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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..



hey harshita...
thank you so much for fab comments yaar...
so glad to see that you liked it 😳
And...although i do remember you...I might could have forget as you have stopped being active much on my stories :( 😆
take care dear😊


Aww...am really sorry for that dii...
Actually I was highly inactive on I-F coz of my studies...
But believe me I hav always been a huge fan of ur writing di...
Afterall Our common love for Arjuhi n Arshi...
N am really glad to see you writing on IshRa... 😳
Luvv u dii...n plss keep writing more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PicOSThon - Pic no 18 - Ruhi sleeping in between IshRa

Firstly I would like to thank Pallavi, (@peace)for inviting me to take part in wonderful thread. I haven't had a chance to read all the superb pieces of writing yet, but those I have read are amazing. I loved the PropOThon that was on before and have many stories to still catch up on that!

I have only just started writing, only 2 OS's to my name...I have been stunned by the positive reviews and this has inspired me to write more...so will do soon.

Here are links to my previous works, if you have time take a look and let me know your thoughts...

My First OS - Papa's Brave Girl - a RuMan OS

Another RuMan OS - Papa's Princess
Part 1 on pg 1
Part 2 on pg 2

Anyway enough waffle about me...here is my OS for this awesome PicOSThon...hope you like it...

IshRaRu OS -"Choodi Baji Hai Kahin Door Chhan Chhan Chhan"
By Sparkleamina

PicOSThon - Pic no 18 - Ruhi sleeping in between IshRa



Edited by sparkleamina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

I look forward to your comments, I have never written romantic stuff before, actually never written anything much before, so hope it is ok. Please let me know your comments - good or bad. I have used a mix of Hindi and English dialogues as sometimes Hindi is needed, well I think so...but have put English translations below. Hindi is a language I have learnt from watching movies and serials so please forgive any mistakes.

OS on next post...pg 112
😉
Edited by sparkleamina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
IshRaRu OS -"Choodi Baji Hai Kahin Door Chhan Chhan Chhan"
By Sparkleamina


It was the weekend and IshRaRu were home spending time doing not much. Ruhi was in her parents room looking through Ishimaa's drawer in search of nail polish, whilst Ishita was sewing a button on Raman's shirt. Raman was playing video games with Adi and Romi.

Ruhi - "Ishimaa, woh new pink wala nail polish kahan hain. Maine lagana hain abi"
(Ruhi-"Ishimaa where is that new pink nail polish. I want to put it on now")
Ishita looks up from her sewing "Ussi drawer main hain Ruhi beta, maybe it fell to the back.."
(Ishita - "it's in that drawer, Ruhi beta, maybe it fell to the back..")

Ruhi rummages through the drawer and finds all sorts of things, she finds a box with a big sparkly heart on the front, she wonders what this box is so opens it quietly so her Ishimaa doesn't notice.

Inside are a bunch of things, which on there own would make no sense, but Ruhi knows these are Ishimaa's cherished things from her Papa to her Ishimaa. Included in this box are lots of photos, the Sorry card she helped her papa make, a dried up rose from their first Valentine's as a family, an electric toothbrush, a handmade ring with an R on it, the love letter her Papa sent, some yellow post it's written by her Papa & Ishimaa.

She smiles and puts everything back as it was, then she notices a bangle box right at the back of the drawer, she opens it and sees it's the bangles Ishimaa wore after the wedding, she noticed Rinki Bua was wearing the exact same type the other day.

Ruhi - "Aap yeh bangles kyun nahi pehente?"
(Ruhi- Why don't you wear these bangles?")
Ishita finished sewing and was now in her wardrobe sorting clothes, she puts the clothes in her hands down and walks over to Ruhi.
Ishita - "Konsi bangles ki baat kar rahi ho, Ruhi?"
(Ishita - "Which bangles are you talking about, Ruhi?")
Ruhi shows her the red and white bangle set neatly kept in the bangle box.
Ishita - " Oh, those were from when I first got married to your Papa, I wore them for a whole month without taking them off. It's a ritual new brides do, but now I am no longer a new bride so I don't wear them. I have kept them safe as a keepsake"
Ruhi - "Oh par, they are so beautiful you should where them, they will look so pretty on you...pleeeaassseee?"
Ishita - "Nahi Ruhi beta, I can't wear them. Please put them away."

