MDT SS LEFT ALONE 2.part 1 page 1

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The Challenge



Scene starts in Shagun's place Raman was angry seeing Ruhi crying.He knew Shagun did all this to take revenge on him and his family.

Raman "Tumhaari Himath kaisey Huin uhi key uupar haath uthaaney ke?"

Shagun "Its none of your business.Ruhi meri beti hain.Tumney papers sign kardee hain."

Raman "Tumney dhokey sey karwaaya hain.Kuch tho sharam rakhon .Apney badala key liyen bache ko istamaal kar rahen hon."

Shgaun "Yeh sabh tumney shuru kiyya hain.Tumney.?Tumney Adi ko mujhsy cheenney kee koshish ke.Tho main kyaaa karthee."

Shagun "Main tumhaari behenjee biwi nahen hun tumhaari dhamkee sey darney key liyen."

Shagun "Abh tum yaha sey jaon."

Raman "Main abh tho jaa rahan hun.Lekin ek baath yaad rakhna Shagun."

Raman "Theek ek mahiney mey.Main tumhey dubaara dekhunga."

Raman "Jabh main apney poorey pariwaar sey tumhey milna aaongaa."

Raman "Mera Pariwar mathlab.Main Ishita aur merey donon bacchey."

Raman "I will make sure.Kee tumhaara yeh poora ghamnd uthajaayege.Tumhaarey pass aaj jho bhee hain who uss din nahen hongey.Cars,credit cars,jewellary sabh mortage karwadoonga.Its My Promise."

Shagun laughs at Raman "Challenge Raman.Main bhee dekthee hun .Tum kaisey karongey."

Shagun "Uss din main dekthee hun tumharey saath kaun khada rahega.Tumhaari behenjee biwi ko tumhaara tho koi parwa nahen ussey sirf bacchon sey .Main Adi ko bhee tumsey cheen lungi."

Raman "Tum ek baat bhool rahen hon Shagun.Main who Raman Bhalla nahen hn.Jho tumhaara chamcha rahan hain.Main The Raman Kumar Bhalla hun.Merey baarey mey tumhaaara ex boyfriend bathaaya hoga.Main apney dum mey jeetha hun kissey aur key biksha mey nahen.Ek Mahina .Tumhey bhee patha chalega."

Raman leaves from there and waiting below in his car to meet Ruhi.He knew Ruhi will some how manage to come down .He was not wrong as Ruhi came silently sneaking out.

Ruhi has tears in her eyes and Raman tried to console her but she was missing her family.

Raman "Ruhi Papa's promise sabh theek ho jaayega.Hum sabh theek kardengey.Tum merey saath ho naa."

Ruhi "Han.Hum sabh waapas saath hongey naa." Sobbing.

Raman "Mera Ruhi rooo kyun rahen hain.Mera beti tho baap pey gayee thee."

Raman "Mujhye laga merey bina who Shagunmama kee band bajaayengee." Tickling her to laugh.

Raman "Ruhi yeh tumhaarey pass rakhnaa." Giving her a small mobile.

Ruhi "Papa aap mujhey phone dey rahen hon.Ishima ney kahan hain naa.Bachon key pass mobile nahen honee chahiyen."

Raman "Abh tumhey chahiyen.Nahen tho tum apnee Ishima sey kasiey baath karogee aur papa sey baath kasiey karogee."

Ruhi "Han.Shagun mama mujhey baath karney nahen dengee."

Raman "Isslieyn yeh tumhaarey pass rakho.Tek hain kisse ko bathaana math.Jabh bhee baath karney hon isssey phone kardena."

Raman "Ishima aur merey number feed kiyya hain.Aur phone silent mey hain.Tum issey kain chupaadena.Shagun Mama ko nahen milney chahiyen."

Ruhi "Theek hain.Main Ishima ko phone karooo."

Raman just smiles and signs to go on.

Ruhi calls Ishita with her new Nokia 2690.(personally used in my old college.Where mobiles are banned.Was a good one easy to conseal.Light weight and slim.And black colour can easily be hidden.)

