FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: Veeann

Call me Vee. And what do you prefer?

Priya is my name, but if you are friends with others of the same name, you are free to use any similar name/nickname. I've just about seen it and heard it all! ^^;; As long as I know it's me! 😆

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

For: PART 8A - LO PHIR MIL GAYE

OH oooh! 😲

Mani's coming - YAY! And a slight change to his background, too, but WHAT THE...?!?!?! 😲 MANI and ISHITA MARRIAGE?!?!?! NOOO!!! Ek nayi mushkil aarahi hai! Hai RABBA!

Fun for us, not for Ishita! or Ruhi! OR RAMAN! 😲 And I'm waiting for the chapter of his reaction to THIS bomb! But is he gonna become possessive or just go back to being an asshole without a care?! Ishita pe hak toh jatadega! I don't and CAN'T see it go any other way! It'll be so much fun!

And ISHITA SAID SHE LOVES RAMAN!!

🥳🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

And speaking of, I KNEW that Roo baby will invite Ishita along with them to the mall! 😊 And their banter! Ruhi is more mature between the two in times like these!😉 And he didn't even realize that he forgot about everything else - all rules and restrictions once she agreed to come with them!

*singing ... And I know of nothing more complete... Nothing else matters but you and me...*

Edited by Preeah - 10 years ago

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

For: PART 3C - DAY TWO PM - TRUCE AND REVELATIONS

Are, fun happy times in the beginning, but so melancholy by the end. I loved the Ruhi-Raman similarities that she saw - the same painfully sad and vulnerable eyes...

But Ishita got a chance to see another face of Raman and in the next chapter, hopefully more!

*singing ... I've become so numb... Become so tired...*

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

For: PART 4A - DAY THREE AM - KAUN HO TUM? (WHO ARE YOU?)

OMG! The chapter was so CUTE! I have no other word to describe it! It's like the awkward, puppy-love stage! A little angsty, silences filled with deeper meaning, but so totally ADORABLE! Haaayeee!

And Ruhi emailing Ishita! Ishita gushing! Raman seeing it and totally preening! 😳

*singing ... Who is that [man] I see / Staring straight back at me? / Why is my [his] reflection someone I don't know...*

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

For: PART 4B - DAY THREE PM - YEH HAI MERI KAHANI (THIS IS MY STORY)

OMG! The funniest line: well, Shagun had been beautiful, but she was an airhead.

*ROFLHMAO*

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

And the best line(s): God, how he wanted her... she was the first woman in his life in whose arms he wanted to throw himself and cry out all his fears and frustrations. He had felt safe in her arms. Safe like he had never felt before. He had felt at home, as if he had found the place he had been searching for all his life.

HAAAYEEE!!!

But DAMN! A total 180 from the last chapter! So charged and filled with explosions! Raman is truly vicious when he wants to be! He could effortlessly eviscerate the other party verbally if necessary, and unfortunately, Ishita had to bear the burden for something he was too afraid to acknowledge! Poor Ishita! 😭

... But they're gonna talk... *tentative look*

*singing ... Pain in my heart just won't let me sleep... Stop this little pain in my heart*

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#456

For: PART 4C - DAY THREE PM: BAATEIN KUCH ANKAHEE SI

Sad and beautiful. I feel that this is the turning point in their relationship. From now on, no matter what happens, this talk will influence their future actions.

Wonderful chapter, Vee! 👏 And it was beautiful seeing them take these tiny steps towards each other! 😳

*singing ... Written in these walls are the stories that I can't explain... The way that I been holding on too tight / With nothing in between / The story of my life...*

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Hey Vee! So you know how I am with this bedtime story of yours well yesterday I was up all night for the India game and hence did not read your update. Just caught up with it and where do I even begin! I could feel the palpable attraction and tension between the characters, the longing for each other..sigh! As soon as I read it, I was reminded of this ghazal by Jagjit Singh, sorry to make this FF all serious and old sounding with talk of ghazal. 😕

Tere baare mein jab socha nahin thaa,
main tanha thaa magar itna nahin thaa

They both were lonely before meeting each other but now the lonileness is bothering them because they now know the possibility of their union and what's worse than knowing happiness awaits yet circumstances and ego coming in the way.

Will be waiting for tonight's bedtime story, no pressure though!

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#458

For: PART 5B - KYA YEHI PYAR HAI? (IS THIS LOVE?)

Kya kahoon iss chapter ke baare mein? Am I ecstatic? Oh yeah! 😳 Am I disappointed? HELL YES! 😭 Do I feel like smacking Raman? Why is that even a question?! But you know? A bigger part of me is happier that it stopped where it did. They both know they can't be temporary with each other. That means, communication and sharing their burdens and while Ishita might be ready and willing, Raman's not there yet! So unfortunately for us, slow and steady, but for the sake of our IshRa and Ruhi Chuuhi, I'm willing to wait! 😊

But HOT DAMN the ride's gonna be sizzling! ☢️

*singing ... Pal Mein Dil Yeh Gaya / Kuch Pata Na Chala / Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai / Dil Zara Tu Bata...*

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Veeann

@Veeann

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
Hey Vee! So you know how I am with this bedtime story of yours well yesterday I was up all night for the India game and hence did not read your update. Just caught up with it and where do I even begin! I could feel the palpable attraction and tension between the characters, the longing for each other..sigh! As soon as I read it, I was reminded of this ghazal by Jagjit Singh, sorry to make this FF all serious and old sounding with talk of ghazal. 😕
Tere baare mein jab socha nahin thaa,
main tanha thaa magar itna nahin thaa

They both were lonely before meeting each other but now the lonileness is bothering them because they now know the possibility of their union and what's worse than knowing happiness awaits yet circumstances and ego coming in the way.

Will be waiting for tonight's bedtime story, no pressure though!

Hey Doc. Love the ghazal. I struggle to find the right song for each update and I love Jagjit Singh. Can I use that for tomorrow's update? Tonight's update is a bit alcohol sizzled cause it's Friday night and we watching the Pakistan Oz game on TV and Chaar bottle vodka, what can I say?? But enough of Raman's angst - today is the last chapter of angst, tomorrow is realisation and then it's romance 😳

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: Preeah
For: PART 5B - KYA YEHI PYAR HAI? (IS THIS LOVE?)

Kya kahoon iss chapter ke baare mein? Am I ecstatic? Oh yeah! 😳 Am I disappointed? HELL YES! 😭 Do I feel like smacking Raman? Why is that even a question?! But you know? A bigger part of me is happier that it stopped where it did. They both know they can't be temporary with each other. That means, communication and sharing their burdens and while Ishita might be ready and willing, Raman's not there yet! So unfortunately for us, slow and steady, but for the sake of our IshRa and Ruhi Chuuhi, I'm willing to wait! 😊

But HOT DAMN the ride's gonna be sizzling! ☢️

*singing ... Pal Mein Dil Yeh Gaya / Kuch Pata Na Chala / Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai / Dil Zara Tu Bata...*