Ruhi was sad, she really liked the bangles and thought they would look beautiful with what her Ishimaa was wearing today.

Ruhi -"You could just wear some of them for a little while. They match your outfit really well. Please, for me, pretty please?"

Ruhi held Ishita's hand and walked towards the couch, they sat down and Ruhi started to put some of the bangles on. Ishita couldn't say no to her darling Ruhi and it was just a set of bangles so she let her put them on.

They were very beautiful, and although it had been a pain as she had to wear them for a whole month continuously but she really loved the colours and sparkle in them. She got lost in thinking about the times when the bangles got in the way, that time Raman came into the clinic with toothache and he complained that the bangles were hurting him, she was smiling to herself when Ruhi said "Don't they look beautiful, you should wear them all day today that is my order"
Ishita - "Ok baba, I will" she gave Ruhi a hug "Did you find the nail polish or were you just being nosy at Ishimaa's things?"
Ruhi shook her head, "It's ok I will find it later, I am going to play with Shravu" and she ran off.
Ishita smiled and touched her bangles, "I am so lucky to have you and your papa in my life, thank you Murgan" and then went back to her chores.

Later in the evening, IshRaRu were in their room looking at photos from Papaji's birthday party, Ruhi was in between her Ishimaa and Papa on their bed, the laptop was on Ruhi's lap. Ishita went to scroll to the next picture and her bangles clinked on the keyboard, Raman got annoyed, he had been hearing these clinks all day and had had enough.

Raman - "Yeh kiya hain, why are you wearing those chunky noisy bangles? Mera dimaag karab ho rahi hain iss awaaz se!"
(Raman -"What is this, why are you wearing those chunky noisy bangles? My head is going mad with the noise!")
Ruhi - "Papa app kyun Ishima ko daant rahi ho, maine usko kaha yeh wala bangles pehene ki liye. Woh kitni pretty haina?"
(Ruhi - "Papa, why are you scolding Ishimaa, I asked her to wear these bangles,they are so pretty, right?")
She rattles the bangles and looks at her papa.

Raman couldn't be mad at his little princess so just smiled "Huh, pretty hain beta" thinking in his head, "thought those bangles were only worn by new brides, yeh pagal madrassan ko ho kiya gya!"
(Raman - "yes, they are pretty beta" self thought "thought those bangles were only worn by new brides, what's happened to this pagal madrassan!")

Ishita wasn't paying any attention to Raman and went back to enjoying the pictures with Ruhi.

Ruhi yawned and stretched.

Ishita - "Ruhi, it's getting late, ab chalo hum app ko apke room main sulha ti hain"
(Ishita - "Ruhi, it's getting late, come now I'll take you to your room and tuck you in")
Ruhi - "Nahi Ishimaa, aaj mein yaha app ki saat soungi. Come on Papa, Come on Ishimaa hum ek saat soungi"
(Ruhi -"No Ishimaa, I'm going to sleep with you today. Come on Papa, come on Ishimaa, let's all sleep together")

She put the laptop on the bedside table and held both her parents hands in each of her little hands and pulled them down towards the bed, both looked at each other and reluctantly lay down with their sweetheart Ruhi in between. Ruhi held both their hands and put them on top of each other, Ishita's bangles clinked again

Raman - "Tum kiya these nonsense bangles pehenkar so jaoigi? Mera saar mein already daard hain or yeh bi kha jaegi hume!"
(Raman - "are you going to sleep with these nonsense bangles? I already have a headache and now these will make it ten times worse!")


Ishita stretched over Ruhi and put her free hand over Raman's mouth, "Shh, Raman, Ruhi so gayi hain woh utjaegi"
(Ishita - "Shh, Raman, Ruhi has fallen asleep, she will wake up")

Raman looked into his wife's eyes and got totally lost, he grabbed Ishita and pulled her over Ruhi and she fell on top of him.

Ishita "Raman app kiya kar rahi ho? Ruhi yaha so rahi hain"
(Ishita - "Raman, what are you doing? Ruhi is sleeping here.")

