this real
world, we will be strangers. 😭
Emotional hogayi main 😭

A sudden change in her in just a single night would definitely freak him out

Aww... IshRa as neighbours since childhood
The FB was so cute...
Their FIRST everything was cho chweet
eye-lock, concern, laugh , talk and journey... AWW
He called her Ishu... Guddu guddu
Looking forward eagerly for the next part
Continue soon

P.S - Do I need to mention it that I loved it because I always do love it ... But phirse
Overall , I loved it
Commendable job šŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshatha19

Pankuā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

u knw why the heartsšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...

yes i know 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

After so many days reading a story
I know last story is pending šŸ˜†šŸ˜†, will comment soon...

no problem...if you dont read i will use my gun 🤣🤣🤣

Anyway coming to the update...

Abke Jo Bichhden Toh Khwabon Mein Milen

Jis Tarah Sookhe Hue Phool Kitabon Mein Milen...!!!

I LOVED THIS ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

awww thank you thank you thank you 😳😳

Start of the story only shocking but their Love is so Pure which is visible in her words ...

* - know you need me for almost everything. I too look up to you for every sensible thing I do. We are inseparable in a way but we will separate for this world.

wow panku the lines are so touching just very well done šŸ‘šŸ‘...


this is why i wait for your comments...you compliment for each and every line which makes me torture my mind and come up with more and more lines😊😊

*- I will be all yours and you will be mine only in our imaginary world. To this real world, we will be strangers.😭😭

The story line is unique because IshRa never spoke but reason behind it was family...

But Loved the fact IshRa are in deep loveā¤ļøā¤ļø

i can just say wait and watch...though your guess in right in a way

Flashback was awesome coz many things was happening for the FIRST TIME, first talk, first EYE LOCK, first time calling Ishu , first laugh together, first journey , HAYEE sounds simple but lovely convo of IshRa

the two Awww and cute moments - the word mini heart attack or ear attack ā¤ļø

Raman calling Ishu ā˜ŗļø

hehehhe thank you so much akshu...so happy to know you liked it

Poor Raman, sacrificing Love for others really painfully, hope this wont happen...

but by reading ur title i feel uniqueness šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...


ofcourse...you know i am so against separation and stuff...i like happy happy things so dont worry...nothing serious...as the title suggests it is a romantic one only 😳😳😳

will be waiting next update..

well written pankušŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...

Finally commentedšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...


akshu šŸ‘ for you for finally commenting 🤣🤣🤣🤣

but so good to see you back...now dont run and read this one on time atleast šŸ˜†









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Originally posted by: aarohi26

res

unres

tune maari entriyaa...
tune maari entriyaa...
toh dil mein baji ghantiya re...
tang..tang...tang...tang... šŸ˜‰

haaye haaye...me sharmaying now 😳 itna grand welcome 😳


so first of all welcome back petal Didi. I am so happy to see you back. so you kept your promise and came back with new treat. and I am so happy for that. and I told you na that I will liked the story and this concept... this concept is just wow di. you know I truly don't have any idea what u decided and I truly don't wanted to know just wanted to live this journey with you 😊

awww thank you so much Aarohi...u know actually your emails kept my spirits high and i came back so early warna you know how lazy i am 🤣🤣...but i truly owe it to you...it was your constant emails that made me write so fastšŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

aaj na sacchi mein mere paas joke maarne ke liye kuch nahi hai because you made me thoda sa emotional 😭 as I know ki aap end mein toh happy ending hi karogi

aww so sorry but dont worry...it is not at all a sad story...full toos romantic hai shuru toh hone de...keep some patience šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

the letter was little confusing. I was thinking ki ishita me yeh apne parents ka jhagda dekh ke kiya ya apne hi dreamworld mein soch ke bechaare ko latka gayi you know ek baar toh yeh bhi lava kahi ishita ko koi khatarnaak disease toh nahi hai? as she wrote na hum virtual works main ek doosre ke zaroor honge...

hehhehehh just wait wait and wait

ohh!!!!!! tph chaaloo Raman is flat on ishita already and finally today got he green signal. kaash bhallaji ka transfer pehle hi ho jata šŸ˜‰

lolll tu toh bas transfer karwa de šŸ˜†...abhi toh story shuru hui hai

bas ab toh aao jaldi jaldi date karo aur mystery unfold karo. di aap ki first story ne aapko Goldie banaya tha now I want ki aap is story se jaldi se dazzler bann jaao. so update soon we all are waiting for next part 😊

awww that so sweet of you...i too hope so...and first story will always be special for all the reasons be it getting so many friends so much love so much praise and ofcourse the goldie status 😊

will update soon

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