FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Vee! ... and now Abhi too? I wonder how our fearless hero will react to that bit of info? Loving his yearning to see her and his upset at her not speaking to him, the way you described his mood changing after she sat in the car... wonder how long it'll take before he cracks. No matter, I know the road to that point will b much less stressful and more enjoyable then what we have got on our screens...terrific update once again.

PS: I keep meaning to say it before but thanks so much for the Eng translation to the convo... mucho appreciated!😊

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

good update...liked the way raman taunt ishita ...abhi just friend not anything else...pls pls...or let him make realise ramans love for ishita ...

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

read all da parts in one go it's really superb loved it update soon

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Ahhh... another update..thank you!! 😃 What to say, poor Ishita, kaise manna karegi iss rishtey ko? Raman...walking around clueless to her dilemma. I hope she lets something slip about the rishta while at the mall...dying to see his reaction!! 😆

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Omg so cute those two

amazing update

please update soon

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Awesome update..

Brilliant...👏👏

Waiting to know how will Raman react to Ishita's marriage proposal...

Will be waiting for your update...😊😊

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Guys, thank you for the comments.

This stupid track is sapping my energy, but I am now writing to get over what is being shown on screen. BTW, in this FF, Raman is clean shaven ( sometimes with a light stubble) and has SHORT hair. I don't know how to post pics, but perhaps someone can post a pic of hotwa puttar here so we can focus on what Puttar should look like.

🤣