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Posted: 10 years ago
@maanvir didi super update
Yeh ravan na ravan hi rahega
Use dekhkar khush tha lekin taunt marne se nahi raha
Ravan kumar kahinke
N yeh ishita toh usse bhi chuparustam nikla
sangat ka asar hai shayad
Bt really loved their convo
Ravan ka taane ishita ka kuch bhi
Mihir rocked in tat very small part also
raman bhalla ab toh range haath pakde gaye
Bata de yaar jaldi

@didi ab bahut tareef ho gayi bt ha sach mein ab toh tareef ha ki kabil ho
Ab didi sach sach apni shaadi ka raaz batayiye
Jiju bhi aise hi feel karte the????
kya bolte the aapko dekhne ke baad
Ab ha daantna nahi tomato n ande toh hargis nahi lekin ha reply karna

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

@maanvir didi super update

Yeh ravan na ravan hi rahega
Use dekhkar khush tha lekin taunt marne se nahi raha
Ravan kumar kahinke
N yeh ishita toh usse bhi chuparustam nikla
sangat ka asar hai shayad
Bt really loved their convo
Ravan ka taane ishita ka kuch bhi
Mihir rocked in tat very small part also
raman bhalla ab toh range haath pakde gaye
Bata de yaar jaldi

@didi ab bahut tareef ho gayi bt ha sach mein ab toh tareef ha ki kabil ho
Ab didi sach sach apni shaadi ka raaz batayiye
Jiju bhi aise hi feel karte the????
kya bolte the aapko dekhne ke baad
Ab ha daantna nahi tomato n ande toh hargis nahi lekin ha reply karna



I must say u r vry smart...u knw hw to get me to rply u back...
jis tarah ishu raman ka naam sunne ke bad chup nahi reh sakti mai b tumhare jiju ka naam sunke chup nahi reh sakti...
meri shadi ki kahani kafi lambi hai...aur intrstng bhi...kabhi fursat se bataungi 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Mannvir second parts was beautiful with all the word and Raman emotion. He so excited and eagerly to see her and he finally decide to join party. Sorry to say I can't understand the dialogue parts what they are talking about I don't know Hindi dear. Hope next update I will get more in English and want to see that they end up to except their feeling or not.😊



thnx dear...I vl try to translate the dialogues to english in my leisure...I vl pm u once its done
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mano...main aa gayi...
Farhan nahi toh tab tak k liye Raju hi sahi...wht a superb updt...
My Didu is a superb poet...I jst luv her poems...n sone pe suhaaga...her superb poem wid ur superb writing...wht else do I want...I knw...u r w8ting fr Didu...bt don't feel sad woh bahut jaldi aa jayengi...

Okkk as suku di said...lambe comments sirf Didu de sakti hai...so bear ur Nehu wid a small 1...

🤗 🤗..for both my darlings...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_neha

Mano...main aa gayi...
Farhan nahi toh tab tak k liye Raju hi sahi...wht a superb updt...
My Didu is a superb poet...I jst luv her poems...n sone pe suhaaga...her superb poem wid ur superb writing...wht else do I want...I knw...u r w8ting fr Didu...bt don't feel sad woh bahut jaldi aa jayengi...

Okkk as suku di said...lambe comments sirf Didu de sakti hai...so bear ur Nehu wid a small 1...

🤗 🤗..for both my darlings...



Tumhare cmnt se mere chehre pe muskan agayi
Tumhare ane se meri jaan me jaan agayi
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys!!!
Thank you so much Pallavi di for inviting me for this song-osthon... i am on cloud nine 😆
okay its my very first os ever and i am extremely nervous... I dint take a romantic or love song this time as i first wanted to get comfortable writing... its a lively and one of my favourite song...
the os has the story only based on raman's POV and revolves around him tho Ishita is the main element... Its not a very romantic story as i said so please bear with me.. If i plan to write more (which i am planning 😆) will give a romantic one...
So for now enjoy and have fun and will be waiting for tomatoes, chappals anything u throw at me 😉😛

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Note: No proofread... sorry my net is screwed up and had to do a lot of hungama to get it screwed back!!!! Apologies in advance for poor storyline

My song for the osthon is Awara Bhavre from Sapney movie

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fL2vZtCgWY[/YOUTUBE]

Nadiya mein lehre aaye

Tomorrow is the D day... at last the passing out batch could go for their trip...

The completion of their degree course had given them ample of time to chill around and they took full advantage of it... Why wouldn't they after all they all would soon separate...

Raman was very excited because they were going to his favorite place... The place which would give him the much needed solace...

Being handsome, sexy and hot he was the heartthrob of every girl in the college... Raman being Raman knew every trick of flirting with a girl and that just trilled the girls...

He was busy packing when he caught sight of the photo of their batch on his table... Except for few students i.e., the geeky people he knew most of them in that pic... He never gave a Shit about them you see...

