~Chaand Ke Paar Chalo~ ( Part 17 on Page 139 ) - Page 19

Originally posted by: sulochana90

wonderful update

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

pankuri di!

wht do i say about it!

I'm speechless

i read the whole thing in one go and am in love with it!

u r amazing!!!

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Wonderful.

Emotional Update..

I m loving it

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

I don't know what it is: your powerful writing or my strong love for my dearies, cuties, hotties IshRa but I'm feeling so emotional! For the first time in my life; a story... on IF has moved me so much!

I can't even think of IshRa being separated from each other and then I happen to read this update... I'm overwhelmed with emotion...!!

After the Happy Union of IshRa and them becoming Do Jism Ek Jaan... I've grown to love them even more! It feels like a new beginning and I'm thrilled!

Sorry Pankhuri; I got carried away...

why do you have so be sorry Umeirah... i know what Ishra does to us so it is really ok but those words again said so much...i won't thank you as promised last time so here you go...i love you 1

This particular part is my personal favourite:

"Mihika: Are you out of your mind...break up girlfriend boyfriend ka hota hai soul mates ka nahi..."

IshRa are more than just lovers... the truth is... they are meant to be! Nobody and Nothing in this wide world can separate them!

so true...not praising myself but that is my fav too...they are truly inseparable

I noticed a few grammatical errors (no I am NOT criticizing you in fact i made a connotation from that)

aahhh finally you have something to say...even if you were criticizing i would not mind...i dont call you my critic just for name...you have to prove it...can you please help me with the errors...last night it was posted raw but now i read it twice...found one error which i corrected but please point out others so that i can edit...you know i like it perfect

... I felt your love, your passion for love and the fear of going through with separation from the one person you love so deeply!

somewhat right...we all have that fear...there is nothing more painful than the loss of loved ones so yah when you sit to pen down such things all those emotions overflow...i love you 2

I'm sorry if I sounded all over the place! My thoughts are not coherent thus this reply... The C Night, Morning After & now This update have me in a Hangover and I really don't want to get over it!

you were nowhere illogical or non-coherent...it was all sensible as always...as for C-night hangover i am sure we are never coming out of it and moreover we don't want to come out...this update was more than half penned down before C-night...if it wasn't i am sure i would have not been able to write it atleast for a month or so 😆😆😆

Absolutely beautiful and I loved it how Romi added fuel to the fire.. He angered me but I enjoyed his portions as well! Though, it was short... but I loved it all the same!

awww i love you 3 i love you 4 and i love you 5...which basically means i am really thankful...i will try to make it longer next time...i had to stop there bcoz otherwise it would have been too long...Romi toh 😛😛😛

P.S. When it comes to IshRa; I can go on... all day long!

we all can do that 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: nafnaf

I am so loving this please update soon - I cannot wait

Originally posted by: amenaquadri1

Too sad but plz dont separate them , bring them back together soon next update plz soon