Unique Love #3 : Ishra - Do You Hate Me UPDATED 4th OCT pg 58 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Interesting update. Excited to know what will happen next.


thanks dear😳😳..
will update keeping in mind ur excitement😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu1234

Read all d parts in a go...very nice

Update soon


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thank you so much...
will update soon...😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: whitelily

fabulous update👍🏼


thanks dear...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

awesome part dear

loved it
do continue soon


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yes i will ...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story :) When r u updating nxt ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz pm me whn u update it's amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for being this late...
Hope you all remember me and this story...
I had to get settled in a new place so it kept me away from updating...

Without further delay , Here's the Story's Next Update...

Not Proof Read... As always so Look over the typos... If any...

Part 9
Do You Hate Me
--- Shravs😳😳





Ishita sat in the bed breastfeeding the baby...

"kabhi bhi uth jate ho... fir do minute mein so bhi jate ho... mujhe neend nahi lagti..."

she mumbled... Baby came out of the pallu and started staring her...

"Kya ... Kya ghoor rhe ho... ab so bhi jao... kaam hai amma ko..."

She started humming for him to sleep.. and he too started humming in his own way...

"kanna please da... thoongu (sleep) ... Mujhe bohot kaam pade h baby..."

"mmm...m.m.m...m..."(baby voice)

"Tumhari nani ko main aise hi pareshaan karti thi... toh ab tum mujhe aise pareshaan kar rhe ho... baby i have to put your clothes to dry please... sleep..."

"m.m.m...m...m...mm...aa...am..m...aaa..."

"enna da...(what dear??)"

Baby started playing with her hand licking it... which she was pointing... Ishita stared at the baby then she saw the engagement ring... which her baby was trying to get from her finger..

"arey... kya kar rhe ho... itne saare khilone h... fir bhi mere mangalsutra aur wedding ring se hi khelna hai tumhe... huh...Ravan kumar part 2..."

"hasso mat"

"kya hai... achcha fir idhar hi raho khelte ... main tumhare kapde sukhati hoon..."

He didn't let her go... she put him on his walker and moved to washing area to get the clothes out of washing machine... when she heard him cry and trying to move towards her...

"ayiyoo... dei... (arey baba) ... kahan peeche peeche aa rhe ho... ruko do minute... amma will be back... please.. "

she pouted cutely...As promised she was back to him soon... and both started playing...

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Flash Back



"Ishita... dekho baat ko samjh ne ki koshish karo... Mein darr gya hoon... Mujhse nahi hoga aur... "

"Aap hi ne toh kaha ki main ghar se nikal jaun... toh yahin sahi... hospital mein main tekh hu raman... main amma/appa ko kya bataun koi main kyun udhar aake reh rhi hoon... mummyji papaji kya sochenge... isiliye mujhe yahi sahi lag rha h ki main yaha rahun... idhar mujhe kisi bhi cheez se problen nh h... haan bas mere idhar koyi apne nahi h...pechle baar saare apne the toh mera bachcha mujhse paraya hogaya... is baar mere apne paraye hogaye toh shayad yeh bachcha apna lun..."

" bakwaas mat karo... chalo ghar... sab pareshaan hai... woh humare jhagde ke bare mein nahi jante..."

" yeh apka faisla tha raman ...ki main ghar se chale jaun..."

"Dekho bohot hogaya chalo... "

"Mujhe abhi bas doctor ke paas jana h.. jayiye Aap yahan se mujhe late ho rha h..."

"kyun doctor???"

"kal test kiya tha raman... Confirm bhi toh karna hai naa...I'm already tensed... Aaj result lene ke liye bulaya hai..."

"chalo main bhi chalta hoon..."

"Nahi Nahi... yeh apki responsibility nh h... main khud..."

"hogaya taane maar ke... chalogi ab???"


Raman sat with kids sleeping in either side of his shoulders thinking about all these... and drifted off to sleep..

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Ishita was cleaning the photo frame of her and Raman... Talking to the kid animatedly telling him about his father's antics...

