ISHRARU TS: ISHIMA MEIN AAPKEHE BETI HOON.. updated part 2 page 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Awww...Ru baby heard everything. Can't wait for the next update, lots to look forward to...😊


thank u soo much..
i think i ll be able to make up to ur expectations..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Res 😎

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Pehle to tight hug 🤗 for dedicating the lovely part to me and then another one 🤗 for updating so soon.. And the third one for such a lovely part 🤗

Ishita's condition is so vulnerable.. Raman promises to bring her smile back. Her smile and happiness lies in Ruhi . I hope he gets succeeded.. Ruhi has heard him venting his heart out.. She has heard her father loves her so does her mother. I guess she would understand though its very tough for a kid to understand but hope she does..


Ab next ke liye zyada wait mat karwana.. Waiting eagerly for the next part...


Sun na.. First page pe title change karke likh de 1st part updated on page 2 27/3. Taaki sabko pata chal jaaye u updated..


awww sakshu... thank u soo much for the lovely comment
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
i really hope i could meet to ur expectation n u ll find the next part too worth reading..
haann mein edit kiya first page pe..
ab jab meine ithne jaldi ek update diya hai toh
next part keliye ek din toh wait karna padega na..😉😉
ll be updating soon..
at the max by tomorow morning..😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
interesting... i guess yeh track shayad baad mein dikhadenge show mein.. hopefully.. i like it :-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was perfect
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story👏 plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello backs.. this is the last part... as this is just a ts i have not gone deeper in some scenes.. if its a ss it would have been more appropriate to go in detail.. as am very impatient to see ruhi back to her ishima.. wanna see them together with the same love n affection as soon as possible.. n i don't think this is gonna happen onscreen any time sooner... according to the new olv... mujhe dhoor dhoor tak yeh din nazar nahi aaraha hai... Am sure u guys can easily guess the ending... but am not sure whether u ppl will really like the way i have ended... this has turned out to be a lengthier update please do bare with me.. i really hope u ppl ll find this worth reading... do read n give ur valuable comments n criticisms are most welcome in any form... am eagerly waiting for ur reviews...

PART 2:

He felt some feather like touches on his cheeks wiping his tears away. He opened his eyes and was shocked to see ruhi.

Raman "ruhi.. tum yahan, aap sorahethe na beta.. kya huva"

Ruhi who has suddenly waken up in the middle of the sleep, has come to fetch water and ended up listening to her dad n chachu's conversation. She was shocked to know that her brother had tried to kill himself, though she couldn't understand how is she going to her ishima and her adi bhaiyya's life is connected.. but all she understood was her ishima has left her to shagun for saving her adi bhaiyya and her ishima n papa loved her the most.

Mihir "ruhi, kya huva beta chup kyun ho.. kuch chahiye tume.. chachu ko bolo"

Ruhi hugged raman tightly and started crying shocking both raman and mihir.

Raman "ruhi kyun roraheho beta..papa ko batha.. kisine tume kuch kaha.. bolo beta" Raman made her face him and wiped her tears away.

Ruhi "papa mujhe aapke aur ishima ke saath rehna hai.. shagun mumma ke saath nahi"

Raman was so happy to hear those words from ruhi but he was also confused as ruhi was angry at them all these days.. he couldn't understand wat made ruhi forget all her anger..

Raman "ruhi shagun mummane kuch bola tume.."

Ruhi "nahi papa.. woh.. mein.. meine.."

Raman "bolo ruhi.. "

Ruhi "meine aapke aur chachu ka baath sunliya hai"

Raman and mihir both were shocked after hearing this.. they couldn't understand wat would have ruhi would have understood from their talk, again shocking them ruhi innocently asked them

Ruhi "papa adi bhaiyya suicide karne jaarahe the issliye ishima ne mujhe shagunke saath chod diya"

Raman was silent for a second and then he slowly nodded his head.

Ruhi "papa aaphe kehathe hona ruhi daadi amma hai.. tho aapne aur ishima ne mujhe kyun nahi bathaya.. aapne sochana ruhi abhi choti bache hai woh nahi samjege.. par papa ruhi apne ishima aur papa ka dard samaj sakthe hai"

Ruhi held her ears and said "mujhe maaf karo papa.. meine aapse aur ishimase bahuth rudely baath kiya na.. am sorry papa.. ruhi is very sorry papa.."

Raman couldn't hold back, he hugged ruhi and both the daughter - dad dup cried their heart out. Seeing his nannies ruhi talking this maturedly made him feel proud about his wife ishita, the way she had brought up their daughter.

