IshRa SS- Forever and ever after_A NOTE (Pg 72)-The End (Incomplete)

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Okay, I don't even know what I am getting into. I have this big big urge to write something on IshRa for a long time now...but never really ventured into it, coz I honestly feel I m not very good at expressing myself and m not creative at all.. But few of my crazy friends and discussions with them brought back the urge again... N this is kind of an aftermath of that gush fest about IshRa Remarriage..

(Beckysharp)Becks ,(OnePiece) Hema, Tia, (Veean) Vee, (RomcomFan)Anu, (yhmmylife) Anji, (Eyes-wide-shut) Doc, (Shadeslayer) Su, (Fugitives123) Ann, Krishy, (Arabearxx) Kiara, Arunabhi . ..IF this doesn't turn out good, remember I will blame YOU KNOW WHO...you know my logic of blaming... eeh?? Cheers to us for being the weird n random group of baes...

Piu (Dark lady) my desire for writing came while helping you edit your OS. U r my special Girl.

Akansha (Gravity23)... thanks ..you know for what... aaj se I appoint you my editor and proof reader. Bas.

Love u guys...🤗

Title credit goes to Piu (Dark Lady)

So chapter 1 and 2 would be a lil angsty... coz honestly separation ke bina Milan ka maza kya?! N as in our Gush fest we conclude, WE would love an "I love you Damn it" and the romance that follows...

So here goes nothing...

Index

Page 1 Chapter1A

Page 9 Chapter 1B

Page 13 Chapter 1C

Page 21 Chapter 2A

Page 27 Chapter 2B

Page 36 Chapter 2C

Page 44 Chapter 3A

Page 57 Chapter 3B

Page 64 Chapter 3C

Page 68 Chapter 4A

Page 71 Note and Teaser to Chapter 4B

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Chapter 1A

Raman couldn't believe this. He, the Raman Kumar Bhalla was made a fool. He was moving around his cabin like a ferocious caged animal, and he felt like one. He could kill right now. He could surely just wring Subbu's neck for the mess he has created.

Subbu, a person he stupidly empathized with because he felt bad. He understood the pain of losing his loved ones. He thought Subbu was here just for redemption, for forgiveness.

Oh how wrong could he be! A big lie woven by Subbu and Shagun who else!!! Oh god, How much I hate this woman!'

Anyway he can think about this later. Right now what he needed to do is go to Ishita and convince her to stay and see reason. She just can't leave him. Deciding on the same, he picks up his car keys and drive to Taj Hotel where she was putting up.

He got a flashback of how Ishita even refused to stay back at her Amma's place because it was too near to HIM. How it hurt then! Oh Why god! why can't our life be a little more simple. I will bring you back ishita...you have to forgive me... I just can't let you go... No time outs... no break..nothing.. "

Ishita was sitting like she was in comatose like state. She couldn't even remember when was the last time she has used her facial muscles to smile.

She just couldn't believe that this is happening to them. Looking at her it was hard to believe she was blushing and smiling merely a few hours ago. Past few hours felt like a different era now.

How did this happen all of a sudden, she was yet to figure out! Her brain cells have stopped functioning. All she seems to recollect flashes here and there. She left her home in anger and came to stay in this hotel. In her rage she has shouted and declared that she will not stay with Raman anymore. She will accept Dr Batra's offer of heading a clinic in Chennai. She was confounded. They both were angry and hurling abuses at each other. Heaving a frustrated sigh, she tries to backtrack and find what and how exactly things went wrong!

*Flash Back*

Ishita had finally made peace with Subbu. She has forgiven him and she was supposed to present a paper on the new root canal procedure in a conference held at Taj Hotel, Delhi. She was happy because this was good for her career. "Thank God, Raman convinced me to present this paper.. Gosh I feel so stupid now for letting go of such an important opportunity just because of personal grudges..' She was supposed to reach the conference before hand, and Raman has promised he will joining her later. She smiled remembering Raman's exact word .." Aab meri jhansi ki rani, mujhe chhor kisi aur ko lecture degi, yeh to main miss hi nahi kar sakta...aur suno naa...once we are done with your conference, we will go for a long drive. Soch raha hu aaj kehe hi du.. What Say?"

