Unique Love #3 : Ishra - Do You Hate Me UPDATED 4th OCT pg 58 - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss

I wrote update and lost it...

writing it again now will post it tonight...
Sorry for being so late dear...

So SORRY...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss

I wrote update and lost it...

writing it again now will post it tonight...
Sorry for being so late dear...

So SORRY...



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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss

Hi Friends...
I was away from forum with respect to posting my writings and all such things... though I use to read all my fav writer's fan fictions...
I apologize for not continuing my very first work... as I lost the track of the story myself... and I will give a last part to it sooner... And finish it off...
This story came randomly to me... Just without a second thought I have written it down... I hope it sounds interesting enough...
And lemme know your feedback about the same...
With no more ranting let me tell you about the story...
Character sketch is almost the same as the YHM.. we fell in love with...
The situation or the base of the story you will come to know as n when it progresses...
Let me know how you find it...



Har Roz Unki Yaado Me Hum Khote Hain..
Unki Tasveer Ankho Me Lekar Sote Hain..
Bheeg Na Jaaye Ye Tasveer Ansuon Se..
Isliye Hum Ankho Se Nahi Dil Se Rote Hain..!

-My Viddu(Vidya_Prasad)

Thank You For this beautiful piece of work dear...
I'm happy that this story stirred this in you to write this...
Love You baby Boo , My Princess...


Sorry For the typos 😳😳


UNIQUE LOVE #3 Do You Hate Me
- Shravs😳


"kaise ho aap" ,
"tekh hoon.. tum.." ,
"hmmm..." ,
"aur..." ,
"aap kahiye..." ,
"wahan sab tekh h...conference n all " ,
"haan tekh h... log helpful h... aur yeh conference bhi.." ,
"hmm... Aur.. " ,
"hmmm..." ,
"aap ko neend aa rhi h toh so jayiye... Thak gye honge... waise bhi bachche pareshan kar rhe honge... main hu nahi toh..." ,
"tum ka baa rhi ho..." ,
"next week most probably bataya toh tha aapko..." ,
"most probably matlab...?????" ,
"aa... raman chilla kyun rhe ho... woh ek medical camp h... free service for orphanage children... main free service dena chahti thi...",
"pehle apne bachchon ko dekho idhar aake... Idhar kr lo jo karna h... Chennai mein jaake baitke... mera dimaag kharab naa karo...Bachche aur baki sab tumhe bohot miss kar rhe h...",
"Main janti hu... kaun mujhe kitna miss krta h..." ,
"janti ho toh natak kyun..."

Ishita was thinking of their conversation that had happened once upon a time, it happened in their life, her happy days... will it ever be the same ... Ishita thought to0 herself... when her son came crawling to her n held her kurti to get up on his legs... She smiled seeing his child... And got back to being a mother , the only relationship she was left with in the whole of the world.. At least that's what she thought of herself..

"kya hua... hass rhe ho bohot... Puri tarah ravan kumar ke carbon copy ho...ekdum... apne papa ki tarah haste ho...."

The Child smiled more... He use to even kick her when he was in her tummy at the mention of RavanKumar...

"Chalo ab jaldi se hum breakfast karenge aur... Aap apne mini play school main enjoy karna... main clinic main... Okay bachchu..."

As if the kid will understand she use to talk to it right from the day one... but to her surprise her son use to respond to her every emotion... he was her solace ... he use to make her smile...he use to support her... without even knowing...

After dropping him to his care takers house, she left to the clinic.. As she entered... Her eyes searched for a pictured and went nearer to it.. Its was her family photo... It had all her near and dear ones.. Her Parents, Sister, their extended family , Her in laws , her Raman and especially her two kids.. her eye scanned the two innocent children, whom she was sure would miss her a lot. Her eyes got teary...
"Ru bachcha... Apki ishima apko bohot miss karti h... and apki ishima ko pata h... ki ru unse gussa h... Sorry beta... Have a gud day as always... Keep smiling the whole day beta... Murugan... bless my child... ADI... Beta mummaa misses you a lot... Aap apke exams achese dena... I wish you all the best and best of luck beta... tension mat lena... Aapke saare papers ache jayenge... I am sure... have a good day beta... "

Her eye scanned to the person who was standing next to her with his hands on her shoulders possessively marking her as his in the family photo.. her face changed to an unknown emotion... She couldn't express herself.. she saw him again and turned around... but again turned back looked at him...

