FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14 - Page 49

Faboulous update Vee you made me love to read this story more update per update. I never had enough of it and eagerly wait for you Pm to say you already update. Lovely family time feel like old YHM. The sizzlring of Ishra still had magic whenever they come close they burn with their Passion will see for your next move how you will fix Mani out of Ishra path.thank you so much for this wonderful update. Have a beautiful weekend dear.👏👏

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Originally posted by: paru_rox

V 🤗 ...this is my daily fix. I love it and then some more. Especially coz you are writing about their before marriage track. Makes it all the more sizzling and romantic. Have always loved that track so much.

Can't wait to read the next update coz I know with you writing it just gets better 👏

Originally posted by: beckysharp

V, looking forward to your updates now... Am planning to give the show a miss after reading the yucky spoilers !

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

OMG Vee what a poignant update...i was crying for both of them!! You write so beautifully, and I feel like i am a part of it...Beautiful. I want so badly to knock some sense into him...and even though it feels like there is no progress...i am not disheartened, because i got the reaction i had predicted, when he found out about her rishta...😳

Want to see him stew on it all night long...to see people coming and going from her doorway...the agony of not knowing what is happening..will she marry this guy or not...its gonna be a long night for Puttar!!😡😃

Again...thanks for a splendid read!!👏

Yaad ro-ro ke teri satati rahi,

Aag judai ki dil ko jalati rahi..

Aandhiyan jab guzarti rahi baagh se,

Shakh-e-gul apne sar ko jhukaati rahi...!

Apni mohabbat ki nakamiyan kya kahun,

Khwaish-e-ishq har kadam mujhe rulati rahi..

Woh doosron se has has ke milte rahe,

Meri hi bad'kismati ashq behte rahe..!

awesome
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

Hey Vee!

Hi Veeann,

Nice story and the concept as usual brilliant writing. Pm the next updat