Ruhi "Ishima .Main bol rahen hun."

Ishita was shocked to hear Ruhi's voice .Shagun was stopping all her attempts too meet her and din't even let her speak while she called.

Ishita "Rooo tum kaisey hon beta.Tum theek hon naa." Ishita asked al questions at a time.

Ruhi "Ishima papa aayen hain yahan.Papa aur Shagun mama key beech jhagada huan."

Ruhi "Main chup chaap neechey aagayee.Papa sey milney.Shagun mama nahen hain."

Ishita was not little relieved as she kknew Raman was there along with her means she would be all right.

Ruhi "Ishima aap roo math main jaldhee ghar aajaongee.Main Shagun mam ko aisey sathaongee ke who mujhey ghar bejdegee."

Ishita and Raman both smile after seeing their daughter strong .

Ruhi "Ishima aapko patha hain.Papa ney mujhye nayen phon ediya hain.Aapsey baath karney."

Ruhi "Issmey papa ka number nahen hain sirf aapka hain.Sirf aapsey baath karney hain naa."

Ishita "Tum papa kp phone do."

Ruhi gives her mobile Raman .

Raman "Ishita kuch nahen hoga.Ek chota waala hain.Shagun tho wasiey humey Ruhi sey baath karney nahen degee.Tho kuch tho arrange karna padega naa."

Ishita "Raman Ruhi kasiey hain.Theek hain naa.Aap bathaon."

Raman "Ishita who bilkul theek hain.Tum tension math lo.Main abhee ghar aarahan hun.Ghar mey sabh bathadoonga."

Raman cuts the call.

Raman taking Ruhi in her arms kissing her for last time.

Raman "Phone chupadeena.Aur Shagun mama key band bajaadena."

Ruhi smiles forgetting everything happening.She know her safest place is when she is in her fathers arms.

Ruhi then silently taking few bands out showing to Raman.

Raman "Yeh kyaa hain beta."

Ruhi "Papa mainey aapkey liyen liyya thaa."

It is a green friendship band with MY PAPA IS MY BEST FRIEND' written on it.

Ruhi makes Raman wear it.Raman hugs Ruhi tightly.Sad beong unable to save her from this conspiracy.

Then Ruhi leaves running from there.Raman watches her going and then takes his car out to leave.

Raman has tears in her eyes.He acted strong before her daughter but he is weal.She is life bllod of his life.Sole purpose he lived for years.

With tears flowing in his eyes.Raman was trying hard to control them.Then he clears his eyes just to realize a truck coming opposite direction.Raman quickly turns his car other way but just to as truch hits rear part of Raman's car at high speed making car to turn upside down.

Blood flowing through Raman wounds he slowly grabs his mobile able to call 108. Before he is knocked unconscious.

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SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will be late by tommorow morning I believe
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was nice start vikas bro...👍🏼
It was gud to see RKB...😃
RuMan conversation was well written... and loved it...👏
IshRu converstion was perfect...👍🏼
looking forward how ruhi behave with shagun to teach her a lesson...and very excited...😉😉
Raman's accident...😲😲😲
hope nothing bad is waiting in ur story...
waiting for next part...😊
update soon...😃


Edited by .Jayashree. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai vikas
Nice part...

I also thought in the show some one should make ruhi understand and she should turn strong and shagun ko band bajna chayiye...

Exactly u have written what we (viewers) thought and need to see in the show...

Thanks bringing the old rkb back...badly missing him

Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome 😊
Love the real rkb 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's always treat 2 watch Ruman relation. Which is nt in air anymore.
Tnx 4 bring it here. And 4 bring our RKB back.
Bt the accident...? Hope nothing major will happen.
Superb update dr.
Update sn. Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intrstng start .well written .loved it thnx fr d pm vikas looking forward
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome update vikas
Thanx for de pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start. Loved Ruman. Looking forward to more, update soon.
Edited by smilesforever98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... So you started writing one...
Mbl idea was bang on...

Ishru convo was gud...
Waiting for nxt update...

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