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Hi Friends...
I was away from forum with respect to posting my writings and all such things... though I use to read all my fav writer's fan fictions...
I apologize for not continuing my very first work... as I lost the track of the story myself... and I will give a last part to it sooner... And finish it off...
This story came randomly to me... Just without a second thought I have written it down... I hope it sounds interesting enough...
And lemme know your feedback about the same...
With no more ranting let me tell you about the story...
Character sketch is almost the same as the YHM.. we fell in love with...
The situation or the base of the story you will come to know as n when it progresses...
Let me know how you find it...
Har Roz Unki Yaado Me Hum Khote Hain..
Unki Tasveer Ankho Me Lekar Sote Hain..
Bheeg Na Jaaye Ye Tasveer Ansuon Se..
Isliye Hum Ankho Se Nahi Dil Se Rote Hain..!
Unki Tasveer Ankho Me Lekar Sote Hain..
Bheeg Na Jaaye Ye Tasveer Ansuon Se..
Isliye Hum Ankho Se Nahi Dil Se Rote Hain..!
-My Viddu(Vidya_Prasad)
Thank You For this beautiful piece of work dear...
I'm happy that this story stirred this in you to write this...
Love You baby Boo , My Princess...
Sorry For the typos 😳😳
UNIQUE LOVE #3 Do You Hate Me
- Shravs😳
"kaise ho aap" ,
"tekh hoon.. tum.." ,
"hmmm..." ,
"aur..." ,
"aap kahiye..." ,
"wahan sab tekh h...conference n all " ,
"haan tekh h... log helpful h... aur yeh conference bhi.." ,
"hmm... Aur.. " ,
"hmmm..." ,
"aap ko neend aa rhi h toh so jayiye... Thak gye honge... waise bhi bachche pareshan kar rhe honge... main hu nahi toh..." ,
"tum ka baa rhi ho..." ,
"next week most probably bataya toh tha aapko..." ,
"most probably matlab...?????" ,
"aa... raman chilla kyun rhe ho... woh ek medical camp h... free service for orphanage children... main free service dena chahti thi...",
"pehle apne bachchon ko dekho idhar aake... Idhar kr lo jo karna h... Chennai mein jaake baitke... mera dimaag kharab naa karo...Bachche aur baki sab tumhe bohot miss kar rhe h...",
"Main janti hu... kaun mujhe kitna miss krta h..." ,
"janti ho toh natak kyun..."
Ishita was thinking of their conversation that had happened once upon a time, it happened in their life, her happy days... will it ever be the same ... Ishita thought to0 herself... when her son came crawling to her n held her kurti to get up on his legs... She smiled seeing his child... And got back to being a mother , the only relationship she was left with in the whole of the world.. At least that's what she thought of herself..
"kya hua... hass rhe ho bohot... Puri tarah ravan kumar ke carbon copy ho...ekdum... apne papa ki tarah haste ho...."
The Child smiled more... He use to even kick her when he was in her tummy at the mention of RavanKumar...
"Chalo ab jaldi se hum breakfast karenge aur... Aap apne mini play school main enjoy karna... main clinic main... Okay bachchu..."
As if the kid will understand she use to talk to it right from the day one... but to her surprise her son use to respond to her every emotion... he was her solace ... he use to make her smile...he use to support her... without even knowing...
After dropping him to his care takers house, she left to the clinic.. As she entered... Her eyes searched for a pictured and went nearer to it.. Its was her family photo... It had all her near and dear ones.. Her Parents, Sister, their extended family , Her in laws , her Raman and especially her two kids.. her eye scanned the two innocent children, whom she was sure would miss her a lot. Her eyes got teary...
"Ru bachcha... Apki ishima apko bohot miss karti h... and apki ishima ko pata h... ki ru unse gussa h... Sorry beta... Have a gud day as always... Keep smiling the whole day beta... Murugan... bless my child... ADI... Beta mummaa misses you a lot... Aap apke exams achese dena... I wish you all the best and best of luck beta... tension mat lena... Aapke saare papers ache jayenge... I am sure... have a good day beta... "
Her eye scanned to the person who was standing next to her with his hands on her shoulders possessively marking her as his in the family photo.. her face changed to an unknown emotion... She couldn't express herself.. she saw him again and turned around... but again turned back looked at him...
