#3 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Note on 24, Epiogue on 26) - Page 23

Originally posted by: maanvir

Honestly! I cant explain hw it feels to b back...
I hv many plots on my mind...
Vl soon pen down...

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Complete reading it...

Its like ye chalta hi jaye aur hum padhte hi jaye...

You have some uniqueness about your stories not only as per the concept but as per the presentation...how you present your story to your readers... I'm a big fan of your stories.

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Superbly amazing...

(I haven't read this thread yet...this comment is for the first 64 chapters)

Firstly I wnna say that I never ever had read a story of 64 chapters seriously and still there are more to go.

I was just surfing the forum when I found it and started to read, it took me 2 days and night to complete. Jitne khulase iss story m dekhne ko mile utne to koi detective series m bhi ni honge.

Hahaha...Likhne chali thi love story...ban gayi thriller😆

Initially u said that ur obsessed with the song char kadam, honestly I never liked that song so much I just start reading this story because of my liking towards YHM and ishita raman. I have more liking towards the stories which are full of suspence and flashbacks rather than love stories. And seriously now I don't regret my decision of reading it.

I really liked ( or I should say loved) the starting...that char kadam song, it looked beautiful to that situation and I now I declare that im in love with the song. Whole night after reading I listened to the song again and again but mann nahi bhara...

Pehle bhi kisine aisa hi bola tha...mujhe usi waqt Char Kadam song ke copyrights khareed lene chahye the...kafi kamayi ho jati meri😉

Firstly I thought it is a simple love story where two strangers meet, fall in love, get married and happy ending. I would have never liked that. But this is something different.

Well iske liye tumhe Roshnee ko thanks kehna padega...uski ek cmnt ke wajah se maine poori storyline hi badal daali...

Gradually I came to know that the story has a lot more to do rather than just being a love story. This story is of another level, lots and lots of emotions, confusions and then ans to the same, different POVs, very much like suspense story, maintained curiosity till last (thats the main thing I stick to the story).

Thanks a lot

That char kadam wala part in the beginning which has ishita's POV is my fav where u describe all her antiques...how she feels being with ajnabi, giving him marks plus 1 minus 1...keep the appointment with psychiatrist...no no cancel that...again keep it...😆

Cool or fool? That literally cracked me up. It was so delightful to read that section.

Your ending of each update with the self asked ques... Did I just said that? Did he just said that? This is so different of you as a writer. You write in a so different way (I couldn't find a right word how I feel about this thing...bhawnao ko samjho, shabdo ko maro goli...lol).

That was just out of blue...initially it somehow ended with Did he just say that...Later I realised that this could be the best way to maintain suspense...I never realised readers would like it so much...Thanks

Reading of that manual script wala part is my 2nd most fav. As curious reader I thought ajnabi and raman are one ( as many of your reader might have thought) but dheere dheere I came to know both are different. But again I was curious that how come he knows the exact feelings of ajnabi? Mere detective dimag ne fir se conclusion nikala as they both have met with accident. It quite be possible that may be ajnabi is dead and raman survived in the accident and he might have his heart transplant or any other transplant due to which raman got his memories and feelings ( I know this is something really stupid to think. I have seen such a thing in a tv show long back so got an idea about it...silly me...I laughed on myself upon this) but again meri conclusion par pani fir gaya. I decided to let go all the ideas of my detective dimag and said to myself just go with the flow...

It is true expectations alwsys leeds to disappointments. Your expect the unexpected funda... coincidentally I have heard it from one of my professors at my institute and it is still in my memories.

Oh dats a co-incidence...one of my professors had said that and I still rmmbr it...dats hw I ended up quoting it...

Well I have no words do describe how I feel throughout reading this story

Believe me I have never ever given such a long comments to any ff/ss/os or whatever it is.

That itself is a huge compliment...thanks a lot lot lot

You are a beautiful writer and its indeed a heart touching story...keep the good work...all the best...

**I'll comment again after reading this thread**😆😆

Originally posted by: maanvir

PS: Sorry for the late reply...

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

No problem. ..don't be sorry...

you are an amazing writer and you deserve all these complements...

and actually m amazed at myself too for writing such a big comment cause they're not more than just a word ever..nice..beautiful. ..awesome. ..lovely...not more than this...

And my name is mudrika, angel is my username

Originally posted by: 9900

Lovely story maanvir 😃

The story was so confusing that I thought I would go mad😆

Once you seem like you clear the confusions then again you make it even more confusing😆

Till the middle of the 2nd thread it was sooo full of confusion but afterwards it was awesome 😃

Superb writing😃

Loved it loads 😃