Raman "ruhi.. chalo ab aise rovo math.. papa aur ishima aapse kabhi gussa nahi hosakthe.. ruhi ab tum jaakar sojav, papa aur ishima tume jaldi ghar lekar jaayenge"

Ruhi "pakka na papa... mujhe jaldile chalo papa.. shagun mumma phirse ashok uncleke paas le chal rahe hai.."

Mihir "ruhi.. ashok uncle ke paas.. kisne bathaya aap ko.."

Ruhi "chachu aapko patha nahi.. shagun mumma ne bola... ashok uncle keliye kuch mod... mod.."

Raman "shagun ne tume modelling karne ko kaha ruhi"

Ruhi "haan papa modelling"

Mihir was shocked. Raman's anger reached the rooftop, he thought of waking her up and give her a piece of mind, but mihir stopped him.

Raman "ruhi papa tume jaldi ghar lekar jaayenge.. tum fikar math karo.. ab tum java aur soja beta papa bi chalthe hai.. aur ruhi shagun mumma se kuch nahi kehana teeke.. tume aise naatak karni hogeke tum apne ishimase ab bhi katti ho warna shagun mumma phir kuch gadbad kardegi.."

Mihir "bhai aap yeh sab humare ruhiko bolneke zaroorat nahi hai.. yeh hamari bahuth samajdhar bachi hai.. haina rihi"

Ruhi "haan chachu.." saying so they both hified "par papa aap jaldi mujhe ishima ke paas lechalo.. mein ishima ke bina nahi rehasakthi hoon papa.. ruhi apne ishima aur papa se bahuthh pyaar karthi hai"

Raman "promise beta.. mein tume jaldi apne ishima ke paas lekar jaavunga.. ab tum sojav teeke.. good night ruhi"

Ruhi "good night papa.. i love you papa"

Raman"i love too ruhi"

After waving to ruhi raman left from mihir house. Initially he thought of sharing his conversation with ruhi to ishita but then he dropped the idea.

Raman's self talk "nahi abhi mein ishitase kuch nahi bolunga.. agar shagun ko isske baaremein banak bhi padena woh zaroor kuch gadbad kardegi.. iss baar mein aise kuch galath nahi karsaktha.. bas kuch dinke baath hai.. aur phir ruhi apne ishimake saath hoge.." thinking so he drove back to his house planning his side of game. As he entered his room he heard ishita still murmuring, he went and sat next to next and caressed her hair, as if recognising his touch even her deep slumber, she held his hand tightly and said "raman, ruhi nahi hai toh kya aap bhi mujhe chod doge kya.. mein ruhi aur aapke bina nahi jeesakthi.. raman.. ruhi.." Raman understood she is disturbed way too much, he gently kissed her forehead and whispered into her ears that he ll never leave her and felt ishita relaxing, he kissed her forehead again and ishita cuddled more close to him. Both slept hugging each other.

After this, raman had been executing his part of the game, not only he tried making ishita feel better but also left no stone unturned to bring ruhi back home. He had asked neil to make papers for adi and ruhi's permanent custody to ishita. Ruhi was also feeling very bad for misbehaving with ishita everyday and missed her ishima so much. Ruhi had did her modelling and none in the bhalla house even knew about the ad shoot. It has been three days and ishita started becoming or atleast tried to behave normal, raman had become over romantic with her in these three days, though she was puzzled at his sudden over romantic behaviour, but she enjoyed being pampered by her husband, they had their first kiss, her first kiss, their relation started moving ahead but nothing and none could replace her love for ruhi, as much happy she was for her and raman, the same way she was sad for her and ruhi. she missed her ruhi a lott..

With all these thoughts running in mind ishita came for breakfast, ramam had left to office early that morning stating that he has some meeting. While having breakfast there was a knock, romi went and opened the door and was shocked to see many people with bouquet. He let them inside.

Mr.Bhalla "aap sab log ithne subah.. koi problem hai"

Person "arre bhalla sab hum sab ruhiko badaye denekeliye aayethe.."

Simmi "kyun.. achanak"

Person "arre aapke bacche ne shooting ke hai.. aur kithna pyaara photos aaye hai.."

The whole bhalla parivaaar was shocked.

Simmie "aane keliye shurukiya uncleji.. abhi ruhi ghar par nahi hai.. jab woh aathe hai.. mein aap sab log ko use milwaathe hoon"

After everyone left, they were still in shock knowing that their little ruhi has did modelling.