"Have a good day... Sorry... I Love You... "

This was what she was able to say... tears trickled down her cheeks.. .. she wiped it off... put on her medi coat... and beeped to let know the sister that she was at service.

She use to attend all the patients ... Use to call every half an hour to the care taker of her child... just to confirm he is okay... She use to speak to him over the call... though the response she use to get was ... His cute humming-s... As the clock hit 6 in the evening... she looked at her opd left overs... She was done with all of them.. She called it off for the day.. as she was already missing her son... she packed all the stuff... turned around to see the picture which makes her feel some solace..

"Tang mat karna papa ko... have a tight sleep ... ishima kal jaldi aa jaungi... "

, her eyes darted to the person who had his hands on her... And she didn't know what to say him... Again went numb... and she could say only...

"I love you ... Take care of yourself and kids... will meet you soon tomo.."
with that she turned and left her cabin..

Took her kid from the care takers home... warmly wishing them a goodbye... she started for some grocery shopping... She kept all the bags inside the car locked it... and took her kid to the Temple nearby... she prayed for all of their wellness... poured oil on the diya... prayed especially for Adi's exams as she was aware of his fear...

"Ishimaa... main padhlunga... aap jaake so jao naa... aap kyun nahi so rha ho... ots my exams... " , " adi... Chalo padhayi pe concentrate karo... Main bhi padh rhi hu naa... Waise im not sleepy at all beta... " ,
" ishimaa... kal mera exam achese jayega naa... "

She knew this was coming... as he use to take in the pressure of scoring in his exams... and getting first rank was his aim..

"haan beta... Mere bte ka exam achcha nahi jaye toh aur kiska achcha jaa sakta h beta... ab dekho its ur fifth revision... yeh khatam karke... so jaoge... ishima apko sulaye gi... samjhe beta..." , " ishimaaa ... nahi... Bas ek aur baar fevise karlun... Confidence bad jayegi... Please...",
" raat ke bara baje se yehi keh rahe ho beta... Its already going to be 2 am... " ,
"sorry ishima... apko bhi tang kar rha hu... but mujhe pata nahi... tension ho jata h... first rank lana h... aap dono ko stage pe jab award milta h... toh mujhe bohot kjhushi milti h... aap hamesha rote ho stage pe... mujhe hug karke... mujhe bohot achcha lagta h... " ,
" mere bachcho main hug kabhi bhi kar skti hu... aur yeh kya h... rank is not important beta... knowledge is... and ur parents are proud of you... samjhe aap... Ab khatam karo... ek sum baaki h naa... " ,
"aapko kaise pata.. " ,
"main idhar tabse dekh rhi hu... mera bachcha kitna mehanati h.." ,
"hogya who sum mujhe achese aata h... main apke godh mein so jaun..." ,
" kabhi mana kiya h... "

He kissed her and closed his eyes saying

"ab darr nahi lag rha h... mujhe mere saare exams ke pehle apke godh main sona h... ajeeb sae k confidence ,ilta h... " ,
"beta... sojao... main kahan jaa rhi hu..." ...

That brought tears in her eyes again...
"sorry beta ishima apko aaj godi main nahi sula payi..."

Her son kissed her tears and started playing with the prashad that was given to her..
It was 8 when they got back home... he was getting cranky as it was the time of his mother feed... and though she knew there wasn't any left... To offer to her son... but he was addicted to have some otherwise he use to get cranky... She sat there feeding him... when he drifted off to sleep... She made him lay in his cradle... and looked at him... As raman use to sleep the same way he is sleeping she thought to herself...

