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Posted: 10 years ago
Once again me first 😉
Commish to the update if was fab as expected actually that love and marriage I think precap mai he is asking advice to some one on net 😆
😉I am I right or I am I right 😉
Ofo when the our lust Kumar become. Desperate Kumar and now lurking to become love Kumar 😆
But actually he is not Raman bhalla he is mr bhuddu bhalla 😆
Some one take him to a love dr or even better dr ishita to tell him he is already in love 😉
Abb kya kare Raman phas gaya payar ke chakra mai 😆
Tch tch. My poor poor Casanova Kumar abb banega mr patni vratha. Pati. Kumar 😆

Ishita pagi tusi thoop ho hum sab di hope ho 😉

Super update continue soon advance mai thanks for pm which I will get as soon as I finish commenting 😆
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 7 is nice but the way raman force her was 'not good feel sad for ishu the way she cry n shiut in wasjroim was emo the wah he was beung jealous was too n i love how she ans him back too
sorry for late comment

part 8

super i love this part ishu choose abi
n why he kiss her

ishu dont like abi touch or kiss but for raman it was differnt the way she talk n ask to marry her was good too

sorry like buton is nit good
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Posted: 10 years ago
haha love this part a lot

what will he do n the trio too specialy ishu as she got the game in her hand now

mani kiss her I love mani but not for ishu


the way she said she love mani n him argue with mani for loving ishita n cant love laxmi was too.good


mani clear told her he just want to bed with her was nice too

I have a guts telling me ishu love raman but just because of his flirt way n jerk she is rejecting him

now it will be fun to see what will happen next
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow superb update
raman ko sidha karne ke
liye ishita ka plan
but I don't like jab ishita
ne bola that she love's mani
n hate that hope raman fall for ishita
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it dear bt am unable to take raman's character in dis way... Plzz do something...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab... Amazing. ..
The story is too good gayatri...
wanna see how RKB will start loving ishu oops laxmi
please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm DEAL...
ONE DEAL FOR RAMAN ;-);-)
OTHER DEAL FOR ISHITA;-);-)

coming to point...
ISHITA POV:
she want to show that JERK BHALLA THAT HE CANNOT HAVE ME;-);-)
i wanted to show him that i dnt want him but someone else..so she dailed abhi no.and invited him for a date with her:->:->:->:->

ishita knows mani since 6 years..for ishita abhi is a GENTLEMAN &RAMAN IS A COWARD...HAYYE TUM RAMAN KO COWARD KUMAR BANADIYA:-O:-O:-O:-O

BETI TUM SHOW OFF KARNE KELIYE ABHI KO DATE PER BULALIYA:-D:-D:-D:-DJUST U WANT TO SHOW RAMAN:-D:-D

COWARD & LUST KUMAR AFFECTING U SO MUCH BUDDHU RANI:-D:-D:-D

the two men in ishita life,one is gentle like" BREEZE AND OTHER NOT LESS THAN A CYCLONE".;-);-);-);-)

YEH CYCLONE KUMAR IS VERY DANGERS BABY ..CYCLONE BAR BAR NAHI ATHA...JABHI ATHA HAI KUCH TOOFHAN KADA KAR DETHA HAI...B-)B-):-P:-P:-P

when ishita entered in party venue...lust kumar LATOO HOGAYA...:-*:-*
WHY DID HE STARE LIKE THAT ..FOR A MOMENT..I THOUGHT I'M NAKED...:-O:-O:-O:-O

AYYO...YEH KYA BAK RAHA HAI..TUM ISKO DIKANE KELIYE READY HUWANA ...SO PROBLEM KYA HAI..:-P:-P:-P:-P

when mani touching ishita ..she compare the difference between TWO MENS IN HER LIFE..:-O:-O:-O:-O
SHE FEEL.. MANI CLOSENESS IS LIKE SOME INSECTS ARE TOUCHING HER...:-D:-D:-D

So mani is a MIX OF COCKROACH &SNAKE FOR ISHITA:-D:-D:-D:-D

LUST KUMAR IS GREEK GOD TO ISHITA..
raman never made her feel disgusted by his touch,BUT WORDS...SO MADAM KO TOUCH SE PROBLEM NAHI..:-PWORDS SE PROBLEM:-P:-P
she never felt this disgusted by raman touch...
Chee...THIS MANI...CHEE:->:->
UMM...THIS RAMAN...UMM:-O:-O:-O
ishita in deep thoughts to justify her body respond..;-)

"WHY MY BIOLOGY DOESN'T WORK WITH MANI..."?
ISS MAI POOCH NAI WALI BATH KYA HAI;-)
TUMARA BACHO KA BIOLOGICAL BAAP HAI VO...BIOLOGICAL KUMAR :-P:-P:-P

OUR BIOLOGICAL KUMAR IS VERY INTELLIGENT IN BIOLOGY:-P:-P:-P;-);-)

after mihika fall,raman leave venue..the trio met and raman blust the bomb on mani...

