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Seriousreader

@Seriousreader

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: ishruhi
one freshly showered clean shaven handsome dude is waiting in front of us for a long time...wondering when he will be invited...

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blue5sky

@blue5sky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#602

Hey Nisha!

Loved the last 2 updates. Vandu was sensible as always. She is so balanced about II love how she cares to point out the right things about the couple to each other and to her parents. Her predicament about Bala's sense of righteousness is so touching. Something that many families encounter - choices that are always tough for people who care.

Liked how she gently goads RnB and II into ' action'. Clean shaven dude - manna from heaven for II. Good thing RnB is not generous with words boy are they scathing😭

Ii rightfully feels hurt and right now waiting to see what the husband is going to do?

Thank you for caring about my week I had AWESOME Sunday!

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#603

"Would you like my life?"
Appa was with him... startled... but happy, Amma greeted him joyously and seated him
(Next chapter)

II didnt know who it was she stood in the bathroom by the towel rail contemplating Akka's words, as she stretched the towel in the rail unnecessarily, as Akka glared

Amma had left and Akka alone after a singing look... she assumed it was Athim...

Akka: Like I said come live in my house for a week, you in THIS lifetime will never know what it is to be married into a middle class
family and trying to stretch the paycheck beyong the 24th each month... JUST LIKE I wont know what it is like to marry a man whose Dad may have committed a crime. We both wont know each others' life as it exists

II began to cry

Akka: DONT CRY KANNA (order)

Akka:What did u even think? You will marry him, he will start talking pages and pages just like you and you will have a bunch of servants at your beck and call and go shopping to Emporio Mall every weekend and wonder what to spend his money on?"

II:No I dont even spend his money (blurt?)

Akka:Whattt?

II: I mean I dont go to Emporio Mall at all (softly)

Akka: thats not the point I didnt mean for you to take it literally... I meant if Bally was a jerk enna pannuve? Will u quit? How many bosses and jobs can u quit?

II:THIS IS NOT ABOUT ME!

Akka:Who is it about?
"
II:This is about him not even contributing a speck in order to bring semblance of normalcy to that house

Akka: Adu TUESDAY DAAN TERIYUMA ONAKKU? (U only discovered Tuesday?)
II: Ummm

Akka:Uve been goingt o his house SECRETLY many many times before the wedding did you not know what scandal is associated with the family

II let her tears flow...

Akka: Crying is not the solution Ishita, You met him in his house,
you saw him skirt around his Dad he acts like he is walking on nails when he sees his Dad, Athim solra,
when there is only him and Ranjanji in the room your RAKSHASAN (mocking) gets up and walks away!!!!! A man that hates his Dad so much will go ask him "Did u have a good day? Did ur PC crash? Is Maruti having supply issues, will they delay the delivery of Ciaz by 3 weeks?"

You expect him to talk like that to his Dad?

II nodded feebly

Akka:NO KANNA HE WONT

II: HOW can I live like that day after day?

Akka: Ido paar (in almost an inaudible voice but spitting fireballs nevertheless)
(Akka was mad!! she waved a finger on her face) Appa HATES them. HE BEGGED YOU not to be so adamant. Nee yenna sonney appo?

II squirmed uncomfortably

Akka:I will marry him or stay single... THE VERY THOUGHT HE WAS INVOLVED with someone SIX MONTHS ago caused you to be in bed for 9 days straight. Marandu pyitteya? (did u forget?)
It was not attempted suicide by design, but your body reacted like your mind was trying to instruct it to end its journey

II turned a deep crimson

Akka: He makes you feel like no other man ever has ADMIT IT. You enjoy the attention, you enjoy his love making you enjoy the below belt blows you deal each other

II sniffled wiping her nose with the towel... her face red and puffy

Akka:You had a choice, SREE, he has a brother and a sister and what appeared AT THAT TIME was a typical uncomplicated Iyer family, educated guy, Natesan Mama would have given a undertaking on stamp paper for the guy

II's face contorted

Akka:NO!! U didnt like him, he didnt turn you on one bit... the very thought of R&B stops your heart beat.

Akka: Whatever issues Sree had would have unfolded after the wedding. YOU CANNOT HAVE A PERFECT LIFE ISHITA.

