FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Fantastic as always Vee.

Kind of OT but, anyway... do you know what i like about your stories? The fact that the pain and the hurt is always more subtle and deep... never harsh. Harshness has a beauty too, but that's what we see on our screens these days and I a so very glad that you are exploring the subtleties of hurt and pain.

Okay, back to this... terrific. I love the way his awareness and contentment is expressed, and his reaction to the news was fantastic... beautiful. It's not even that he can't think of marriage with her, or that he doesn't want that possibility with her... it's that he feels it is simply something beyond him now.. and the way you explained that was beautiful.

Loved Ishu's mindset and directness with him- he needs that... looking forward to what happens next ...😊

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beyul

@beyul

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Hey V, sorry for the radio silence over the past few days. Am on a road trip with dodgy internet access.

My two cents on the last two updates. RKB's heart and mind in a fierce duel. Awesome! Loved how even when he's longing to catch a glimpse of her, he's facing pushback from his stupid brain

But then again it took only one meeting with her for his mind to start ceding ground.

Only a shock therapy like the news of his nemesis could have galvanised RKB into action and you brought out the passion, possessiveness and fury so well👏 Would love to see how he goes about claiming Ishita without even confessing his feelings to himself let alone her.

So he now admits and knows he can't see her with anyone, but he's still standing at the water's edge as it were, afraid to take the final plunge.

Hope we'll get to see a lot of pining and pinning☺️ before he does that. What say, V? Hahaha.

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Gosh, such beautiful updates! 👏

There were so many adorable moments in each chapter. I loved how he upgraded her ticket to business class. Trust RKB to come up with such a classy move to woo her 😉

And the part where they both get the same gift for Ruhi.. Aww!

Especially loved how they met again. It was really cute how he forgot all his doubts and anxieties the moment he saw her. Raman, poor guy, is such a mess around her! He still refuses to believe what's obvious! Sure is fighting a losing battle there!😃

Love how he gets all riled up at the mere mention of the possibility of there being another guy in Ishita's life.. Looks like only jealousy can bring him to his knees..or in this case, bring him down on one knee😛

Edited by nrn1486 - 10 years ago

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Sorry to have missed this Vee, hmm so like this new twist.

Raman has his demons but he needs to learn to overcome them if he wishes to move on in his life especially with the woman who has now captured his heart, looking forward to how you take this forward.

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shadeslayer

@shadeslayer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Brilliant V. I lived how you included mani as a twist! And raman's demons are so deep seated that he did require this type of push.

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

V, we need another update of urs to keep ourselves sane... 😭

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: shalz_123
V, we need another update of urs to keep ourselves sane... 😭

Sorry yaar, this track is putting too much negativity in my head. If I update now, it'll just be bitter n nasty. I'll update tomorrow your time (Sunday) - just need to get the epi out of my head so I can focus again. 😭

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Veeann

Sorry yaar, this track is putting too much negativity in my head. If I update now, it'll just be bitter n nasty. I'll update tomorrow your time (Sunday) - just need to get the epi out of my head so I can focus again. 😭

no worries... i understand...😕

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Hey! Congrats on becoming a dazzler, Veeann!!

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#500

U/R

For: PART 8B - KYA KEEJE?

You show Raman's feelings so beautifully: Raman did not know why it was so important to him that Ishita accompany him and Ruhi, but now that he had seen her again, he was loath to let her out of his sight. This day had been supposed to be for him and Ruhi... but Ishita seemed to fit into their little team- it was as if she was a part of them, as if she belonged.

Aye haaayeee! Even if only unconsciously, Raman's already decided that she belonged to him and Ruhi!

This chapter was filled with warm and fuzzy feels and BOOM! Bomb toh phoot gaya! And...

S . I . L . E . N . C . E .

Even knowing what was going to happen, it shocked me just as badly aur Ram Kumar phir se Raavan Kumar ho gaya! Par pressure toh necessary hai for Raman to understand his feelings, so I'm hoping this is enough...

Off to the next part! Thanks for the calm before the storm, Vee! 😊 I'm eager to see what you have in store for IshRa and us!

*singing ... I know you know / That it's so true, / My love's only for me / And you... You are only mine...*

Edited by Preeah - 10 years ago