"Aapka beta , aphiki tarah sota h Raman... Aura phi ki tarah pareshan bhi karta h... Ravan Kumar..."

she smiled... after giving him a peck on his forehead.

This was her daily routine, she use to speak to the family photo ours.. She use to miss her in laws, she use to talk to each one of her family member, as she knew they would miss her...
After a week, It was a weekend... she was playing with the kid.. when a neighbour of her dropped in to invite her for her grand child naming ceremony... She asked ishita... what was her son's name... she dint think of that yet as she use to call him with some or the other cute names... or else ravankumar... Only to which the kid use to respond... but this thought of naming the kid... pushed her to some sweet memories she had, even before she was pregnant ...

"Raman... " ,
"hmmm... Thak gaye aaj... " ,
" aur nahi toh kya... madam maje le rhi thi... Maine saare kasrat kiye h... " ,

Ishita blushed and hid her self to him..."
"
ab next round ke liya tayaar kara ri ho kya... " ,
" raman... main bohot jyada tired hoon... please... " ,
" pagal madras an... dur hato phir... " ,
"kaise ho aap... RavanKumar... " ,
"arey hadd h... main bas chup chap... tumhe sehlate hue soch rha tha apne hone wale bachche ke bare mein tab seductively tumne bulaya... aura b... pasa palat rhi hu... " ,
" Hone wale bachche ka matlab... " ,
"ishita dekho doctor ne kahan naa ki... sab tekh h ab... aur hum mostly preferred days pet oh karte hi h... infact kab nahi karte... so I thought ki positive news jald hi aa jayegi... wat yu think..." , "hmmm... waise bachche ke bare mein kya soch rhe the... abhi se school ke admission ke line main khade hona h kya... " , "pagal madras an... main toh mere bachche ka naam soch rha tha..." , " bheje mein bheja h naa... Apko pata kaise h.. ki beta hoga yaa beti... kuch bhi raman... jab hoga tab sochenge... Faltu aap... " ,
"chup... do no genders main naam socha h maine... Tumhare murugan ne tumhare bheje main hi bheja nahi bheja h... but mere bheje main tuhara bhi bheja include kar ke bheja h... huh... " , "akdu... kadhus... Murugan... apne meri zindagi iss insaan ke saath kyun tai... kardi... huh... " ,
"yeh madras an... "

saying so he grabbed her to him... and nuzzled into her neck...

" raman please im tired not more... ",
"naam nahi sunna..." ,
"kinka... " ,
"bachchon kaa... ",
"raman ek se jyada nh... Pehle se hi adi ruhi h ... humare bachche... "
he bit her ears...
" planning insab main nahi karte... Murugan ka den hota h... aur main koyi protection use nahi krne wala... " ,
"aap bhi naa... chiii... kase bolte ho... .." ,
"naam sunegi ya nahi... " ,
"sunungi nahi toh jaise chod doge bina sunaye... bol do... " ,
"that's like my madrasan... ladka hua toh Subbu or ladki huyi toh shagun... " ,
"kya... "

ishita was shocked and moved out of his hold in a jerk...

" pagal ho kya yaar... majak kar rha tha... Pati ko aise koyi marta h kya... "

Raman was bleeding by then... she almost forgot everything and ran to get first aid after muttering sorry endless times...

" sorry raman... Main ekdum se ... Shock ho gayi thi... aap bhi naa... aise majak mat karte jao... " , "sorry yaar... mujhe kya pta Jhansi ki rani ne apna talwar sharply anticipation ke liye ready rakha tha... "

Ishita by then had tears..

