#3 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Note on 24, Epiogue on 26) - Page 24

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Res

Wil unres tmrw mrng

I dint rply on last part n epilogue wil do it tmrw definitely

Pakka wala promise

I m free now so apna wada nibhaungi

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Res

Wil unres tmrw mrng

I dint rply on last part n epilogue wil do it tmrw definitely

Pakka wala promise

I m free now so apna wada nibhaungi

Finally unres

This one is for last part epilogue ka dusra post banadungi

Yeh reply likhne ke liye maine poora update phirse pada n then i realised a thing

Aap ke paas ek bahut hi hatke quality hai

Jaise hi padna shuru karti hu mere chehre pe ek muskan aa jati hai unknowingly bt undoubtedly

Aapki updates padte mai hasti hu blush karti hu chidti hu gussa hojati hu suspense pe finally ro bhi deti hu

Is tarah ek complete pack ki updates dene har kisi ki bas ki baat nahi hai

Ek alag hi talent jaarori hain n aap mein yeh talent bhar bharke hai ek alag hi hatke type ki writer ho aap

Kabhi yeh nahi lagne dete ho readers ko ki yaar yeh aisa kyum hai

Kaash aisa bola hota aisa kiya hota

Arey ishita ne yeh kya karli raman ne aisa kyu bola

Kabhi kabhi bhi aisa nahi lagta kyumki har ek line itne prefect jote hai ke jitna bhi soche is se acha kuch lagta hi nahi

I love u so much dii for evrythng n i feel so blessed ki mai aapki stories pad sakti hu

AB UPDATE KI BAARI

Firstly pata nahi kitne baar pad chuki hu mai is part ko

Sab kuch tha is mein comedy tha romance tha woh ishra ka trademark nokjhok tha jkr raavan sab kuch tha

Mujhe kuch shabd hi nahi mil rahe hai ki kya kahu

Itne dinom baad aaj phir pada phir bhi woh aage kya hota hai kya bolte hai yeh anxiety kam hi nahi hui

Ek power packed update hai yeh

N ishita ne toh kiss kar di wah wah yeh hui na jkr ka hak jatane wale roop

N raman itna toh samaj jana chahiye tha beta ki biwi tadap rahi hai aapke liye aur ek aap hai...

I really liked ramans probing n ishitas shyness following jkr roop

Lekin yeh kya tha?????censor laga diya!!!!!!!!dhakel diya na hame bahar ...

Yeh bhi nahi socha ki bechare readers kabse iska wait kar rahe hai lekin nahi ishita mamko toh hamari khushi pati patni ka bedroom mein jagna lag raha hai

Chalo teeke yeh baat bhi sahi hai

Hum bhi maan lete hai

Sach mein di rula diya aapne end karke story ko

Meri toh aadat pad gayi char kadam ki

Bt evry gud thng ends n so this is

I would just say this story cud nt hav a best ending than this

Thank u for this wonderful piece which wil b doat closest one to my heart kyunki yeh forum pe pehli story hai jp mere dil ko is tarah chu liya

Love u dii

Bahut bakbak kar li maine sowieee

I hope yeh long rply yeh vry long delay ka saza thoda kam karde

Originally posted by: maanvir

Aww aarti...

Tune to mujhe emotional kar diya...

U compelled me to go back to the ck days and especially the day wen i penned dis last part...

It was very emotional moment for me...

CK vl alwys be the closest to my heart of all my works bcz its ck dat gv me recognition & hundreds of frnds in the form of my readers...

I wsable to recognise my potentials thru dis...

Ck is nt just a story bt hs been a journey...

U hv said a lot & i cn say nthng bt thnks...

I am just overwhelmed & short of words...

Thnk u...thnx a lot for all the compliments...

Thnx a lot fr loving me & my work...

Thnx a lot fr supporting me throughout

N SPCL THNKS FR FULFILLING MY WISH OF REACHING THREAD 3...

