Divan FF: Help her change part 4 page 23 UPDATED - Page 11

Originally posted by: shalz_123

viji...tht was just superb hun... in the previous comment i also mentioned tht his giving bytes seems like a silent support to her situation...n reading ur update i feel like my instinct was also right in this regard... love their silent frndship n loved ur writing... u r an amazing writer...keep it up...

Thank you Shalu😊
I feel that about KP's recent bytes too...i hope they are so silent about their friendship tho😳
Thhank you so much ! These encouragements will def keep me writing😊

Originally posted by: yakutamt

Awesome.yar ...loved it❤️

Thank you soo much!😃

Originally posted by: anshipriya

Beautifully written...completed both the parts😃😊

Thank you!😳😃

Originally posted by: meghasweet

omggg superb duperb update plxx write more I love it so much :)

Thank you so much😊
Hope i get good inspirations from Divan😉

Originally posted by: frenzyy

awesome

Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: Divancraze

Awesome Update!

Continue soon!

Thank You😊
will try , if i get some good "real" inspiration

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

this was just awesome
im speechless i dont have words for it

Thank you so much!😃

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

That was simply pure. :D

Glad to hear that 😊

Originally posted by: Nashid

Hi 😃
Well I'm new to India forums and its because of you. This story of urs my cousin had shared and we both were goin gaga over it, u don't understand how many times I read the first part alone. You wrote it so beautifully I dunno if anyone else could of captured these divan behaviors so nicely.
To b honest when I read it on twitter that u might post a second part, i was waiting like literally! ur like giving us a glimpse into their world and I'm addicted. I was going to tweet u my appreciation but unfortunately there is a word limit with twitter and i needed more 140 character to express 😆 . so I'm here . 😊

UR update is awesome!!! I love it entirely but there are few things I wanted to mention specially.

1."They began shooting, as usual he was goofing off ..."
That was so nicely said, I respected Sshardiv a lot, I think most people would of wrote about SM negatively, especially when it come to divans but u put so nicely. & "he knew better, he knew her." That line !👏

2." She asked him for a selfie.." - - 😳😳 SUPERB!

3.He was called for a picture .."- - I love this entirely! Mad respect for him for this.

4. '"Not once he asked about her break-up.."--- I was completely bowled over reading that. U put out this great moral in your writing, acting normal around a person with a heartbreak is probably better then 1000s of comforting lines. ACTIONS MATTERS THEN WORDS!! 👏.

Sorry for writing such a long reply but i wanted to express my thoughts. Keep writing yaar, I beg you. I will be egarely waiting for the next update.😃❤️. Also wanted to mention, the beauty of story is how you kept Divan so pure and real even this is a fictional story. Hats off!👏👏

P.S Would love to read you other Divans stories a well.

Best,
Nashid

Nashid 😊
I'm totally flattered by you comment yar!😃😳😃 I'm so happy to hear you and your cousin liked that much!
no need to be sorry , your long comments meant so much to me, trust me!. Thanks for sharing where you made the connection with the story.
Reading all this comments makes me want to write a another part for sure! Lets see 😊

& first off WELCOME! lol this actually my first divan story, usually i write on IshRa...there are plenty of awesome writers on the forum to keep you entertained 😉

Originally posted by: fariza91

OMG THANK YOU for writing another part :) loved loved loved it! you r an awesome writer and the way you have described the situation and their thoughts ware exceptional.. LOVE DIVAN .. *fingers crossed*' and hope you write more :)

Thank You😃😃 glad you liked it!
haha yes *fingers crossed*
i hope divan can give some real inspirations for further write up!