" arey ab rona mat... kuch nahi hua... waise kal maa ko complaint kar dunga... " ,
"aap bhi naa... Mujhe pareshaan adi ruhi bhi nahi karte... jitna aap karte ho... " ,
"Achcha naam sunna h... " ,
"rehene do... aapko utpatang logon ke naam hi yaad aayenge..." ,
"Ladki huyi toh Tamanna... aur ladka hua toh... "

his son came to grab her attention to him... as she got back to reality... Her chain of thoughts broke as he asked her to play with her...
To Be Continued...😳😳
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Love my readers...😳😳
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nice update

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i dont know hindi please give english translation it helps me to read more easy dont mistake me

update soon eagerly waiting


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Posted: 10 years ago
So sorry forum wales... maar lo jitna maar na hai...
i wasn't well then... my personal things kept me busy...
then somehow i started writing as i lost my previously written updates... i had to re write them... and i forgot some some nuances of the story... i had to read it again to get into the context of the story and my lost updates...


I Hope you people remember me and this story...without further delay here is my update...

Part 6 - Do You Hate Me ??
-Shravs😳😳

"Adi pata hai jab mein tumhare age ka tha naa... tab mujhe mere daddaji laaye the idhar... woh bohot strict the... unhone mujhe idhar langar mein pure din sabji katvaye... pehle bohot gussa aa rha tha... fir badme... jab itne logon ko khate hue dekha toh mera mahnat jo bhi tha bhul gya... fir khud jaake parosne laga... raat tak wahi kiya... daddaji mujhe fir apne haat se khilaye... do din hum idhar tehre the... daddaji ko papa ne bataya tha ki mujhe wagah border ,Akal Takht , Tarn Taran Sahib gurudwara...Jallianwala Bagh yeh sab bhi dekhna hai... par maine khud ne inkaar kar diya tha... Usdin maine apne Rinky ke liye mannat maangi thi ki woh mere paas jaldi aajaye... "

"haawww... rinky bua ko kya hua tha...??"

"tumhari rinky bua kahin kho gyi thi..."

"kyaaa????"

"Arey matlab woh mujhe chodke kahin guide ke camp pe chali gyi thi aur sabne mujhe ullu banaya ki rinky ghar se kahin chali gyi... daddaji mujhe daant dapat ke amritsar laaye... aur bole ki mannat mang... wahe guru sab changa kr denge... fir maine yeh sab ki..."

"Papa... matlab hum agar idhar mannat mangenge... toh hume bhi mil jayegi... ishima..."

"Papa... Mummaaa mil jayegi hum bhi idhar seva karne tayar hai... please bolo naa papa... kya karen hum... hume dono ko mumma chahiye pls papa..."

Ruhi and Adi cried hugging him... He too broked down seeing them crying... before the pure sarovar of gurudwara...

"Mujhe bhi ishita chahiye... "

He said between his sobs... People started gathering these three people , those who were hugging , clunging on to each other as if they dont have any other support...


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"Ishita are you feeling better now..."

"haan..."

"Kya hua yaar..."

"subha se bohot thakan mehsoos... ho rha h... chakkar sa hai... vomiting bhi..."

"wat wat wat... itne jaldi gud news ??"

"kuch bhi mat bol hum toh..."

"ahem ahem... mujhe details nahi chahiye... check kar le saare symptoms aise hi hai doctor ji..."

"okay doctor"


Ishita (ST)

" kuch bhi... aise kaise ... ishu fir bhi ek baar check kar le... yeh sab bhi ab krna padega... ayiooo... y are you so messed up these days... Adi ruhi bhi school se aajayenge... raat ko test karle ab chal..."

In the night at Ishra Bedroom

"Isse pehle Raman aa jaye... ishu test karle jaldi se..."

"Ishu ... kaap kyun rhi hai... ho naa ho... kya faraq padta hai... anyways there is always a next chance... doctor ne usdin kaha na... common you can do it..."

she ripped open the kit...

"Ishu soch mat... Common use it..."

she used the kit... Closed her eyes shut...