Raman winked and put his arms around his beautiful wife. "Don't worry about Ruhi, she's fast asleep, she won't hear a thing"

As Ishita moved a little to bring her hands free, her bangles clinked.

Raman - "Although these darn bangles are going to have to come off as my plan to romance my wife will be a complete failure cos of them!"

He held her arm, kissed her wrists and slowly took of the bangles one by one and dropped them on the floor, placing soft kisses on her arm as each one fell to the floor. Ishita looked into her husbands eyes, they were full of passion and love. They had yet to take the next step in their relationship as something or someone usually came in between them. Raman had finished taking off the bangles, he cupped Ishita's face and could see tears in those beautiful, black eyes.

Raman - "Are yaar, ab kiya hogaya..."
(Raman - "Oh yaar, what happened now...")
Ishita shook her head and buried her face into his chest, Raman's shirt buttons were open and her lips touched his bare skin. Raman flinched, Ishita placed another soft kiss on his bare chest, Raman moaned and whispered her name. He brought his arms around her and held her tight, Ishita couldn't help but smile, she continued to rain dozens of kisses all over his chest, undoing buttons as she went. Raman was loving this new avatar of his wife, it was about time they moved forward in their relationship. Only he knew how he was keeping things under control with his pagal madrassan walking around him in those sexy sari's with no idea what was happening to him.

He couldn't wait anymore, he had to claim those luscious lips and show Ishita how much he loved and wanted her. He lifted her head up from his chest and looked deep into her eyes, pushed a lock of hair behind her ear and softly whispered..."I love you Ishita, you don't know how long I have waited for this day". He kissed her forehead,, caressed her cheek. Ishita held his hand and whispered back, "I love you too Raman... itne der kyun laga yeh baat mujse kehne me..."
(Ishita - "I love you too Raman...why did you take so long to tell me this...")

She playfully hit him on his chest, Raman touched his forehead to hers, rubbed her nose with his and finally inched closer and captured her lips, slowly at first and then plunging in to deepen the kiss. Ishita melted with Raman's touch but in no time at all she became more bold and kissed him back with all her love and passion. That night Ishita and Raman showed each other how much they loved one another, crossing that final barrier between them.

Later that night, Ishita got up from their bed, leaving a sleeping Raman and went to see Ruhi in her room, She looked at the sight of their sleeping angel and thought "You have always been the one to bring us together and today you have done that in the truest sense"

...the end...

Authors note...
I thought I better add the bit about Ruhi being in her own room as the thought of a passionate night between IshRa with Ruhi beside them is a little weird...Raman had moved her after IshRa has their first kiss :)

Also see my notes/comments on the previous page...thanks :)


Edited by sparkleamina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly, thanks to pallavi di for making this thread and giving us all a wonderful opportunity. and to invite me to take part in this wonderful thread. This is the first time, I am writing an os.
So, I am here with a os. Hope you'll like it. It is completely written in Ishita's POV and is only about Ishra.

I have chosen the pic. 22(Ishra- airport scene) and pic. 61.(Raman in tamil traditional dress)

https://i.imgur.com/h5d7hwS.gif


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Posted: 10 years ago
Amina Di..
That was a Cute Update..
Thnx for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amina that was cute Os IshRu was cute Ruhi want her Ishima to wear bridal bangles and it made Ishita feel like she was newly wed bride and at the night it turn to be true cause they confess their love and take their relationship to another step. Thanks you mention Raman move Ruhi to her own bedroom. I was thinking how could they do thing with Ruhi there😉 thank you so much for writing cute OS and PM dear.🤗
Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
to all writers.. pls stop thanking me again again 😆 its getting embarrassing now !😆 I should thank you guys for writing here 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am so sorry. It became a problem in the previous post in the the pictures. Really sorry.
Anyways, my name is Rashmi. Firstly, I would like to thank pallavi di for such a wonderful opportuntity. This is the first time i am writing a os. Hope you'll like it.

The pictures I have taken are pic. 22 and pic. 61.


Ye Hai Mohabbatein

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello all,
Rashmi(Darlingpinks) has posted d 1 April OS in the below post. There has been a lot of confusion on the previous page, she is unable to edit her posts dere. Pls ignore her posts on d prev page and concentrate on her OS in the below post. 😃

Here r d pics she is challenged with:




Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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