SongOSthon#1 : 24 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 93

@manveer di it's awsome updated
ishra divan story just loved
song also nice continue soon

Maanvir,

Originally posted by: aarohi26

yupiee...I am technically first one to comment. manvi di you made us so many wait but koi nahi this update made me happy. I am falling for your writing especially after your ss on divan. it was like everything was happening in front us. so our dear dhakkans are also dhakkans in real life. both knew that they I've each other but hesitant to admit their feelings. now my curiosity is more increasing after each passing day. I hope you will update soon.

chalo aapki tareef toh ho gayi ab aapki taang khichaai par aati hoon 😉

hmmm...waise aapko itna first love ka knowledge kaise di? I mean yeh curious,bechaini typoz wali feelings itne acche se kaise describe kar leti ho???? isme se kitne cheezein aapki real life se related hai I mean ki feelings typoz. dekho maarna mat aur daatna toh mat hi.

Originally posted by: monalisa123

Maanvir,

So cool yaar.

I am loving it. is there going to be another part of this?

beautiful update maanvir😃 thnx 4 pm😊

@maanvir
omg such cute update
they r so cute
i loved their nokjhok
they r cute
awww ab bol bhi do ...

Originally posted by: maanvir

hahaha...tum apni imagination ka ghoda bahut door tak douda rahi ho...

Yeh sab to lyrics ka asar hai...

filmy lyrics ko incorporate karne keliye filmy banna padta hai...

Thats it😉

ha ha ha. I was seriously puling your leg. because muhge sacchi mein maza aata hai aapje saath masti karne mein. vaise I agreed lyrics ke life filmy bananaa pafta ha but best part is ki iska next part bhi hai. jaldi update karna. we can't wait more

Nice update manvir!! i hope i spelled it ryt??

Btw u have written which ss on divan?? I have read your TS is that the same one?? If not and a different story then i would love to read it!! Can u share the link??

Originally posted by: Dmug

Nice update manvir!! i hope i spelled it ryt??

Btw u have written which ss on divan?? I have read your TS is that the same one?? If not and a different story then i would love to read it!! Can u share the link??

Nothing Will change between us

its a four shot on DivAn...
theres anthr one shot titled He needs break...
u vl find the link to my wrk in my signature below 😃

Awesome update dear..👏