"Ishu agar yeh bachcha hoga toh sab kitne khush honge naa... Raman toh will be in cloud nine... Mummyji papa ji... sab... finally amma mujhse baat karegi... jaise hamesha karti thi...baby iss baar i promise... i wont loose you... i will take care of you with all my might... ishu... bohot hogya... its well past a min... see the result... "

She opened her eyes to see two green lines indicating her that she was/is pergnant... whirlpool of emotions crossed her... she couldn't believe herself...her eyes... she rubbed her eyes to see the same... her eyes filled with tears of happiness... she was trembling now... she was so excited she didnt know what to do... how to disclose this news... Though doctor had adviced her to take it slow... but then... nothing was planned it just happened the way it had to... She came up to mirror... saw her happy face after many days... her face had contentment... she washed it,... She wanted to say it to her Ravan kumar first... She just went to the day when she said him about her first baby... their first baby... everything came back to her...

She laid down on the bed... Eveything came in front of eyes... Raman's over protectiveness , her kid's scared faces on raman's reactions... rest of the people's random advices , over pampering due to raman... She didn't want it that way... she wanted to pampered but not how raman made it the last time... He was taking care of her for sure... but it wasn't like how she wanted it to be... She didn't want her children to go through the same... She drifted off to sleep thinking about all these...

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"Ishita... Kitna soti ho yaar... ab uth bhi jao... "

"ravan kumar... mujhe sone do... dont disturb... ab tak che nh baje..."

"ohhh hooo pagal madrasan... its already 7.30... "

"kya..."

She got up startled... and held her stomach the next instances... took deep breathings... while raman was watching her antics surprised...

"ohhh hooo... ab natak mat karo... utho utho... maine sab ready kar diya un dono ko... chal chal... nashta khila de ruhi ko... woh kahana nahi khaa rhi hai..."

"CHup... thode der chup rho... Im not well Raman... warna kabhi main aise soti hu kya... aap aage peeche sochte nahi ho... "
Raman then got some seriousness...

"Kya hua re... are you okay now...??"

"Raman mujhe apse kuch importnant kehna hai... Woh main... woh mujhe... "

"kya hai... itna footage kyun khaa ri ho... "

"tich... Raman do teen din se mujhe chakkar aa rhe the... weak lag rha tha... "

"toh mujhe tab kyun nahi bataya... ab chalo doctor ke paas... "

"rukho... i know why this happened..."

"ohhh hello tum doctor nahi ho dentist ho... jyada dimag mat chalao... ab chalo..."

"Raman i think im pregnant..."

She said in a go... It took him sometime to understand the meaning of that sentence and react... He looked at her completely astonished... Not able to understand how, when, where... As if reading his thought process...

"Raman wohh... us din... Hotel suite mein... Doctor ne kaha toh tha... but i think... this time we will be more cautious..."

"Bakwas mat karo... Doctor ne already mana kiya hai naa... you are weak do you understand... "

"Raman , i got checked it with kit... its confirmed... If you want hum ek aur baar test karte hain... and doctor mana us ke liye kiya tha,... not for ... raman im okay... aur this time i assure you i will take good care of myself... "

"Achcha tekh hai... Fir tum apne amma ke ghar pe raho... if you want i will stay at the night there with you... bachchon ko jab milna hoga milna... but keep yourself away from any duty..."

"Raman... mujhe bas in sab cheezon se problem hai... Aap mujhe mere bachchon se alag nahi kar skte,... Main idhar isi ghar pe rahungi... Main khud ka khayal rakh sakti hoon... aap ainda woh sab mat kijiye... jo kiya tha... Bachche bohot tarumized ho gaye the... woh bas abhi normal hue hai... Aap unke saath normal hue hain... mujhe pata hai... Aaap apne sab bachchon se ek jaisa pyaar karte ho n all... but Raman Jatana bhi important hai... bas ruhi choti nahi hai... Adi is also in his adolecense,... Ussse yeh sab bohot affect karta hai... "

"Chup karo yaar apna lecture...Main pechle baar bhi galat nahi tha naahi ab hoon... I was just following Doctor's advice... Isiliye is baar main khud bola apna amma ke paas chale jao..."

Ishita had tears by this time...