Ishita pouted and then the next moment blushed profusely understanding his hint. But she was also no less... " Kya kehena hain aapko? Yahi ki kaal 7 baaje ke jaga 6 baaje uthaa du".. It was Raman's turn to blush at his blunder the day before. He some how managed himself and retorted..."Oho, u will regret this JKR..you will regret. I will not let you get up from bed tomorrow, Samjhi, baas tera yeh plaster haat jaae mata rani". Ishita was smiling and blushing from that moment onwards and it so hard to concentrate on the paper right now.. " Arrgh,...kya karte ho Raman, Now I am thinking, what will happen AFTER the conference instead of THE conference"..

And from there everything went downhill. It was like a tunnel from which there wasn't any escape route...

PS: Please do like and comment. Would love to get some feedback good or bad, critic or non critic.

Shalini

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Edited by shalz_123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Shalz 👏👏

What lie did subbu tell 😲 bcoz of which this mess is there.
Raman will not leave shagun.
But first he has meet Ishita and clear the MU.

Update fast 😃

I liked how you used yesterday scene in the your SS.
Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago
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Shalz, baby. Reserving for comment !😛
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Shalz, babes, if you ever say you don't have the talent to write I Will take the next flight to Kolkata and smack you on the head ! Beautifully written ! Eagerly waiting for the next update ! Don't make us wait for long !
Edited by beckysharp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey Shalini.. 😊
it was vry nyc updte... 👏
eager 2 knw wat hapnd suddenly ye she left nd stayng at hotel.. 😕
plz pm me 4 nxt updt nd continue soon.. 👍🏼
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First of all that's really sweet of you to have mentioned my name and for that 🤗. Oh yes I love you Damn it and romance is a dream come true for all of us and I can't wait to read those lines in your SS.

Coming to the storyline, Tadpana zaroori hai and these two .. My god Dhakkans that they are. But Glad puttar realized that Subbu is a pain in the wrong place. Biwi did not want to stay even with her parents. Itna Gussa 😳😳.

But yes you have shown it perfectly. Ishitha's hasty decisions and Puttar's realization after the issue.

Ah well, the flashback. I love it when the two blush and this whole 7 bhaje is so cutely put. Can't wait for the next part
Edited by arunabhi - 10 years ago
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Just finished reading...First, welcome to the world of OS/SS/TSes on IF...🤗
shucks! I SHOULD have understood it was THIS track u wud incorporate in ur SS...😆

good one Shal!! much needed...

I especially like Raman's rage and realization...that he has been made a fool of...ultimately...personally, for the show I dont want to know that WE are being made fools of, on the pretext of Subbu's sob story


But Ishu seems to be in a blissful mood BEFORE leaving for the conference...what happened ALL of a sudden? itni jaldi woh bhi?

very curious to know
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Shalz that was a super start. I'm already hooked on 😳
I love blushy puttar n biwi ☺️
N yes tadapna zaroori hai for these two 😉

Ummm...wt was with the whole I'm not good n stuff
This is really good Okk, I love it n now I won't leave u 😆 😆 😆

P.S. Thank u for adding me 😛 N I Lubsss u.
Edited by .TIA. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting.. Wonder what did Subbo and Shagun do! Waiting for Puttar to win back JKR
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Oh Shalz. How much do I love you?
This is amazing. So amazing.


You know I'm a sucker for second chance romances.

I trust to do this well, and you know me, keep me updated.

And even if I miss on an update or two I give you full permission to remind me that I'm in love with this work.

This is amazing.

And it has Subbu mentioned. 😆

I love you!


Message Anu. She wouldn't want to miss this.
Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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