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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: divinecakes
Loved the updates! It takes longer for me
to read as there is a lot of Hindi dialogues compared to your previous chapters, and then the translating it throws me for a loop sometimes! A little
More English pretty please.
please don't be offended I seriously love your work!!

Anu said the same thing. I know the feeling. I'm terrible at Hindi here. Enough said. Like two days ago I stared at a friend of mine's instagram caption for a good five minutes and still couldn't decipher what it meant. It was in devnagiri script. 😆

Meherbaan as a whole needs editing. And for now I'm just focusing on ending this chapter till where it ended in chapter 16. Then I shall sit and add sub texts. Promise.

YHM being a hindi show and the characters being characterised in Hindi mainly Ishita, Raman and Ruhi hindi seems home for them. That's the main reason there's so much hindi here. 😆

Why would I ever be offended? 😲

I'm not. 😊

Thanks for commenting.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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dsgirl

@dsgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Dharu. I write Dharu and my keyboard translates to Dhara. Yes. My keyboard loves you

You give me too many hopes in life.

I should reply more often. I'm just enjoying the break after four months of studies and now post deactivating Fb and all social accounts life seems so nice and peaceful. No drama. 😆

Haha..I'm glad ur keyboard loves me ;)
And I guess it's always about keeping hopes...I know how it feels to get a break after a long long time...the last I got a break was after I finished my graduation..guess being a lawyer doesn't help..I'm working most of the time..coming on IF and reading stuff keeps me gng :)

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

I'm baaack! It's all about timing right? So, yes, again, RES: because you give me too much power...😆

----EDIT----
So this... this as mostly in Hindi, a hindrance for me but I got it, I got it...😳...hopefully!😉

Loved the moments, all of them. I love RUMAN, and your RUMAN's classic, innocent, sweet.. leaves you reminiscing about your own papa-beti moments. Love. So sweet.. The kiss, the question about Ishimaa's kiss, so sweet and real. All those moments are so real. Like with Viswa, and her convo with her Chachu. I don't understand cricket... actually I don't want to understand cricket... but I get it.

And the Instagram.. a different experience without pix now, but still just as good... a 'use your imagination' kind... but you've spoiled us. It's all your fault. Glad Ishu got in the instagram game. Love the hashtags, too cute for words. Just like you.

Great , as always great update.. flows so well. And I get why you edited the confrontation- reason makes sens. She should stand up for herself. But I still want snarking... they all deserve to be snarked. Am I vengeful? Maybe. Just a little, but on her behalf.

Again- can't wait for next update, whenever it is.. not too long. But school still matters more, capiche?

PS: The note about skin Colour, no not racist... very realistic. I know. I've heard, same same. You can imagine. Very insulting. Even though it's not supposed to be. Whatever.

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

My GIF Queen. #waiting

Originally posted by: RomComFan
I'm baaack! It's all about timing right? So, yes, again: RES: because you give me too much power...😆

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Swapna

@ishra_Fav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Welcome back

Lovely updates as usual. I was so thrilled to know that you have started Meherbaan FF again. You have excellent writing skills, believe me. Sometimes I feel like referring you to the CVS so, you can make the story much better. Now for the story, its going on good pace, like it. Please continue your good work. Welcome back again.

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

I totally loved all the bondings that were happening in this update. Raman and Ruhi are too adorable as usual. Totally loved the banter between Romi and Raman. The men cooking with the children is the sweetest thing ever and the whole Insta updates that followed after that was super cute.

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nigar1010

@nigar1010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Thanks for updating..i loved the kitchen scene specially raman ruhi convo than Romi Raman nd Ruhi phone convo was so cute.the way raman blackmail romi nd romi was praising his bhabhi was so so cute.Very well written..great update 👏

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: nigar1010
Thanks for updating..i loved the kitchen scene specially raman ruhi convo than Romi Raman nd Ruhi phone convo was so cute.the way raman blackmail romi nd romi was praising his bhabhi was so so cute.Very well written..great update 👏

There are three updates for the day. I'm not sure if you've read them. But please check the index. Multiple updates do get confusing to follow. Sorry.