"Raman ... KYa keh rhe ho aap... I promise you , that i will take good care of my self... Aap aise kyun behave karte ho when it comes to this matter... its as normal as Adi and ruhi's birth Raman... Mummyji ne mujhe kaha tha,... tab toh aap aise nahi the shagun ke saath... Ab mere saath hi aise kyun ... "

"Ab mere care se bhi problem hone lagi hai tumhe... "

"Raman main kya keh rhi hu... Aap klya keh rhe ho... "

"Mujhe toh tumhe sambhal na nahi aata hai... naa hi bachchon ko sambhal na aata hai... isiliye ... keh rha hu... Khud tum apna ekdum mast khayal rakh sakti ho... mere hone se naa hone se kya farq padta hai..."

"Raman ... faraq padta hai... mujhe apka saath chahiye... Matlab apne mujhe ab tak maaf nahi kiya naa... pechle baar jo hua uske liye..."

"Ishita... main tumhare aur mere bachchon ke beech kisi ek ko nahi chun sakta... mere liye sab barabar hai... main kisi ko bhi chaut pohchte nahi dekh sakta... It was tough for me then and now also..."

"Raman..."

"Mujhe meri tamanna kabhi nahi mil sakti Ishita... woh haar roz mere sapne mein aake mujhe puchti hai... mujhe miss karte ho kya papa... maa ka khayal rakhna... kya kay bolti hai meri tamanna pata hai tumhe... tum nahi samjhogi ishita... main aur nahi seh sakta... i dont have courage in me to support you through this... main iss baar dur se dekhunga... sab kuch... tum bhi dur ho jao... shayad main adi aur ruhi se mis behave naa karoon..."

"Raman aap kya bakwaas kar rhe ho..."

"mere feelings tumhe ab bakwas lagne lage h,..."

"Raman main hooon.. Apki Ishita... Aap mujhse dur reh na chahte ho... "

"Ishita please... Dont make it hard for me... yeh bachcha jab tak sahi salamat bahar nahi aa jata... tum apna khayal khud rakho... i cant blame myself neither you nor our children for anything... "

"Aap khud se mujhe alag kar rhe ho Raman..."

"Haan,... Jab tak yeh bachcha iss duniya ko naa dekh le..."

"Mujhe amma ke ghar jaane bol rhe ho... Main idhar nahi reh sakti..."

"dono humara hi toh ghar hai... idhar rhe udhar rhe kya farq padta hai... "
"Aap ek baat kaan khol ke sun lo... mere bachche mere saath rahenge... Apko kisi bhi cheeez mein mujhe maddad nahi karni hai naa... mujhe apne bachchon ko palne posne mein apki bhi kayi maddad nahi chahiye..."

"TUm baat ko ghuma rhi ho... Adi aur ruhi idhar hi rahenge... mere saath... i wanna be good father to them... I know i failed them last time..."

"And now you are not only failing this (pointing towards her stomach) child of urs but also his/her mom and ur wife... great... main jaa rhi hoon... "


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"Beta aap log udhar roo kyun rhe the... gurudwara aake yun koyi rote nahi beta... idhar sab cheez ka hal mil jata hai... matta teko... wahe guru se mang lo jo chahiye... unhe sabko dene ki adat hai beta... aap ko jo bhi chahiye ... unse mango..."

"uncle kya meri Ishima mujhe mil jayegi wapas... woh kahin ghum gayi hai..."

"puttar... yethe matta tek... tainu ishima te mil jaani h... le... prasaad khaa le..."

"uncle mujhe idhar apne mumma ke liye seva karna hai... mannat mangi hai maine..."

"puttar idhar koyi bhi seva kar sakda hai... chalo..."

"uncle main bhi kar sakti hu..."

"haan... Aaap sabko paani peela sakte ho... pyaase ko paani dene se wahe guru toh aur khush ho jate hai..."

Adi and ruhi headed to their mission while Raman sat there wondering their love for their Ishima/Mumma... He thought to himself...

