FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#411

wonderful update Vee thanks for the flashback. Now both can't live without each other but you still send Raman to Mumbai. Hop he come back on time for the court opening. Next one will be the tuff part how to convince both family and they have to speak up about their relation in front of the judge. Hope you will update next part soon.Have a wonderful weekend dear.🤗🤗

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Brilliant and amazing update...

Awesome...👏👏

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#413

Eeeks @ R A M A ... err N toh reh hi gaya 😉😆

Super update V ...and nahiii, he can't leave her like that #Judaai is tough

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#414

Lovely update! 😳

Oh, the name search bit was so sensuous. Beautifully written.

And what's with the mini separation? Have a feeling that trouble is brewing!

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Rivka

@Rivka

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#415

it was so romantic.

must admit hot tooo.

really loved the update.

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Abhinaiscool

@Abhinaiscool

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#416

Romantic sensuous not at all OTT that's the best about your writing vee...

An aagey kya hoga eagerly waiting for the next one...

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143rhb

@143rhb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#417

Yeh vee pls update soon yaar.

Waiting.

Pls pm me

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#418

Wen will be d next update...???

Please update soon...

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#419

Guys thank you for all the lovely comments.

I am so sorry I havent done individual responses and that I haven't updated, but work was insane busy and I haven't been well, so haven't been able to write when at home.

Okay, I will update either today or tomorrow and then again on Sunday, so the blerry story moves forward. Next couple of updates are about custody so there will be a bit of Shagun too. Sorry, but it's kind of unavoidable. I will try to put in some romance, but don't expect too much hotness from the ff this weekend. Maybe we can get some in the show instead??? 😆

Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago