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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: whitelily
Awesome 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Awesome. Divyanka and Raman, again DivAn=Divyanka+RamAN...!! 😆
This DivAn and that DivAn are the same anyways.😛 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ek-paheli
Awesome. Divyanka and Raman, again DivAn=Divyanka+RamAN...!! 😆
This DivAn and that DivAn are the same anyways.😛 😉

Aha..good catch! 👏😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: mannat0010
awesome update...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Wow 👍🏼 what a unique story. And kya twist that ki shagun murdered Ishita! Haila 😲

Awesomely done and very creative yaar!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Lovely ending

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: aarohi26
hey pallavi di, pehle toh I am kaan pakad ke sorry for not to comment on each and every individual part but yeh mat sochna ki I didn't read it. I was loyal reader of this FS and first of all, shaastaant dandavat pranaam to you for your epic idea. maan gaye aapko. kya concept dhoondh aapne

aapki imagination ki toh mein fan ho gyi, kabhi ishu ki shaadi suraj se karwaati ho, kabhi usko YHM ka daily viewer banaati ho, kabhi shagun ko ambaani ke saath bhagaa deti ho and this one toh...,but it made my eyes glistery

so I already became saddy saddy when I read ishu is died but I thought might be Raman found her there and take her with him but the incidents horrified me like saree and divz on tv, (this was epic) but I liked it

waise jab u entered ishu in story, main samjh gayi this ki something is gadbad but then I lost in their nonstop romance waise maana padega Raman ke sapno ko. acche accho ke pasine chooth jaae... waise I skipped most part because I am still under age na 😳 😉
but the later realisation and revenge made me happy but in real life, I cant imagine a couple without each other so I am sad that ishu is died but koi nahi,divz toh hai na

thank you di for this bhootiya os. will be wait for your other one

oye itna lamba comment! u made up for not commenting individually on d parts 😃 😛

I am so glad u appreciate my atrangi ideas 😆 U hv read my oders SSes/OSes too? Nice yaar..thanks for mentioning dem too 😃

Hopefully u werent disturbed by ishita's death nor by d bhutiya scenes 😆

Thanks, thanks again for ur lovely comment.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: divazfankau
superb update
emotional also
but like divra

Aww..thank you so much😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: aviana
peace beautiful updt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Omg omg Pallavi... Kya yaar... It was actually a horrex :P.

Eeeksss... In the starting portion Raman going lovey dovey with Shagun yuck... That was real horror to imagine.

Chilla chilla k bolne ko dil kar raha MURDER HUA THA ISHITA KA MURDER... Isi k baad uska bhoot murder Ki heroine jaisa Ho Gaya naughty naughty ;-)

Raman Marri hui Ishita ko be taunt maarta hai.

''Raman recognised the glint in her eyes..it
was the same familiar one.."
Yeh line clear karo maate...
She was the embodiment of bhoot Ishita.
She has the soul of Ishita.
Or she is Ishita ( less possible)
She is the re birth of Ishita (never possible) Bcz growth rate itna fast Ni possible.

P.s. It wasn't a dream of anyone :P