Divan FF: Help her change part 4 page 23 UPDATED - Page 8

Any plans of continuing this ??

Please say yes!!

Take a bow girl; you deserve all the praise coming your way.. It's wonderful: so subtle yet so simple

The ease and conviction with which you penned this; is praiseworthy!! How I want #DivAn to be for real now...

#Forumwaasis have pretty much summed all that I've wanted to express but none the less I've written what I thought I must say... Great going... plz continue

Originally posted by: IshRalova

OMGGG
you actually post it 😃
girl, if your a DivAn fan there is no way this didn't meet their expectations.
I LOVE it ❤️...thinking this is how they are makes it dreamyyy
Can I say I WANT MORE😳

Take a bow👏

😆 Yes I did !
awh thank you so much darling for the post and to our encouraging conversation! Great support you are!
LOL we'll see about more 😉 its all about what I see and if it worth to write without ruining the beauty of their relation and the story lol

Thank you for part Two update. I love this one too.❤️Love the silence support the action that matter you know youself that you can made it better without show of but other can well observe and if she not busy thinking of her own world she will see that what he had done for her to feel better and happy again. We will always support both of them no matter what they will find the way to be together or be it a good friend.Something better than nothing.👏👏

Hello :)
So I basically created an account on IF just so I can comment on your work! Someone else has posted this outside the form,but i wanted to credit the original up-loader . Simply because I LOVE DIVAN and the way you portray them is amazing!
I'm a big DT fan and her break up did break my heart also, and this story of yours could of never came at a better timing.

Coming to the update, since I didn't comment on the first I want to say that was beautiful ! How nicely you put in all the events of emotions and the silent support from him was superbly written. You had me wanting more instantly...how you took that one picture of her and her hashtags meaning sort of gave me goosebumps..that when i felt this is too real!

2nd update, lets just say you went beyond expectations 😊, don't feel otherwise. You gave the nice feel to it by adding in that he came on time ( we have no idea if this is ever true, but I want to believe it 😳)...I can never look at OLV videos the same anymore when i see Divan moments. T I noticed he has been giving byte more frequently and you connected to the story, simply bravo. The way you justified their "formal pose" in the selfies, you satisfied many hearts i tell you. The birthday bash pic was beautifully used by you, loved your take on the unlit cigarette. Last but not the least your last phrase as some pointed out was seal to the deal, you described it so beautifully! a person like HIM , the one in your story is what every girl like HER needs!👏

On a general term I want applaud you for simplicity and authenticity of your writing. You not using their names and shows your respect as someone else pointed out. You kept Divan as Divan and I hope you continue this as I'm looking forward to read them. Thank you for writing, this is a masterpiece

viji...tht was just superb hun... in the previous comment i also mentioned tht his giving bytes seems like a silent support to her situation...n reading ur update i feel like my instinct was also right in this regard... love their silent frndship n loved ur writing... u r an amazing writer...keep it up...

Originally posted by: Sai-licious

VIJI!!!! Amazing, once again! 👏 I like the subtlety of... well, everything... the situations, the emotions, the interactions! I can't believe I'm actually longing for a FRIEND like the character in your story (yes, I want fiction to become non-fiction... this must be a first) 😆 He's so damn sweet, yaar!

Memorable excerpts for me:

" He was called for a picture just as he thought of going for a smoke...". -the cigarette was such a minuscule detail in that photo and people still took NOTICE to it! Fans are amazing (if I do say so myself) 👏

"Not once he asked about her break-up...". - I don't why or how, but this last passage felt so REAL and RAW (for lack of better words) to me... I can't even explain in plain words... (I could just be an emotional fool, idk) Gaahhh, I love this last passage the most... it's so true to life (I mean that in the general sense, not strictly pertaining to DivAn)

Thank you SOOO much for your such lovely words! LOL yess He is also on my wishlist too😳
hhahah the unlit cigarette and divan was the major focus for in that very pic. glad you liked that part lol
yes last was my fav too😃 yup it very applicable to life, sadly not all can realize them being normal around you is whats really needed to make someone move on...Thanks again! reading you comment gave me a sigh of relief that i haven't gone wrong entirely with the story😊

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Yes ur post reached insta too , my frnd posted it in insta !

Sry cud nt ask you for permission bt the OS was so Divanilicious ...

Thankyou for writing this ! #ithankU ...

Loved the whole thing ..I hope in real too this is the same case !

Wishing all the better and Best for DT and KP ...

Wishing what they deserve ...

I just loved it ..! U shud write more ..

Love,

Sruthi

Thank you sruthi😊 , lol yes i noticed insta too 😊
no worries if fellow DivAn's can joy over my story, then i'm flattered !
lol DivAn are magical ...lets see where fate takes them😳
all the encouragement will definitely have me writing more it seems😆

Originally posted by: shravani_2311

tak a bow...

its a brilliant piece of work...

prfctly written...

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

An absolutely delightful read!

Thank you ! :)

Beautifully written...completed both the parts😃😊