"Dei Unakku teriyuma??? "
(hey... You Know)

"Your Appa was very ruthless when i met him first but your Ru di was so angelic ... Because of her we got into a relationship we couldn't even term as friendship... Phir dheere dheere sab badla... phir humari zindagi mein Adi bhaiyya bhi shamil hue... bohot khush the hum log..."
"Tumhare appa ne ru di aur adi bhaiyya ko bohot bigaad te hain... itne khiloune , its saare bahar ke fast food items... aur uparse bahr jaake khilate bhi nahi bas tv ke samne woh video games ke saath bait jate the... itna gussa aata tha naa... phir mujhe bolte hai main lecture deti hoon... iss baat pe teeno ke teeno ekjuth ho jate the... Ishima lecture mat do... madrasan lecture mat do... huh... tum kya hass rhe ho chotu... tum bhi un logon ke saath shaamil hoke yeh bolo ge kya... ki amma lecture band karo... haa... "

Saying that she picked him up..while baby was happy to see amma in a good mood... started humming irrelevantly while ishita was amused seeing him playing with Raman's photo that was in the table...

"I wonder what will your appa do seeing you...appa will not let your feet touch the ground... he will be pampering you like never before... and me adi ru... we all will be so J of you... dont smile... you are just like him... huh... Sab pyaar sirf ek insaan pe nikal dena... ab main hoon toh kisi ke paas nahi jaoge jab appa aajayenge toh im sure amma ke paas bhi nahi aaoge...you are just like that ravan kumar... my Ru and Adi will support me... you go to ur appa... "

Baby drags the photo to himself and Ishita holds that for him...

"Hawww... you are going also... Poo... Poda go to your... dont come to me... ... I'm not talking to you..."

Saying that she drops him down with Raman's photo and the baby happily starts playing with the photo...

" you started playing also... tum bhi tumhare appa ke jaise ho... bahar se kuch aur... andar se kuch aur... "

Baby casts his eyes to see his amma's banters and stares at her... She sees him back down , her eyes sees the invitation card of baby naming ceremony which her neighbour had given her.

"Tumhari pati and dadi bohot gussa hone wale hain... maine tumhara naamkaran nahi kiya... naam toh pata hai kya rakhna hai... Ravan kumar ne pehle hi Naam jo rakh diya... "



"and your Appa ab tum dekhoge toh sochoge amma ne appa ke bare sab kuch galat bataya hai... kyun ki ab utne hi sober ho gaye hain... main bhi chauk jati thi kabhi kabhi... par unka ghussa... kya bataun tumhe ki woh kaise ghussa karte hai... bas muh pe jo aaya chilla dete hain..."

"Us din bhi toh aise hi muh pe jo aaya bol diya... Raman apko main janti hoon... aap ghusse main kuch bhi bol dete hen... maine us din react nahi karna chahiye tha... meri hi galti thi... amma tekh kehti hai... jab kisi ke bare mein janti ho... toh unjaan nahi bante... maine apke ghusse ko humesha nazar andaz kiya hai... par usdin main shayad khud se bhi nazar thi ki maine aise ... Galat kiya maine Raman... Adi Ruhi se kiya wada maine thod diya... apne hi ghusse mein... maine apna ghar thod diya ... Mujhe aise nahi karna chahiye... shayad mujhe laut aana chahiye... "

Listening to her banters her son slept on her lap while she drifted off to an uneasy slumber as well... when her doorbell rang... she got up startled and the baby started crying... As she tried to calm him down and get to the door to open it... she was astonished to see the person...

"Aap"

To Be Continued...😳😳😆

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Edited by shravsss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
"Aap"
Not fair..U stopped it here 😲

Wow Awesome update..But small one thou..
i loved the Junior Ravan Kumar More..
He is too cute..
Flashback is so sad..infact Silly fight 😆
Raman is still travelling with the Kids..
Hope that APP is Raman only
Ishimaa is giving her lecture as always..But she misses Raman so much 😳
Are u saying that she'll go with Raman without any struggle 😆
Update soon..❤️
Edited by nitii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Miss you a lot 😭
Hope u are having a blast 🥳
Edited by nitii - 10 years ago

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