FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

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arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

eeeppp! LOVED the update. I am SO SO SO excited to read what will happen next! PLEASE tell me you will update tomorrow too? don't think i can wait. :-/

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Abhinaiscool

@Abhinaiscool

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Amazing update... you have explored the raw sizzling chemistry Divan has... awesome Veean...

Abhi

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Richajin

@Richajin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Brilliant update... N after reading the relief one gets is like that shade of tree after wandering hopelessly in hot sun for a long time... And further more while standing there u spot a pot full of water to quench ur thirst... A perfect state of bliss... Well really relieved me from yesterday's episode... Really miss my old Yhm but I think ur updates take me that phase of old Yhm again.. Thank u..

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

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Veee... Congratulationsss on being Dazzler!🤗And ur updateee.. Beautiful! Two confused souls fighting with their mind and heart! Beautifully written, both sides!

blahhh Ishita is gonna say YES to Abhi.. No waysss!!! Puttar will pop up in between!

Just like how Nina felt and saw Raman is in love, there Abhi must have also felt the same. My assumption!

Afterall I know, U will not keep this puttar in pain and sacrificing/majboori mode like serial!😆

Cont soonnn darlinggg!!! Looking forward for the next one! I swear Vee, this FF brings soo much happiness in me.. way better than the sadi huye tracks!

This current state of them reminds me of the song. Its one of my favorites. It goes with ur title..

Yeh Dooriyan,

Inn rahoon ki Dooriyan..

Nigahon ki Dooriyan...

Fanah ho sabhi Dooriyan...

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

Am coming to the forum only for these updates V. Your story makes me happy and right now I need that.

Raman Kumar Bhalla better be the go getter CEO of the year in your fic V ... let him go all out to get her back -- in his life, his family & his heart. Jaldi karo Puttar, warna Abhimanyu chance maar lega 😆

Hugs girl 🤗

PS -- Do give us some happy updates once you are done with the angst. I know you won't disappoint us unlike the show 😊

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

Superb update
loved both view points
whats with raman

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

wow awsomeee updateee...
And what a cliff hanger ending...

update soon

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Another cliff hanger!!😡 Vee...i feel more on edge for the next update than Raman and Ishita combined!!😃 Dying to know what the register mail was all about...is Shagun making a reentry??? Please update soon!!

Na Karoon Yaad Tumhain To Ulajh Jata Hai Sansoon Se Galib
Ke Samjh Nahi Aata Zindagi Sansoon Se Hai Ya Teri Yaad Se......