FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Nikita...

@lovablelove

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#611

what is this?? Why have u left it in middle? Seriously need an update... But Hatts off to ur writing,u r doing it wonderfully,i have been reading ur story from the day u started,and thought of commenting at last chapter of urs but now u broke that ice leaving it in between...!! Pls continue sooon.. Eagerly waiting.

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Nice update V...
pleaseee next part jaldi update kro

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#613

again a cliffhanger y veee

please update soon

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Oyi you stopped at a wrong point yaar

I loved this update... Can't wait for the next one 😊

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

Oh...You stopped at wrong point.

BTW the update was awesome.Raman sided Ishita when his mom and sis were blaming her...good.

Continue soon

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

u seriusly had to end there!!!!!! aargh...i m not killing u but need an update soon... 😈

lovely build up...

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

What a lawyer move! Ended it right were the anticipation built up leaving everyone high and dry! 😆 Waiting for the next update!

PS: loved the ghazal :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#618

I'm glad Ishita is giving Raman a chance to hear him out. Hopefully she will realise that Raman does mean what he's saying and then, they can together handle their families.

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#619

Meanie V ... you had to stop there. Are you taking tips from He-who-spews-shit-on-twitter-freely?
Nah, but you can't be.

He doesn't write stories which we love at every point. He just starts them & loses track. You, on the other hand, go all the way and we love every part of it 😃👏

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Hahahahahah Veee.. phirse cliff hanging! Awesum updatee! Lovedd it! Puttar and to-be-Biwi's tension!

Looking forwarddd! Mrs.Iyer is justt tooo muchh! Hahhaha!