"Have a good day... Sorry... I Love You... "
This was what she was able to say... tears trickled down her cheeks.. .. she wiped it off... put on her medi coat... and beeped to let know the sister that she was at service.
She use to attend all the patients ... Use to call every half an hour to the care taker of her child... just to confirm he is okay... She use to speak to him over the call... though the response she use to get was ... His cute humming-s... As the clock hit 6 in the evening... she looked at her opd left overs... She was done with all of them.. She called it off for the day.. as she was already missing her son... she packed all the stuff... turned around to see the picture which makes her feel some solace..
"Tang mat karna papa ko... have a tight sleep ... ishima kal jaldi aa jaungi... "
, her eyes darted to the person who had his hands on her... And she didn't know what to say him... Again went numb... and she could say only...
"I love you ... Take care of yourself and kids... will meet you soon tomo.."
with that she turned and left her cabin..
Took her kid from the care takers home... warmly wishing them a goodbye... she started for some grocery shopping... She kept all the bags inside the car locked it... and took her kid to the Temple nearby... she prayed for all of their wellness... poured oil on the diya... prayed especially for Adi's exams as she was aware of his fear...
"Ishimaa... main padhlunga... aap jaake so jao naa... aap kyun nahi so rha ho... ots my exams... " , " adi... Chalo padhayi pe concentrate karo... Main bhi padh rhi hu naa... Waise im not sleepy at all beta... " ,
" ishimaa... kal mera exam achese jayega naa... "
She knew this was coming... as he use to take in the pressure of scoring in his exams... and getting first rank was his aim..
"haan beta... Mere bte ka exam achcha nahi jaye toh aur kiska achcha jaa sakta h beta... ab dekho its ur fifth revision... yeh khatam karke... so jaoge... ishima apko sulaye gi... samjhe beta..." , " ishimaaa ... nahi... Bas ek aur baar fevise karlun... Confidence bad jayegi... Please...",
" raat ke bara baje se yehi keh rahe ho beta... Its already going to be 2 am... " ,
"sorry ishima... apko bhi tang kar rha hu... but mujhe pata nahi... tension ho jata h... first rank lana h... aap dono ko stage pe jab award milta h... toh mujhe bohot kjhushi milti h... aap hamesha rote ho stage pe... mujhe hug karke... mujhe bohot achcha lagta h... " ,
" mere bachcho main hug kabhi bhi kar skti hu... aur yeh kya h... rank is not important beta... knowledge is... and ur parents are proud of you... samjhe aap... Ab khatam karo... ek sum baaki h naa... " ,
"aapko kaise pata.. " ,
"main idhar tabse dekh rhi hu... mera bachcha kitna mehanati h.." ,
"hogya who sum mujhe achese aata h... main apke godh mein so jaun..." ,
" kabhi mana kiya h... "
He kissed her and closed his eyes saying
"ab darr nahi lag rha h... mujhe mere saare exams ke pehle apke godh main sona h... ajeeb sae k confidence ,ilta h... " ,
"beta... sojao... main kahan jaa rhi hu..." ...
That brought tears in her eyes again...
"sorry beta ishima apko aaj godi main nahi sula payi..."
Her son kissed her tears and started playing with the prashad that was given to her..
It was 8 when they got back home... he was getting cranky as it was the time of his mother feed... and though she knew there wasn't any left... To offer to her son... but he was addicted to have some otherwise he use to get cranky... She sat there feeding him... when he drifted off to sleep... She made him lay in his cradle... and looked at him... As raman use to sleep the same way he is sleeping she thought to herself...
"Aapka beta , aphiki tarah sota h Raman... Aura phi ki tarah pareshan bhi karta h... Ravan Kumar..."
she smiled... after giving him a peck on his forehead.
