Divan FF: Help her change part 4 page 23 UPDATED - Page 10

Originally posted by: harichandana

Awww it was so good

Wish divan r like this in real

Hope we get more of this n this happens in real tooo

N i hav gut feeling tat karan would nt hav asked divz anythng abt breakup

Thank You 😊
I think the same, i can't see him trying to comfort her with words , to me hes all about action so hence in the story i made him like that also.😳

Originally posted by: ybarfa

lovely part dear i wish i could also have a friend like one in your story brilliant part

Thank yo soo much!😃

Originally posted by: avni_19

Fab Fab Fab updateee!! I lovedd it!! esp the last para!! killed it!!!

superrbbb!!!

Thank you soo much! glad you liked it!😃

Originally posted by: Nithi06

This was brilliant!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
Love it! Love it love it
I could make a better connection to this story then any other as its based on real life events..
What's beautiful is that you haven't tarnished their character one bit, it's very subtle!
Honestly your respect and admiration shows in your writing , as you haven't even used their names 👏 , people see many things when it comes to them, but you my dear see the beauty and conplexities !
Him trying to make her laugh each time ...Him arriving on set on time, giving the meadia byte cause he noticed her trying to avoid and she noticing that and wondering what happened to him, little did she know it was for her.
I love how you used their selfies , for those who wonder why they looked formal, you said it so beautifully of what may be the reason ...Subtle forms or respect and admiration is all over your story ! Totally love it...how you used the party pictures and the unlit cigarette 👏

All this was perfect and the cherry on top was the last paragraph! He made her feel normal and normal never felt better! Im soo in love with this! Hope you continue it Viji!
I can't help my self from wishing DivAn to be real! Her point of view could b a interesting to read also...
Lastly I was to assure you that this second piece was beyond my expositions like the first! Fabulous job and fabulous update! 👏

Thank you Nithi!
This comment really means a alot to me! yes I do respect and admire Divan, even though it tempting to let our imgaginations run wild we have to keep intact with reality,
last line is a one from my heart!
and we'll see what happens and how I could write it into words 😊 Thanks once again for such lovely comment!

Originally posted by: VENBA

Beautiful update...

Fabulous..👏👏

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Fab !

You're an extremely awesome writer

Thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: umeirah02

Any plans of continuing this ??

Please say yes!!

Take a bow girl; you deserve all the praise coming your way.. It's wonderful: so subtle yet so simple

The ease and conviction with which you penned this; is praiseworthy!! How I want #DivAn to be for real now...

#Forumwaasis have pretty much summed all that I've wanted to express but none the less I've written what I thought I must say... Great going... plz continue

Thank you so much!😊
lol lets see if i can witness some real bond that can inspire my imagination, next part is in Divan's hands😉

Originally posted by: usaonly

Thank you for part Two update. I love this one too.❤️Love the silence support the action that matter you know youself that you can made it better without show of but other can well observe and if she not busy thinking of her own world she will see that what he had done for her to feel better and happy again. We will always support both of them no matter what they will find the way to be together or be it a good friend.Something better than nothing.👏👏

Thank You😊
Agree with you 100%, I always believe people hear the words and feel the actions, when you trying to make someone "feel" better then its the actions that count and yes eventually they do notice it!
yes we show our support and the rest is in destiny's hand 😉

Originally posted by: Aswathy.

Wow

😉

Originally posted by: divanlover

Hello :)
So I basically created an account on IF just so I can comment on your work! Someone else has posted this outside the form,but i wanted to credit the original up-loader . Simply because I LOVE DIVAN and the way you portray them is amazing!
I'm a big DT fan and her break up did break my heart also, and this story of yours could of never came at a better timing.

Coming to the update, since I didn't comment on the first I want to say that was beautiful ! How nicely you put in all the events of emotions and the silent support from him was superbly written. You had me wanting more instantly...how you took that one picture of her and her hashtags meaning sort of gave me goosebumps..that when i felt this is too real!

2nd update, lets just say you went beyond expectations 😊, don't feel otherwise. You gave the nice feel to it by adding in that he came on time ( we have no idea if this is ever true, but I want to believe it 😳)...I can never look at OLV videos the same anymore when i see Divan moments. T I noticed he has been giving byte more frequently and you connected to the story, simply bravo. The way you justified their "formal pose" in the selfies, you satisfied many hearts i tell you. The birthday bash pic was beautifully used by you, loved your take on the unlit cigarette. Last but not the least your last phrase as some pointed out was seal to the deal, you described it so beautifully! a person like HIM , the one in your story is what every girl like HER needs!👏

On a general term I want applaud you for simplicity and authenticity of your writing. You not using their names and shows your respect as someone else pointed out. You kept Divan as Divan and I hope you continue this as I'm looking forward to read them. Thank you for writing, this is a masterpiece

I' m totally FLATTERED by your comment😃😳😃
Thank you so much for the love! I don't know what to say, but this touched my heart, glad you felt connected to the story!❤️
Next part is on the hands of Divan !...but read your comment made me feel like i should write one more lets see😊 && WELCOME to the forum, there more A LOT more better writers, whose writing skills will blow you away !