As soon as he was done packing he just jumped into his bed waiting for the sleep to engulf him... However it seemed too far away as the excitement had taken its place after all... He kept thinking of the recent convo of their gang...

Flashback:

Raman and his friends where sitting in the cafeteria enjoying their last day in the college... That's the time suddenly a topic came up

Rahul: So Raman decided on any one girl now at least... You have flirted with almost 3/4th of the girls of this college yet still single?

Raman: Well man no seems to have that charm, that shine in them... you know when you look at that person you just lose the world around, everything feels like some dream, you have that kuch kuch hota hai moment the time you look into that persons eyes... the innocence which can just capture into and transport you into another world... Saying he trailed slipping into a trance...

Rohit: wooo Raman bhai aap toh kuch jyada hi romantic nikle... saale wapas duniya mein uthar hawa kahi ruk na jaye... (Woo brother, you turned out to be so romantic.. Stupid come back to this world or you'll fall) And all starts laughing...

Flashback end

And the sleep crept in slowly...

All the students were busy going to their rooms...

Raman with two other of his friends had decided to share the room and had settled in...

Raman was however outside in the balcony busy admiring the beauty of his favorite place

Manali...

The hills, the snowcapped mountains just calmed him to a very great extent. Being nature lover photography has come naturally to him...

It was during one of these photo shoot of his which just changed everything for him...

The students had gone to solang valley... Raman was busy clicking photos focusing his lens on the natural beauty when he came across a sight which just stooped all his movements... he was rooted to the spot... his gaze was fasted on the girl in the far end of the valley who was busy trying to make the butterfly sit on her palm..

He isolated himself from others as they proceeded ahead whereas he moved in the opposite direction towards the girl... As soon as he neared her he recognized her immediately it was The Ishita Iyer... i.e., the biggest nerd of their batch...

Ishita Iyer the topper of their batch was someone who had never interacted with Raman and his friends... hence had never known or crossed path of each other...

He dint make to effort of approaching her rather stood at little distance and just observed her...

Ishita oblivious to him was busy enjoying the natural beauty round her... The valley was lush with grass and has colorful flowers blooming happily...

She saw a butterfly on the flower very near to her and hence decided to play with it... As she was just about to catch it.. It flew away leaving her disappointed... however, his mood got lifted and was busy with another one few distance away...

As he was busy observing all this he suddenly heard someone humming and soon a beautiful song was heard... he jerked his head to the direction and noticed it was Ishita mouthing those beautiful lines...

awara bhanwre jo haule haule gaaye (stray blackbees which are singing slowly)
phulo ke tan pe hawaye sarsaraye (the air is hissing on the body of the flowers)
awara bhanwre jo haule haule gaaye
phulo ke tan pe hawaye sarsaraye
ae koyal ki kuhu kuhu (the cooing of the cuckoo)
papihe ki peehu peehu (the singing of the sparrow hawk)
jungle mein jheengar ki jhaye jhaye (the sound of the beetle cricket in the jungle)

While singing this she is swaying her body according to the tune... running around the valley. Raman was mesmerized by her voice... Her dance and playfulness enchanted him... he unknowingly captured her every movement, her every pose, every small interactions with the butterflies and flowers...

He sees her run towards the small pond and runs behind her... she leans and looks at her reflection making cute faces at it which was not left uncaptured by Raman... he was amused by her actions.. Enchanted by her voice...

nadiya mein lehre aaye (the waves arrive in the river)

balkhaye chhalki jaaye (these get bent and overflow)

bheege hontho se wo gungunaye (they humm with their wet lips)

gata hai sahil gata hai behta pani (the river bank sings, the flowing water sings)

gata hai ye dil sun sa re ga ma pa dha ni sa re (this heart sings, listen to do re me fa so la ti do)

The ripples in the water makes her giggle bringing a smile on Raman's lips... all the while he keeps capturing her every movement...

Suddenly he sees that she disappeared... He around searching for her but does not find her anywhere... Disappointed he goes back to the hotel.. he hopes to see her atleast in the hotel.. there is a get together in the evening... a bonfire party was setup for everyone...

When Raman with his friends goes their his eyes are busy searching for Ishita... His friends noticing this questions him

Rahul: Raman whom are you searching for?

Raman " hmm.. na..no nno one why?" he replied looking back at his friends.

Rohit: Aree then why are you searching here and there?"'

Raman: Are bolo na no one... chal chalte hai saare aagaye honge ( Told na no one come lets go all must have come there already)

Ha chal.. ( Ya come)

They move to the circle and sit down... That's the time Raman spots Ishita sitting next to her friends and talking animatedly about something. He noticed her eyes which twinkled everytime she giggled... her plump pink lips which she licked wetting it very often... that act just undid something in him arousing him... he wanted to replace her tongue with her... Her body hugging full sleevs white top showed off her curves accurately which he wanted to touch... he wanted her in his arms...