So ,now ishita want to PLAY A GAME WITH RAMAN;-);-);-)

THOUGHTFUL LINES:
she cannot let him win so easily...and IT CLEARLY MEANS THAT SOME WHERE DEEP INSIDE I WANT HIM TO WIN:-)

HMM I KNOW ISHITA LOVES RAMAN..THIS GAME IS NOT FOR HIM..THIS GAME IS A TEST FOR HER LOVE TOWARDS HIM:-P:-P:-O:-O

raman is frustrated ..he just want to know how she reject him...
YOU CANT DO THAT...NO WOMEN CAN REJECT RKB..:-O
:-O:-OKYU BHAI TUM BHAGWAN HO KYA?
Ishita give good fight to him..yes she is exception:-)
RAMAN JUST WANT HER TO SATISFY HIS MANHOOD..THATS IT ..HE IS VERY CLEAR ABOUT WHAT HE WANT FROM HER;-);-);-)

raman grip on her loosened..while mihika and mani's eyes popped.but,when they were about to talk.ISHITA SHOWED HER PLAM TO STOP THEM...:-P:-PDONT ENTERFER IN HUSBAND AND WIFE TALKS;-);-)
raman not changing his words and mind..he behaving like a CHILD..AND ISHITA IS HIS ONLY DOLL TO PLAY in his Whole lifeB-)B-)B-)

ishita confront with a deal with raman...
INTERESTING CONVERSATION:
I'LL DO ANYTHING TO HAVE U?
ANYTHING?
I CAN DO ANYTHING
NO U CAN'T
I SAID I CAN..
I:"U SHOULD LOVE ME&THEN MARRY ME TO HAVE ME BEFORE U LEAVE"
R:ARE U KIDDING ME

HMM..YEH BATH THO SAHI HAI..ISSE ACHA THO TUM BHAGWAN SE PRARDHANA KARLETHE ,WO PRATHYAKSH HOTHA HAI:-P:-P:-P:-)
at last raman convinced with the deal and ask another question to ishita...
R:let me know one thing..what will u do if i...it's not possible but i just...?:->
KYA CONFIDENCE HAI BHAI KUD KA LUST PAR:-P:-P:-P

hmm ishita will marry the ONE WHOM SHE LOVE AND MARRY HIM:-O:-O:-O

AFTER RAMAN LEFT:
mihika and mani shooted ishita with their doubts and open QUESTION BANK FOR HER ANSWERS:-D:-D:-D

SO ishita self-esteen ke liye yea sab kuch kar raha hai...I NEVER EVER AGREE THIS..

atleast mani and mihika choose to tell truth to mr.bhalla

But madam stop them..AREY KYU YEA MANI..MIHIKA TRYING TO STOP THEIR CHILD GAME;-);-);-)B-)B-)B-)

ISS GAME KE CHAKAR MAI RAMAN KE JAGHA ISHITA CHANGE HO KAR LUST KUMARI BAN GAYATHO:-P:-P:-P:-P

MANI split the truth about raman..yes raman want to bed with ishita.. raman cannot be a lover boy.
Raman is untameable in this matter.:-O:-O:-O:-O

RAMAN KO CHODO MANI..ATLEAST HE SEE PRIVACY PLACE TO DO ALL THINGS;-);-);-)
NOT LIKE U...WHAT U R DOING WITH ISHITA in public place;->U KISSED HER SHOULDER;->;->;->

AUTHOR SAIBA IS THIS LINES FOR ME?
I:no miku..now the ball is in My court.I GOT A CHANCE TO MAKE THE RKB DANCE IN MY TUNES.I WON'T GIVE UP THIS CHANCE;-);-);-).

PRECAP..WAITING TO REVEAL IN NEXT UPDATE

SO READERS READY FOR THE MATCH B/W BUDDHU RANI V/S LUST KUMAR:-P:-P:-P

LOVE V/S LUST:-P:-P:-P:-P


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Once again me first😉

Commish to the update if was fab as expected actually that love and marriage I think precap mai he is asking advice to some one on net😆
😉I am I right or I am I right😉
Ofo when the our lust Kumar become. Desperate Kumar and now lurking to become love Kumar😆
But actually he is not Raman bhalla he is mr bhuddu bhalla😆
Some one take him to a love dr or even better dr ishita to tell him he is already in love😉
Abb kya kare Raman phas gaya payar ke chakra mai😆
Tch tch. My poor poor Casanova Kumar abb banega mr patni vratha. Pati. Kumar 😆

Ishita pagi tusi thoop ho hum sab di hope ho😉

Super update continue soon advance mai thanks for pm which I will get as soon as I finish commenting😆


Yeah...
RKB is gonna ask Google papa for advice 😉
Are you making fun of my situation 😡
I slept while updating 😭
So PMs came late 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

part 7 is nice but the way raman force her was 'not good feel sad for ishu the way she cry n shiut in wasjroim was emo the wah he was beung jealous was too n i love how she ans him back too
sorry for late comment

part 8

super i love this part ishu choose abi
n why he kiss her

ishu dont like abi touch or kiss but for raman it was differnt the way she talk n ask to marry her was good too

sorry like buton is nit good


I know Forceful Kumar is intolerable
Thanks for the comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty_h

haha love this part a lot

what will he do n the trio too specialy ishu as she got the game in her hand now

mani kiss her I love mani but not for ishu


the way she said she love mani n him argue with mani for loving ishita n cant love laxmi was too.good


mani clear told her he just want to bed with her was nice too

I have a guts telling me ishu love raman but just because of his flirt way n jerk she is rejecting him

now it will be fun to see what will happen next


Thanks for loving it 😊
Of course she has a feeling for him.
And your assumptions are right 😉
Stay tuned 😳

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