Ishra TS : New Years Picnic - Part 2 Added on Pg 4 (Completed)

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DipaRB6

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: avni_19
This is simplyy awesumm.. i loved itt!! surprise new year picnic was the best.. and their midnight strike was even amazing!
cont soon! :D

Thank you! Will be posting next part tomorrow!

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ishra123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

suprb... lovely Start plz update soon. waiting For nxt Part

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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lovely..a sweet sa simple sa family moment...update soon

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-DivAn-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Perfect..!!

Continue..

Waiting for d second part

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

aww...its wondrful...

loving it...

waiting fr next...

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

A very cute one. Continue soon

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

This is so lovely... what a lovely and romantic take on this moment. Very beautiful and beautifully written, I look forward to your update.😊 Please do PM me if possible when you do.

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Dilshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Very nice n beautiful update! Loved it.

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PRAVEENDM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Awesome update.After watching dreadful scene in YHM during NEW YEAR I literally lost that uniqueness that was found in the serial.But your fiction made me more than happy.I wish something like this happens in near future..

This conversation cracked me up:Ru: Papa aap kitne smart ho. Ishima ne mujhse kaha ke

fireworks factory mein banthe hai

I: Kya...

R: Tumhari ishima ko kuch nahi pata ruhi. Koi imagination hi nahi hain unme.

Waiting for your next update.

Edited by PRAVEENDM - 10 years ago