"I can never fullfil your void ishita... You were right... I can never ever make you understand... why all that happened... why i reacted that way... why i had that over protection towards my tammana... i can never explains things neither to you nor to myself... but yes... maa sabki hoti hai... kisi ek kaa khayal rakh ke baki bachchon ko nahi chod sakti... maine bhi unhe choda nahi tha ishita... mujhe bas kuch samjh nahi aaya... main itna utavla ho gya tammana ko leke ki baaki cheezen bhul gya... par... tumhe mujhe chodke nhai jaana tha... Mujhe tumne kuch bhi nahi bataya... Mujhe ab bhi yeh samjh nahi aayi ki tum mujhe chod ke gayi hi kyun... mujhe samjhana kya chahti ho... kya tumhe nahi pata main adi aur ruhi se kitna pyaar karta hooon... Tumhe pata hai... maine kaise kaise apne din aur raat gujare hai... main pagal ho gya tha..."

He closed his eyes... Taking deep breathes... Marched towards Seva center and started chopping the vegetables as well with Adi...


To Be Continued...😳

I'm Not that religious person... But working in a gurudwara made me experience something new and different... so i used it here... though it wont be a ek maiyya drama like ishu will come running to them and all... its just that these people are doing something out of their interest...

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Love You all...
-Shravs😳


Edited by shravsss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
🥳
i was waiting for you...
when you'll be green..

then one fine day you appeared and i was like...the update is coming..
it will be here any time soon..😳

i was expecting happy wala ishra scenes..
what we got is an emotional one..
Raman is like..😕
i felt sorry for him even though he himself is responsible for this..

this is me after reading the updates(all)..😆


this is for Anamika..yaar tumne sahi bola..😭
Rula diya Sharvune..😆

this is for you..welcome back dear..😳


I liked the Gurudwara scene rey..
so you went there..i wish i'll go there once..

i am also not expecting Ishra milan in Ekta's way..😆

but i m surely looking for ADI-RUHI-ISHITA & RAMAN JUNIOUR and RAMAN-JUNIOUR milan..i won't mind ekta's style also..SILLY ME😆

update soon..😳

P.S you had mentioned you weren't well..so what happened..
Edited by nitii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nitii

RES🥱

will unres in the morning

P.S Missed you a lot dear😭



Nitiii... Miss you a lot too dear,,...
will make it up for you...😳😳...

i got ur wishes...
Thanks a lot darling...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss



Nitiii... Miss you a lot too dear,,...
will make it up for you...😳😳...

i got ur wishes...
Thanks a lot darling...😳😳


@bold..you better be😭 😭 i was stalking this forum to catch you like pagal😒
me..being all emotional..😭 😭 😭
anyways welcome back dear🤗🤗🤗
belated Happy Birthday🥳

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for updating. I understand now why Ishita left, its very good story. The love that Raman cleared the misunderstanding and now, he is back to normal. I really love the mission to bring ishita back. I would love to read more how he pacifies ishita.please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
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First lemme cry 😭 😭 😭, Phir will be back with rest of the comment

I loved the Gurudwara scene...
Raman explaining his kids was really good
Really... It feels heavenly when someone is happy because of our hard work.
I would really be glad if I'm the reason for someone's happiness

I took Chotu breaks in between the whole update kyunki I. was searching my Hanky... itna emotional 😭
Phir when I read that Ishita is pregnant
But was lil afraid of Raman's reaction after the pichli baar ka incident
Arrey... Jhagda 😲
Yeh kya kardiya Didu aapne...
Serious mamla hai boss but Raman shouldn't have been that rude to her
I mean we can understand his feelings of losing Tamanna but he can't completely blame ishita

Aww... Tamanna baby comes in Raman's dream... this part was so damn emotional

Ruko...Another hanky aaya
but now also I'm not quite clear why Ishita went away? I mean leaving adi and Roo behind?

Aww... Adi and Ruhi working in Gurudwara
I wish to do that once 😳
Last lines of this update by Raman 😭

Overall, emotional yet beautiful update
You connect with the readers with your writing 👏

expecting some haappy days in further updates
Continue soon
Ab no Rona...after you told 😃

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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