II:I dont want a perfect life (lying) I DO WANT A PERFECT LIFE. I want him to talk to his Dad

Akka: So like a soap bahu you will make it happen? And they will tearfully thank you "Hamari aankhen khol dee beta" types? (sniggering) Quit thinking soaps are real

II:Thats mean!!!!

Akka:Too bad but its the truth

II:I just want us to be able to see each other on the same floor Athim eats with Thatha Paati, talks politics, talks cricket, listens to Ministry stories from 1960s and 1970s

Akka: because THATS ALL YOU SEE

II:What do u mean?

Akka: I wish Amabala Anna would come and take Thatha Paati away and keep them until December until winter, I want to enjoy the new baby with
Bala and Shravu (Akka's distress was causing tears now). I want to have ONE meal just with Bala and Shravu ONLY after arranging everything like Desi soaps u know (chuckling between tears)
EVERY meal I eat after Thatha Paati and Bala usually, not because Bala wont let me eat, I think its practical to see whats left over and finish that first
Thatha Paati ask me to join them also, Sundays I do... weeknights Thatha wants dosa at 8, Paati wants aval (puffed rice) or kanji at 9, or both want a sit down dinner
When I sit down to eat the dining table is a icky mess... clean pannittu I sit down (I first clear away)I have wishes too, I want the baby to have her own room, not her own floor like Lasya but her own lil 8*10, I live in a 3 bedroom flat
that adds up to 1000 sq ft. Ambala Anna has stopped calling even, do u know that? He fears Bala will suggest
Kamakshi Athai visits NOIDA for namesake only 90% of her stay is in Munirka. At 37 I am caring for three 70+ people while being pregnant
ENN LIFE VENUMA ONAKKU? (Would u like my life?). Akka cried openly now.

Akka: I can practically LIVE HERE at D II Ishita my married life is so screwed according to your definition.
Tan said politely a few times "Have u considered quitting?"
EVEN R&B said "It would be great if you can rest" They are GOOD MEN. Bala didnt say it ONCE. "Paakalam" ("Lets SEE") was all he said" Because if I quit how can we take on all these expenses?" Sollu?" I want Bala to Order me to quit my job, tell me we are renting a floor in Greater Kailash or Panchsheel Enclave, appoint a full time maid... sometimes I struggle to pay my Rs.3000 a month jharoo pocha bartan only maid u know
"Bala ADORES ME, BUT he is practical, AND IS A WIMP. We all want our husbands to do what WE have planned in our minds, I want Bala to TELL OFF Ambala Anna, tell off NOIDA cousin, and tell off Kamakshi Athai, she cant hear so its no point

II reached and hugged Akka... Akka wearily rested her head on II's shoulder

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#604

rnb is listening this conversation?????

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angel6599

@angel6599

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#605

superb

hope this story never ends

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: ishruhi
rnb is listening this conversation?????

Naaheee
That would be like a Desi soap
No no... absolutely not

I put a lot of thought into this part I hope you all liked reading as much as I loved writing it
The last couple will always be part of my faves

We need good people and we need to be told good things in life, HONESTLY

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angel6599

@angel6599

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: ishruhi
rnb is listening this conversation?????

even i too think rnb is listening to this conversation

Edited by angel6599 - 10 years ago

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: angel6599
superb
hope this story never ends

If uve written before and I have ignored you THEN I AM SORRY
But if you chose to "come out" and praise for the first time because of this chapter then I AM THRILLED

THANK YOUUU😳
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED WRITING IT
I cant describe in words😛

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#609

how difficult it will be to take care 3 70+ people,one 10 yr old,do households and have a job too when you are pregnant!!!that too at 37!!!no one can help vanditha???

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angel6599

@angel6599

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Naaheee
That would be like a Desi soap
No no... absolutely not

I put a lot of thought into this part I hope you all liked reading as much as I loved writing it
The last couple will always be part of my faves

We need good people and we need to be told good things in life, HONESTLY

nee idu varekum nalla yazhdreke (wrote)

i really appreciate ur creativity

waiting for next update

i want it soon

i know i am being selfish but can't help it