IshRa SS- Forever and ever after_A NOTE (Pg 72)-The End (Incomplete)

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nitii-76

@nitii-76

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

i absolutely have no idea of what that means 🤣 🤣

this is for Raman🤣

i can't believe i said it🤣 🤣

pls continue soon

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@rk654

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

very nice update,,,,

bedroom scene was aswesome...👍🏼

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Lovely update. Lol yeh line tho Yaha mera dil thod ke madam ko dekho late night party main silk smitha banni hain. 😆 enjoyed fully. Waiting 4 nxt update. Ishra 2nd innings 😉 . Tanx Shalini 😊

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#484

So Punjabi wedding..

Balle Balle...

Super cute update.

Can't wait for next. .

Update soon

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Hey yipee punjabi wedding bhalle bhalle.:-)
lovely update:-)
I want the same scene in show ..huu yeh par cv's trying to seperate them.
Amma blast the bomb on ramans head..

Ishu so immersed in ruhi talks ,she not noticed her raavan kumar.

Yeh mika bena..fire mai fuel dhal raha hai..raman alreay jal raha hai..iss silk sumitha ko party ke padi hai..

biwi planned suprise,im loving one liner of raman...itna kyu shramana madam ko..

shalz tum patti raman ko padaye ho,readers ko.u stopped in mid way..

Thanks for pm..:-)

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DipaRB6

@DipaRB6

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Teehehee nice update Shalz. I love the scenario. Raman is so cute and childlike in this and Ishita has certainly learned a thing or two from RKB about making up.

I loved this part :
I understand! Aab madam, aap hain patti kholenge... I want to see you, I want to touch you...I want to see you blush when I touch you...Ishita

And Ishita's subsequent response. But it feels so short! Update next part soon. Waiting for the game ;)

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Super awesome update. Loved how bechara Raman was cribbing ander hi ander that Biwi will be her parents. Loved the notes. Suprise was super amazing. Continue soon.

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Lovely update Shalz!! Loved Biwi playing treasure hunt with Puttar!! I can so imagine them doing it in the show!!

Update soon...preferably in 2-3 days.. 😆

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-godschild-

@-godschild-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#489

That was a great update @Shalz. Waiting fir the big fat Punjabi wedding 😉
Just loved biwi giving puttar that surprise 😳
But how the hell could u stop there 😡 😆
He's making the game sound very naughty. I wonder how it goes 😉
Waiting for the next one 😃