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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu




Yaar gaya3 ka koi bharosa nahi it she likes the twist she might actually use it😕oteri yeh mane kya kiya i should have pm ed u shit!!!!!! But abb jo hoga so hoga

But hum bhi kise se kam nai

App ka song super perfect tha but right now in this situation this is the song

Aaa dheke zara kis mai kitna hai dum
jam ke rakna kadam mare sathiyaaa



Yeah... Aatma... What have you spoken..???

Mjhe keh rhe the.. But khud hi ne bol diya... 😆

Vaise I like this twist yours...

Might be Gayu dii uses this twist... Btw... Let it me...

Twist padne mnaza aaega...

Ohh Yes... This song suits the suitation... 😉

Hmare quotes pad ke Gayu dii toh confuse ho gyi hongi!!!

But she is the twist queen... Can do anything re...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu


Hwww sush i only took my revange i also dint get update from u 😉 so it is all fair 😆 phele thu kud ja us mai and i will prefer a swiming pool insted of it 😆

baap re jaa mar tu... i hate u so much grrr
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt



baap re jaa mar tu... i hate u so much grrr



Not possible darling abb dosti ki tho nibhana bhi tho padega how can i die without killing

And even if u hate me i love u 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Girls you two rock
That's what I have to say
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Girls you two rock
That's what I have to say


Thank u thank u 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties 😊
Not proofread
So ignore errors


PART-13


MIHIR ON CALL

Only Mihir's part of the conversation


"Hello...it's urgent Raman..."

"You need to go"

"Kullu Manali...it's a pleasant place..."

"Go and enjoy...I've some project works..."

"I can't waste my money yaar...I wanted to take Miku with me...but can't."

"You take that Ishita Iyer with you...or may be Shagun...as you wish"

"Sure...she told me she loves that place"

"I'll take care of Miku."

"Take care...bye"


Raman to Ishita: "Is it some trap?"

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Mihika opened the door to see Mihir standing on the doorway with a flower bouquet in his hands. Like a real gentleman he gave her the red roses saying "I love you Miku". When she received the flowers of love from him he took her in an embrace. She mumbled a light "I love you Mihir" against his heart.


She was gritting back her anger. She wanted to shout at him. She has this much hatred towards him for whatever he had done that strangling him in that embrace was a better option. How can he be so low ! How much is Raman and Ishita going through because of him and his brother.


Her heartbeat raised thinking about the past. A kind of fear overpowered her anger. She wanted to run away from him. Far from this madness. She clutched tightly on his shirt making him alert that she is tensed. She asked him in a dangerously low voice, "You should tell me everything now Mihir...I need to know it. Kyun maara dha Nishu akka ko?"

(Why did you kill Nishu akka?)


He didn't lashed out at her but parted from her to face her. Her face reddened with fury. But his...his was normal. He was not shocked. Nor did he was scared. But was cared. He made her sit on the sofa.


Mihir: "I know...tujhe sab kuch pata hai. But Miku...you had hidden it from Ishita and Raman for this past five years. So what happened now?"

(You know everything)


Mihika: "I don't believe you now and I feel it...is wrong...it is not safe now."


Mihir: "Kya hua?"

(What happened?)


Mihika: "Voh...Raman and Ishita..."

(That Raman and Ishita...)


*SHOT*

*SILENCE*


Mihika looked at Mihir with her popped out eyes. She tried to clutch on her ridge tightly when the bullet pierced through her flesh and bone making it difficult for her to breath.


He looked at her miserably. His eyes conveyed how shocked and shattered he is. She touched his cheeks with her hand which was soaked up in blood. Mihir couldn't hold it anymore. He jumped out of the sofa where both of them were sat; her back facing the front door. He ran towards the man standing there with a pointed gun.


Mihir: On top of his voice, "Apne yeh acha nahin kiya bhai...Ap mere Miku ke saath aise kaise kar sakte ho? You know how much I love her..."

(You did wrong. How could you do this to my Miku?)


Guru: Laughing evilly, "Arey...cool down chote... relax. Tujhe toh mujhse chillane ka hakh bh nahin hai. Poocho kyun?" (Poking his chest with the gun) "Tum mujhse chupaya...ki is ladki ko sab kuch pata hai...! Kya matlab hai is sab ka? Agir tum kiske favour pe ho? Mera yaa us Raman Bhalla ka? Mujhe yeh jaanna hai varna tum is ladki ko yahan se hospital nahin le jaa sakta."

(You don't have the right to shout at me. Ask me why? You hide from me that this girl knows everything. What all these mean? Whom you're favouring? Me or RKB? I want to know it else you can't take her to hospital)


Mihir cried out loud feeling helpless. He hugged his bhai's feet asking him to show some humanity towards the dying soul: went futile.


"I never wanted to cheat you bhai. But...you...were wrong."


Guru: "Toh tum bhi mera dushman nikla...? You're the one who never let me reach out to Ishita"

(So you're my enemy)


Mihir: Angrily, "Ap ho sab ke dushman. Mera bhi. Ap mere step brother hokar bhi mein apse itna pyar kiya. Lekin ap mujhe blackmail karke Nishu akka ko murder karvaya. Sab kuch kiya hai nah main...! Toh mujhe meri maa vapas doh...where are you keeping her all these years? Is she alive or not? OK...let that aside. Now Miku is my priority. Let me take her to the hospital. Let me go away from you"

(You're everyone's enemy. Mine too. I loved you so much even after knowing that you're my step brother. But you blackmailed me to murder Nishu akka. I'very done everything ! So give me my mother back.)


Guru: "Well then...ek aaghiri question."

(One last question)


Mihir: Wiping his tears, "Haan...poochiye?"

(Ask me?)


Guru: "Ab kahan chupaya hai Raman ko?"

(Now where have you hidden Raman)


Mihir: "That's none of your business. Ap Raman tak kabhi nahin pahunch sakta. It was in our agreement that you will never ask me about his whereabouts!"

(You can't reach to Raman)


Guru: "Agreements todna bhi badi mazevali cheez hai bhai..."

(It's fun breaking promises)


*SHOT*

*SILENCE*


TO BE CONTINUED BY ASHA


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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It is not a much anticipated twist but I like it 😉 r we playing dead alve and dead game 😆 or should I call it punar Janam game 😉
Wow I like this one will be fun to continue 😆( my evil has popped out now wait and watch manali 😉)
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res...
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Unres...

You made mihir positive again...so he killed nishita and mihir is the one who hide ishra from guru bhai...
Kya ho raha h...pehle sab hi negative the ab sab positive h...

Chalo let see...guru bhai kaise dhunte h ishra ko...or mihir mihika ko kaise bachataa h...

Best of luck asha...
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Gaya,


What is this haan, happy to know that Mihir is good but y is mihika shot. I love Mihir and mihika pair,at least in stories,felt they will be together, now that is not going happen is it? Did guru shoot Mihir is it? Cant bear the sadness and as well as suspense. Asha please update the next one asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago


O wow see gaya3 ur cat is hear to drink the milk 😉 😆

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