Raman (st) yeh kya kar raha hai tu beta apne soch pe kabu rakh... who tere league ki bhi nahi hai... (What are you doing raman, have control on your thoughts She is not even your type)

Even though he was thinking this his eyes wouldn't even move a bit from her... Rahul who noticed this followed his gaze and found him staring at Ishita

Raman... he called out but seeing no response from him he shook him slightly bringing him out of his thoughts... Raman was startled...

Kya... Kya hua? (What.. what happened?)

Tu Ishita ko kyun ghur raha hai? (Why are you staring at Ishita so much)

Pagal hai kya mei.. mein ky.. kyun use ghurunga...? Raman was shocked that he was caught and was stammering... (You are mad or wht.. y.. would I stare at her?)

Rahul smirked listing to his tone...

Abe bola na nahi ... tu jyada dimaag mat laga he shouted angrily looking at his smirk...(Are don't you're brains so much told na no)

Rahul : Waise dekh na who kitni hot lag rahi hai.. I mean sab jaante hai ki she is the most beautiful girl in our college... her figure toh (Actually if you see she is the most beautiful girl and her figure...)

Raman's anger rose as he continued praising Ishita.. however when he spoke about her figure he just couldn't control... he held rahuls collar and whispered angrigly...

Uske bare mein ek aur shabd bola na toh mein zinda gad bunga tumhe... (If you dare utter one more word about her I will bury you alive here only)

Rahul was shocked... Raman had never behaved possessive about anyone like this infact he would join with him whenever he would say something like this...

Who dude calm down tu uss ladki ke liye mere saath aisa kyun kar raha hai... yaar dost hun tera chill maar... (You are doing this to me for that girls yaar I am your friend)

Raman just realized what he had done and was shocked by his won behavior..

Why so he feeling so protective about her? Why was it that she was affecting him so much? Why was he longing to see her? Why was he...

Rahul seeing no response just left him and went away..

All of a sudden her heard the same song which had just captured his heart... The words which had left her lips seems to have mesmerized him...

He turns to the centre and sees ishita and her friends dancing on the same song... and again her voice transported him to his dream world... for him only she existed on the floor and no on else...

He saw her moving towards him

raat jo aaye to sannata chhaye to (when the night falls, then, when the silence shadows, then)

tik tik kare ghadi suno (the clock is creating the sound of tick tick)

door kahi gujre rail kisi pul se (at some distance, train passes over some bridge)

goonje dhada dhadi suno (the heavy beats echo, listen)


He feels that these words reflects her effect on him... his racing heartbeat when she is near him... just the closeness of her affecting him deeply which he fears can be heard everywhere...

sangeet hai ye sangeet hai (this is music, this is music)

sangeet hai ye sangeet hai
man ka sangeet suno (listen to the music of heart)

baho mein le ke bachcha ma jo koi lori gaye (holding her baby in her arms, when some mother sings some lullaby)

mamta ka geet suno (listen to the song of motherly love)

her every breath which falls on his face when she closes the distance between their faces feels like a song to him... her heavy breaths having its own pattern... he knows it doesn't make sense... the song doesn't suit any of those romantic thoughts he is having of her... but just the thought that it's her song... the song which she sang yesterday openly away from all hustle and bustle of students in solace makes this song his favorite...

He doesn't know when he got snapped out of his beautiful dream of having her so close in his arms... as he looked around he noticed that she had returned back to her place and was busy clapping for the people who were now on the floor...

He knew he was gradually falling in love with her... wait did I jusy say love?

Yes love... Raman Kumar Bhalla heartthrob of every girl in the college was falling head over heels in love with the most beautiful yet a nerd of their college Ishita Iyer...

But again do I know her enough to love her? Its such a deep and strong feeling...

He slowly drifts into sleep hoping to start a new day tomorrow... hoping to confess his love... hoping to lead a happy life with her... the person who stole his heart... His Ishita Iyer!!! The pictures he took of her kept flashing in his mind as the humming of the song was heard marking a new chapter in his life because now his clear life was filled with ripples.. ripples of love

awara bhanwre jo haule haule gaaye
phulo ke tan pe hawaye sarsaraye
hu koyal ki kuhu kuhu
papihe ki peehu peehu
jungle mein jheengar ki jhaye jhaye
nadiya mein lehre aaye
balkhaye chhalki jaaye
bheege hontho se wo gungunaye
gata hai sahil gata hai behta pani
gata hai ye dil sun sa re ga ma pa dha ni sa re

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Thank you all once again
Edited by sush_avina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
People,

Sush_avina has just posted her OS for today in d above post 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
@sush_avina
that was a lovely one dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: florine_20

@sush_avina
that was a lovely one dear.

thank u so much
i was wondering how will people react hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
@such_avina
aha..such a cute OS! 😃 and wat a lovely song that one, u made a perfect story around it 😊

lovely! 👏

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