Software Symphonies 18 Democracy & Heels on 150 - Page 59

Originally posted by: nividances

Below is something I composed in a matter of a few minutes...not my best, but it's certainly fitting.😊

We fight,

we yell,

we hurt,

we brood.

Having had enough,

we flee,

most unexpectedly.

I push,

you pull.

I pull,

you push.

A tug of war,

never-ending,

always cycling.

But even in this,

lies an innocent beauty,

very much reminiscent,

of the ocean truly.

The cycle of waves,

rocking back and forth,

there's nothing more loving on this Earth.

Kissing the shoreline,

the water moves.

but it's always sent back,

by the sand's many moods.

The tug of war continues,

the cycle never ends.

They don't stop loving,

they just learn to make amends.

Lovely... specially the last para ❤️

Originally posted by: nividances

Below is something I composed in a matter of a few minutes...not my best, but it's certainly fitting.😊

We fight,

we yell,

we hurt,

we brood.

Having had enough,

we flee,

most unexpectedly.

I push,

you pull.

I pull,

you push.

A tug of war,

never-ending,

always cycling.

But even in this,

lies an innocent beauty,

very much reminiscent,

of the ocean truly.

The cycle of waves,

rocking back and forth,

there's nothing more loving on this Earth.

Kissing the shoreline,

the water moves.

but it's always sent back,

by the sand's many moods.

The tug of war continues,

the cycle never ends.

They don't stop loving,

[I]they just learn to make amends.[/
I]

to feel like 'I' in this one is everyone's dream... 😳

Originally posted by: nividances

Below is something I composed in a matter of a few minutes...not my best, but it's certainly fitting. 😊

We fight,

we yell,

we hurt,

we brood.

Having had enough,

we flee,

most unexpectedly.

I push,

you pull.

I pull,

you push.

A tug of war,

never-ending,

always cycling.

But even in this,

lies an innocent beauty,

very much reminiscent,

of the ocean truly.

The cycle of waves,

rocking back and forth,

there's nothing more loving on this Earth.

Kissing the shoreline,

the water moves.

but it's always sent back,

by the sand's many moods.

The tug of war continues,

the cycle never ends.

They don't stop loving,

they just learn to make amends.

Originally posted by: vibhutii

Lovely... specially the last para ❤️

I would agree. That was my personal favorite part as well. 😊

Originally posted by: dristi64

Wow! Nivi you too seem to have a way with words; simple yet poignant. Really liked it. M a newbie so haven't come across any other work of your's. Hope I do get to read more. Cheers👏

Thank you so much Dristi. 😳
I have written a few other poems... They are scattered about in previous SoSy threads. 😊

Originally posted by: ishruhi

she is not online yet... 😒

I think the next update will be our morning (your evening) since it's quite late here already. Based on past patterns, Nisha usually never posts this late into the night US time.

Originally posted by: nividances

I think the next update will be our morning (your evening) since it's quite late here already. Based on past patterns, Nisha usually never posts this late into the night US time.

ok... 😒
let her take some rest...paavam...our nagging for more and more is reahing its heights...afterall its her doing na!!will wait!!!

Nivi I read your comment before the movie started, about "how life is like driving through an unknown area at night, without a GPS, we can only "see and do" whatever happens to be in our line of vision"
We dont know if there are rose farms, or dry desert with tumbleweed, we dont know when we will run out of gas, yes we can "estimate"
We dont know what happens when we make a right or left turn"

Its the most startling analogy to life I have read in recent times

You seem to have used it for II

I believe it applies to every human being

We just have no clue when a 200 lbs deer or moose or a bear will cross our paths, or drunk driver driving the wrong way


Fantastic!!!

All we see is whats lit up by the head light.
I think it will take me a while to internalize that comment, I am going to replay it in the context of my own life and wonder what appeared on both sides as I drove in my 20s vs 30s or what could have happened if I turned West instead of East.

I am absolutely impressed
If your dude is an R&B you are DEFINITELY an II
You will have some fabulous discussions

Originally posted by: ishruhi

she is online 😉

We readers in india who follow So Sy are so excited to see Nisha online...It raises our hopes of an update...the image being discussed of what lies ahead on the road or the possibilities from which we choose one...reminds me of Frosts Road not taken for some reason