Simmi "yeh sab zaroor shagun kaahe karnama hai..paise keliye hamari bachi ko isthmaal karrahe hai"

Toshiji "patha nahi aur kya kya dekhna baaki rehagaye hai.. kaise maa hai woh"

Romi "agar bhai ko patha chala toh kya hoga"

Ishita was shocked betond words to say anything. She wanted to slap shagun for using her daughter for her own deeds.. but all she could do was just sit and cry. Breaking her line of thoughts there was someone again knocking on the door.

Person "Mrs.Ishita Raman Bhalla"

Ishita "jii haan.. mein hoon ishita"

Person "mam court se order hai"

After getting the letter ishita was again shocked as well as confused.

Romi "bhabhi.. kya huva"

Ishita "ruhi - adi ke custody keliye phirse courtse order hai"

Toshiji "yeh zaroor shagun ke nayi chaal hoge.. patha nahi kithne baar vo dono bacche ko court jaana padega"

Ishita immediately called raman and informed him about the court notice, on getting a cool reply from him she at once understood that raman has filed the case and felt little calm.

On the other side shagun was furious after getting the court papers. She couldn't understand why raman filed the case suddenly. In a very short spam of time available, she used all of her contacts to find wats cooking in raman's mind but was of no use, she couldn't find anything.

In the afternoon, raman was already there in the court along with ishita adi and other family members. Shagun and ruhi reached court but ishita didn't even look at ishita once, this made ishita sad and fear engulfed her. The way ruhi neglected ishita, made shagun confident that ruhi will surely choose her over ishita.

When they were all about to enter into the court ishita stopped in her tracks and asked the others to go and she will stay back, all asked her to come along but she was adamant in not going inside. Raman understood her fear of not coming and promised her that he will be surely back with their daughter. When all went inside ishita and simmi stayed back outside the court. Ishita was on her kneels and was praying for ruhi

Simmi "ishita tum kyunn darrahe ho.. ruhi hamare bache hai.. woh zaroor hamare paas he aayege.."

Ishita "patha nahi simmi.. iss waqth woh humse bahuth naraz hai.. agar vusne shagun ko chunliya toh mein sehen nahi karpaavunga.."

Inside the court, the case started with ruhi custody, shagun tried to act innocent and said dat ruhi did modelling as she was interested but she got the big shock wen ruhi told the judge that shagun has blackmailed her to do the ad shoot and also chose to stay with her ishima. Then they asked adi, shagun was very sure that jo bi ho adi will choose her, but all her thoughts went into ashes as adi too chose ishita over her.

Shagun understood that now nothing can be done, but she didn't accept her defeat, shagun stormed out of the court promising herself to return back in their lives very soon. Outside the court, ishita was getting very impatient by every passing second. She was praying hard that she should back with her ruhi soon. She felt a pair of hands on her shoulder, she turned around and saw raman adi and all her family members were there but ruhi was not there.

Ishita "raman ruhi kahan hai.. woh nahi aaye kya"

Seeing all of them silent, ishita thought ruhi has refused to come to her and has gone away with shagunitself.

Ishita "meri ruhi mujhse ithna gussa hai kya" saying so she started crying keeping her face in the palm. Suddenly she heard ruhi's voice

Ruhi "haan ishima, ruhi apne ishimase bahuth gussa hai"

Ishita was soo glad to hear ruhi calling her ishima after many days, ruhi further came closer to her and wiped her tears away and said

"ruhi apne ishimase naaraz hai par vo apni ishima ke bina nahi rehasakthe hai"

Immediately ishita too hugged her and cried saying "ishima bi apne ruhike bina nahi rehasakthe hai"

Seeing the mother daughter duo happy after a long time, everyone present there also had tears..

Romi "arre ab sab log ronadona bas keejeye.. hume ghar chalke party bi karni haina.. adi aur ruhi dono ghar aarahe hai"

Raman "yeh baath toh tumne sahi bola romi tune.. chalo ghar chalthe sab"

Ishita "haan chalo.. aaj meri beti aur uske bhai hamesha keliye apne ghar aarahe hain"

Ruhi pecked ishita's cheeks and said "haan ishima mein aapkehe beti hoon aur hamesha rahoonga"

Ruhi was sitting in ishita's lap, raman held ishita's wheel chair and adi was near to raman. The elder bhalla's had tears of happiness seeing their son's small family complete.

They all moved from the court, silently promising each other that they will always be together in any kind of hardship.

THE END

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Aww...Lovely.
Intelligent Ru bacha.I really want this to happen on screen too.
Very well written dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Happy ending loved the ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
di really sorry not getting time to read ur story🤔
but promise will read as soon as possible...👍🏼😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Superb update dr.
It's beautiful.
I'm all teary.
Update ur other stories too plz.
Tnx 4 pm

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