LOTS OF LOVE

PS: READ THE SPCL NOTE ON PG 24

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

EPILOGUE

yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki jo char kadam kal shuru hua woh aaj epilogue tak pahunch gayi

Aur is khubsoorat safar ka ek choti si meeti si break mil raha hai

I think thats a better idea

Is break mein apki story ke liye craving bad jayegi aur phir toh aapki wapsi pe is mohalle meim jashn hi kuch aur hai

Now coming to update

Acha hai finally ajnabi ko thoda sa screen space toh mila aur uske saat saat uski jeevan ko lift dene wali jeevika bhi

I m happy for him

N ishra ne ek saal poori kardi apni shadi ka awww my babies kitne khush hai

Preggy ishu toh raman ki waat laga rahi hai

Bechara raman jo subah subah ishita ishita chillata tha ab kya ho gaya iska

Waise acha hai biwi ko pamper karlo aur jyada

Aapki jindagi ka sabse anmol gift jo dene wali hai

N i m so happy di ki aapne ek sequel socha

Thanku so much

Ab aur intizaar nahi hota waiting for the preggy wife ishita ka story bt epilogue ne bhi rula diya

Yeh sochke ki char kadam naam pe yeh aakhri update hoga

Sorry for short rply par bahut neend aa rahi hai par apna wada nibhana chahti thi

Aaj maa ne mera poora kamre saaf karwake waat laga di meri

Gud nite di waiting for charkadam wala manu di with a sequel

Sorry di type karte karte so gayi haha

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Hey Maanvir,

Hey nandini! Welcome to the CK gang...

The story was awesome dear...

Bahout hatke...!!

Thanks...

I read all the parts in 4 days...it was intriguing and interesting...!!

Oh my! U did really? 68 parts in 4 days! 👏

Ishita and her ajnaabi ke char kadam were amazing... sumthing very different..!

I loved the way you used the song with scenes... it is beautiful song indeed..!!

Thanks a lot...

I bit confusing in middle... 😕yaar Raman aur Anjabi ke chakkar mein tumne humara aur ishita kya bahout dimaag khrab kiya...!😆

IKR...bt confusion ki wajah se hi story hit hui thi...

Finally ishita is realizing her feelings... addition of song from Kal Ho Na Ho...was very apt..

the way they celebrated valentine's day was cute... ek doosre ke liye gaana gaaya..😳

the way you described the inner turmoil of Raman and Ishita was spenldid..

Thanks again...

Aww... Raman is such a sweet soul... I mean Ishita ke liye apni khushiyon ki kurbaani...!

Le aaya Raman ishu ka ajnabi... ajnabi is Viren... nice..😊

Ohho.. jyaada daani nahi bante beta, padd gaya na thapad...! very good ishu...

Ye to hona hi tha...jkr ko jagana zaruri tha...

Lekin ajnaabi ka dil toot gaya... I felt for him when he quoted, "Abb toh main tumhaare liye ajnaabi bhi nahi raha..!" 😭

Ab kya karein kisi na kisi ka dil to tootna hi tha...

Finally shaadi ho gayi...Le ishu first night mein so gayi...Kuch nahi ho sakta iss ladki ka..!

kaash raman jaisa pati har ladki ko mile... yaar kapde bhi select kiye hue hai...!<3<3

oye hoye... kya baat hai puttar ke toh maze aa gaye...

Kiss bhi mil gayi aur baaki sab bhi ho gaya...

Epilogue was nice...😳

Happy ending...

Nandini

Thnk u...

PS: I would love to get PM of ur other stories..

The link to my works can be found in my signature...

I hv sent u a pm on my ongoing FF...

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Finally I got to read ur chaar kadam..
long back I have saved it in my bookmarks owing to my never ending exams...but when I started reading it...leta say yesterday night...I couldn't help but read it one go..
which took me almost half of the night and half of my day...and I don't regret it...it was worth it...I actually regretted the tym I wasn't able to read that tym and comment on each n every part...Sorry for that..
well coming to the story...it is one of the best story I have read...dude u r an amazing writer...I m loving ur story to no end...
it was a roller coaster ride of emotions... I can't help but smile cry in various parts...but in the end...I was just smiling like an idiot...I iwe u a big apology...seriously... will contact u through pm..:)