This was her daily routine, she use to speak to the family photo ours.. She use to miss her in laws, she use to talk to each one of her family member, as she knew they would miss her...
After a week, It was a weekend... she was playing with the kid.. when a neighbour of her dropped in to invite her for her grand child naming ceremony... She asked ishita... what was her son's name... she dint think of that yet as she use to call him with some or the other cute names... or else ravankumar... Only to which the kid use to respond... but this thought of naming the kid... pushed her to some sweet memories she had, even before she was pregnant ...
"Raman... " ,
"hmmm... Thak gaye aaj... " ,
" aur nahi toh kya... madam maje le rhi thi... Maine saare kasrat kiye h... " ,
Ishita blushed and hid her self to him..."
"
ab next round ke liya tayaar kara ri ho kya... " ,
" raman... main bohot jyada tired hoon... please... " ,
" pagal madras an... dur hato phir... " ,
"kaise ho aap... RavanKumar... " ,
"arey hadd h... main bas chup chap... tumhe sehlate hue soch rha tha apne hone wale bachche ke bare mein tab seductively tumne bulaya... aura b... pasa palat rhi hu... " ,
" Hone wale bachche ka matlab... " ,
"ishita dekho doctor ne kahan naa ki... sab tekh h ab... aur hum mostly preferred days pet oh karte hi h... infact kab nahi karte... so I thought ki positive news jald hi aa jayegi... wat yu think..." , "hmmm... waise bachche ke bare mein kya soch rhe the... abhi se school ke admission ke line main khade hona h kya... " , "pagal madras an... main toh mere bachche ka naam soch rha tha..." , " bheje mein bheja h naa... Apko pata kaise h.. ki beta hoga yaa beti... kuch bhi raman... jab hoga tab sochenge... Faltu aap... " ,
"chup... do no genders main naam socha h maine... Tumhare murugan ne tumhare bheje main hi bheja nahi bheja h... but mere bheje main tuhara bhi bheja include kar ke bheja h... huh... " , "akdu... kadhus... Murugan... apne meri zindagi iss insaan ke saath kyun tai... kardi... huh... " ,
"yeh madras an... "
saying so he grabbed her to him... and nuzzled into her neck...
" raman please im tired not more... ",
"naam nahi sunna..." ,
"kinka... " ,
"bachchon kaa... ",
"raman ek se jyada nh... Pehle se hi adi ruhi h ... humare bachche... "
he bit her ears...
" planning insab main nahi karte... Murugan ka den hota h... aur main koyi protection use nahi krne wala... " ,
"aap bhi naa... chiii... kase bolte ho... .." ,
"naam sunegi ya nahi... " ,
"sunungi nahi toh jaise chod doge bina sunaye... bol do... " ,
"that's like my madrasan... ladka hua toh Subbu or ladki huyi toh shagun... " ,
"kya... "
ishita was shocked and moved out of his hold in a jerk...
" pagal ho kya yaar... majak kar rha tha... Pati ko aise koyi marta h kya... "
Raman was bleeding by then... she almost forgot everything and ran to get first aid after muttering sorry endless times...
" sorry raman... Main ekdum se ... Shock ho gayi thi... aap bhi naa... aise majak mat karte jao... " , "sorry yaar... mujhe kya pta Jhansi ki rani ne apna talwar sharply anticipation ke liye ready rakha tha... "
Ishita by then had tears..
" arey ab rona mat... kuch nahi hua... waise kal maa ko complaint kar dunga... " ,
"aap bhi naa... Mujhe pareshaan adi ruhi bhi nahi karte... jitna aap karte ho... " ,
"Achcha naam sunna h... " ,
"rehene do... aapko utpatang logon ke naam hi yaad aayenge..." ,
"Ladki huyi toh Tamanna... aur ladka hua toh... "
his son came to grab her attention to him... as she got back to reality... Her chain of thoughts broke as he asked her to play with her...
To Be Continued...😳😳
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