FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Where gan posted the cover pic,pls tell me d page

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SA1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Excellent update.I just love this FF!!!!

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.TIA.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Gan- I just love love love that cover pic 😃 Ur a rockstar 😛

Vee this was really good 😊 Unlike what I heard of it being blah or something of tht sort right 😲😡

Liked the way how u have shown Ashoks fear n anxiety of loosing. Shagun being a little shocked at Ramans wedding, that too it being a love marriage 😃

Loved the hug 😳 N Ruhi catching them red handed 😉 😆

Too cute ❤️ Love it 👏

Edited by .TIA. - 10 years ago

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Vee,,,,u updated... gosh this is so beautiful..after reading writers like u...it is so so difficult to pen one myself... How do u do it re?? seriusly? How do u do it...i bow down to u..

U are the BEST. Bas. Bol Diya. 👏 No more arguments. 😆

ur description for shagun cracked me up...tooo good. I love u...

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Deep

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

awesome part veeann and truely u r a amezing writer...i loved every part of da ff👏

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Isha Pathare

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

wooow such a wonderful part loved it

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ABI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

No matter what, I'm sure Raman and Ishita are still a little scared that they might lose Ruhi but I'm happy the social worker saw how much love there is between all 3 of them. I really do hope that this custody matter ends today with Ruhi staying with Raman and Ishita forever.

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: fugitives123
Yay first to comment!!😛

First of all, Gan 👏👏👏 for the cover pic...it is brilliant and is perfect for this story!

Vee, the best part I like about Desire is the amount of positivity it radiates, a much needed quality on the show. The characters are well outlined so there is no ambiguity. I love how you concentrate on the minute details...like mentioning what Shagun feels about getting Ruhi back, her appointments, her jewellery, Ishita's concern on Ruhi will react to Shagun, her worrying if Raman will miss Adi, her uneasiness about the secret wedding and so on. These are things that viewers notice and the makers ignore but I'm glad you could highlight them. I love the song Tujhse naaraaz!!

As always this was an awesome update. I love the lil romance they could have given the place and situation. Lage raho!! Muaah!!

Aww thanks Ann. I know I treat Shagun cruelly, but anyone who leaves behind a six month old baby is not redeemable for me

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
Vee you had me at Tujhse Nazar Nahi! So poignant and well written that I could palpate the hug in the courtroom and I could feel the warmth of Ishima-Ruhi bond through your brilliant writing.
Gurl you izz so talented that the Man Booker prize is awaiting to present itself to you! JK Rowling be damned!

Hmm , yes, indeed, Man Booker and J K Rowling. You forgot Aristotle.

Disclaimer: Doc is just joking people. It's an in joke thing. She doesn't really mean it. I am on very strong painkillers today but I am not deluded. Just so you know.

Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago