Ishra TS Mere Rang Mein Rangne Waali - completed

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Hello YHMians, back with the part 2 of the OS I wrote on prop thon thread.
Errors hoga...so please excuse them..and remember, its crazy, filmy and romantic.
batter se shuru kiya tha...so Nikki, this one is for you...dough romance! 😆
read part 1 here

Part 2

She almost screamed out of fright, "ewww..."

She looked horrible. Her hair looked like that of a wet hen drenched in a horrible mix of dirty colors...her face looked like a color painted zebra crossing.

She was mad at him..."RAMANNN...AAP KO AAJ NAHI CHODUNGI!!!"

She screamed as she sprinted to the wash room's door.

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She banged on the door as she shouted loudly "RAMAN...open the door...Raman...Raman..."

Fed up of banging, "accha...toh aap nahi kholenge...teek hai...wahi raho aur aaraam karo...I am going to lock this door...aaj ka poora din aur raat bhi aap wahi rahenge...BYE!!"

Before she could think anything more, she felt the door opening slightly and his arm pulled her in too..."What the hell!! Yeh kya kar...???"

He didn't let her complete the sentence. She was in with him and he bolted the door and turned to her..."ab koyi problem nahi...poore din, raat ya phir..."

He grinned trailing his words and then added, "hum yahi reh sakthe hai...bas khaane keliye baahar jaayenge...what say?"

Ishita was close to the opposite wall now, "Haan haan...How convenient!!! Aur woh khaana kaun banaayega???"

Raman was instant in his reply, "What's the big deal??? hum order karlenge...waise bhi ghar pe koyi aur hai nahi"

"acchaaa...pehle se hi sab planning karke rakha hai...Cool!" Ishita quipped sarcastically.

Ishita observed that Raman was continuously grinning or rather smirking may be at her looks. Yeah obviously, the colors he smeared on her face tactfully had made her look funny.

Ishita frowned and remarked in mock anger, "itna hasi aa rahi hai mere haalat dekh kar, huh?...ab aap dekho main kya karthi hoom..."

She moved quickly towards him and closed the gap between them. She stretched up and rubbed her face against his. Raman, on the contrary was enjoying it and teased her, "yeh khel bhi accha hai"

He grinned cheekily with a wink, "I don't mind playing it longer"

Ishita smiled and her expressions suddenly turned seductive, her eyes became naughty, "agar aisi baat hai toh aur bhi accha kar dehthi hoom...Wait and watch..."

He didn't miss the glint of mischief in her eyes as she daringly ventured onto him. She nuzzled teasingly into his collar bone and kissed his shoulders moving aside his shirt. He was surprised but was also confused about her motives because this was the first time she was adorning this bold form and taking over the lead. But he let her play around as he was enjoying as much as she did.

Meri Pehli Mohabbat
Meri Pehli Yeh Chahat
Meri Itni Si Hasrat Hai
Gale Lag Na Na Jaa

Slowly, gathering up her wits, she parted a little from him. Her fingers roamed along his frame and settled around his chest. Then fiddled with his shirt buttons.

In a bold manner, she unbuttoned his shirt slowly causing his spirits to go high. She parted the shirt and kept her palm gently on his chest. She leaned over and pecked softly making his hands land on her waist impulsively pulling her closer but her palm on his chest tightened keeping him away as much as possible. Then she backed away instantly, holding his shirt together within her fists. He felt her pull him towards herself. She kept backing away sensually dragging him along. Her seductive actions were threatening to explode his controls. He moved towards her like a puppet tied to her hands. Her lusty eyes were driving him crazy and wild.

Teri Bahaon Mein Rahat Hai
Teri Zulfhon Mein Jannat Hai
Meri Itni Si Hasrat Hai
Gale Lag Na Na Jaa

She stopped when she felt the wall behind her. Her other hand searched for the shower's tap and opened it. He hadn't expected that she would want to get wet in the shower.

He chuckled, "Madrasan is up to something wild today" before inching closer to her and his hands struggled to get hold of her.

She willfully went into his embrace. They got drenched together and the cold water falling on them did little to cool them down. The heat of passion was soaring up due to her unexpected ways of romancing. He hadn't expected this, not even in his wildest dreams!

He was fully mesmerized by her and was brimming in her desire. He felt urged to claim her lips. Water droplets flowing on her and tickling down her soft delicate body was giving him a sensually visual treat. He drank in her wet form which now accentuated as her saree fabric wrapped closer to her curves, hugging all around her making him burn in jealousy. He literally drank in the water which rolled over her most desirable body in an attempt to get more of her. In the process, setting fire to the fiery desire and fervent passion under his skin. Hers was no different but she reined herself.

The colors on her body were washed away now. She looked absolutely tempting in that drenched avatar. It wasn't possible to stop himself for long and she could sense it.

Sulje Suljen Badan Hai
Uljein Uljein Se Maaan Hai
Badhti Jaati Hai Tan Ki Pyaasss

Bheki Bheki Hai Raatein
Mehki Mehki Hai Saasnein
Rehna Rehna Tu Dil Ke Paasss

Tu Agar Ho Samne Ho Kaise
Mein Khud Ko Rakh Pau Hosh Mein

Darta Hai Dil Khata Yeh Kar Baithe
Mohabbat Ke Josh Mein

He moved closer to her. Her eyes locked intensely with his was giving him stirs too. He just wished to drown in those doe like eyes and lose his senses in her lavender fragrance. He dipped his face into her nape inhaling her scent deeply. Just before his lips touched down on her most sensitive spot, after which she knew that there would be no stepping back, she giggled and wriggled out of his hands.

She pushed him off her and quickly unbolts the door to get out. She then peeps through the door, throws the towel at him and gimmicks at him

"Not so easy Raavan Kumar! That's a tit for tat...meri sweet revenge accha lagaa???"

Before he could come to his senses completely and realize what just transpired, the door clicked shut and she was gone! Leaving him behind feeling like a kid whose ice cream was snatched away from between his lips.

He shouted back, "What the hell madrasan!!...You can't do this...Come back here!"

A distant reply bounced back "You asked for it Raman...anyways, don't think of staying there for long...come out soon...We have serious work to do!"

Raman without giving up "ab isse serious work kya ho saktha hai yaar...plzz aa jaao na?"

She ignored his plead and replied naughtily, "Dry yourself soon Raman...warna sardi lag jaayegi"

He muttered and swore under his breath, "Ab iss sardi ko main tumse hi utharwaaunga madam...I promise you that!"

There was no conversation after that.

He shook his head vigorously as if to come back to reality and smiled at her dreamy gestures and her silly plan "Paagal madrasan!"

Half an hour later, he came out of his room, dressed in a killer white T-shirt and a dark grey tracks. He scanned the room and then came down to the living room for her. That's when he saw her busy in the kitchen. She had changed into a soft creamy chiffon saree with floral patterns. She looked enchanting even in the simple attire and almost nil make up. Her wet hair tied up messily in a loose knot. Some strands dangling from it all over her shoulder and face. She was kneading dough and occasionally gliding back the lock of hair to behind her ears. Her face had visible traces of the colors and now the creamy flour also smeared here and there. He couldn't stop a smile seeing her unusual make up of colors and flour. She was the most simple, unassuming woman he had ever known and probably would ever get to know. She never bothered about her looks, whatsoever.

He stood at the counter lethargically folding his hands across his chest and legs twisted against each other, observing her silently. She looked overly pretty and cute in that look...and of course extremely inviting. And she was his, just his. He beamed in pride and understood that she was too engrossed and hadn't seen him coming.

When she didn't seem to notice him, he casually walked to her with a naughty smile and hugged her from behind, his hands slowly running down her sides to the dough and in the pretext of helping her blend and knead it well, he started caressing and pampering her fingers which he had entwined to his a moment ago. He nudged open her fingers to accommodate his seductively whispering, "Let me help!"


Badla Badla Hai Mausam
Pighla Pighla Hai Yowan
Jage Jage Hai Abb Eshaas

Bheki Bheki Hai Raatein
Mehki Mehki Hai Saasnein
Rehna Rehna Tu Dil Ke Paasss

[to be continued]

so how was it? please do reply...

there will be one more small part to conclude this hot nok jok romance! 😉😆
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back with the part 3 which ends this TS! hope you like it...errors honge..so please excuse it!

disclaimer: Filmy, crazy and romantic...

thanks to all the sweet comments and likes! really means a lot to me!

Part 3:

When she didn't seem to notice him, he casually walked to her with a naughty smile and hugged her from behind, his hands slowly running down her sides to the dough and in the pretext of helping her blend and knead it well, he started caressing and pampering her fingers which he had entwined to his a moment ago. He nudged open her fingers to accommodate his seductively whispering, "Let me help!"

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There was no way she could protest this seductive gesture from him. It was too hard to resist or ignore what he did to her. His face rested on her shoulders while their fingers hugged and kissed each other, working their way to blend the dough. His lips weren't idle either. They placed wet kisses on her shoulders and ears, thrilling her at the same time. She tilted her head to the other side to accommodate his romantic moves. She indeed was enjoying the moments as much as he did.

She smiled at his romantic gesture and let it be for a while but after that, she let out sighs of fake anger and irritation

"yeh kya sharaarat hai Raman??? Chodo na...dekho sab mess up kar dhi aapne...lunch time hogaya...ab aur dher karenge toh dinner ka waqt ho jaayega!"

Raman cuddled closer and whispered into her ears, "hone dho...kya faraq padtha hai? breakfast, lunch, dinner sab ek saath kar lethe hai...ab chalo!"

Ishita smiles at his romantic gesture "accha? Aur gharwaalon se kya kahenge, huh? Lunch banaane ke baadh humein holi party pe jaana hai...humne kal decide kiya tha, remember?"

Raman released her and moved aside disappointing her a bit. He hissed in frustration, "Oh haan...woh baatein bhool hi gaya"

Then again wrapping her to himself tightly seeing the light frown on her face, "tum jab itne paas hoti ho, mera hosh hi kahaan rehtha hai madam??"

Ishita tried to free herself and turned around with her back against the kitchen counter, "acchaaa...but ab hosh mein aa jaayiye aur sab bartan jaldi se saaf kijiye...aapka promise yaad hai na???"

Raman let a sigh of surprise at her demand, "KYA??? Bartan aur main???? Ho madrasan, paagal toh nahi hogayi, huh?"

Then he remembers his promise during their brief making out or rather his naughty prank session. He mellows down and pleads, "Oh Jhansi ki rani...please ab yeh sab..."

Ishita snapped him, "Neelu ko aapne chutti di na? toh ab koyi bahaana nahi...jaldi jaldi haat chalaayiye...tab tak main rotiyan banaa dehthi hooom...phir ready bhi hona hai"

Raman hated the very thought of leaving this romantic trance and going out "Lets just ditch the holi party! We have better things to do madrasan" and tried to hug her but she escaped out of his hold and replied, "kuch bhi, haan?? hum nahi gaye toh phone pe phone aayega"

When he thought about it, he knew she was right and he reluctantly agrees, "humesha haddiyan saath leke goomti ho yaar!" and then added, "hmmm chalna padega...warna sab yahaan aa jaayenge"

Ishita passed an empathetic nod to him as she also doesn't want this lone time in his company to end soon but they had no choice. She instantly sports a naughty look and points at the sink filled with unwashed vessels. Raman lets out a sigh of irritation seeing it and moves to it without a option. He had a promise to keep and Raman Kumar Bhalla doesn't break promises.

He sarcastically smirked at his own situation. The great CEO RKB was going to wash dishes for his wife's sake.

He kept muttering under his breath "uss Neelu ko aane dena chahiye tha...maine hi khud apne paav pe khulaadi maar li...jo socha woh toh poora hua bhi nahi...aur jo life mein kabhi nahi socha, woh ho raha hai! Beta tera kismet hi kharaab hai!"

He was about to pick the scrub when she stopped him, "arre Raman..main mazaag kar rahi thi...aap jao, aaraam se beito...yeh sab main karloongi...no problem!"

But he looked at her lovingly and her talk just melted him, "Ho madam...maine promise kiya tha...and Raman Kumar Bhalla doesn't break his promises!"

He picked the scrub in his hand and looked at it with disgust. Ishita notices it all and chuckled, "Raman, I said I will do it" and then adds with a naughty wink, "On second thoughts, this is all part of married life! Wife ko help karna acchi baat hai Raman!"

Raman responds angrily but in a low voice, "Shaadi shuda life ka sabse ahem baat bhool gayi par yeh sab yaad hai!!"

She enquired as she didn't hear it clearly, "kya?"

"Kuch nahi yaar...bas itna keh raha tha ke jo biwi se karein pyar woh dish wash se kaise karein inkaar!"

She smiled at his worked up dialogs and sensed well his sarcasm. She hushed him up and asked him to focus on the task if he really wanted to help her.

"shhh...aap chup chaap apne kaam karo ya phir jao aaraam karo...but don't distract me..."

Raman took it as a chance and came closer after washing his hands, "accha main tumhe distract kartha hoom, huh?? zara bathao kaise kartha hoom distract?"

As he tried to hug her from behind, she snapped him short like in Ruhi's game, "FREEZE Raavan Kumar!!! Ek khadam aur aage matth badhna aap!...iss plan ko apne paas hi rakho aap aur apna kaam karo!"

Raman knew she wouldn't change her mind. So he went back and started washing the dishes.

Though he had agrees willingly to help her clean it, the sight of the dishes made him disgusted. He threw the scrubbed vessel into the sink with clinking sounds in haste and frustration. He handled the vessels as if they were some untouchable objects. The ghee and oil which were difficult to wash away only added to his agony.

She knew what was going on and looked at him sideways "shhh...itna shorr kyun kar rahe ho aap??? Zara dheere sambaal kar kijiye na? bartan ko kuch hua toh mummy ji bechaari Neelu ko dhaantegi...aur yeh saara chakkar na mummy ji ko patha chal jaayega! Toh sambal ke, haan?"

Her smiles and mockery annoyed him further but he wasn't leaving one chance open. So he slowly leaned to her side whispering, "acchaa...toh madrasan tum paas aavo aur mujhe sikhaavo kaise karthe hai...mujhe yeh sab nahi aatha..."

Ishita grinned at his attempt and replied, "aapko toh bas bahaana chaahiye na? but aaj aapke koyi bahaane se fisalne waali nahi hoom"

He moved back flaring up and had just washed the first vessel, he screamed "aaah"

Ishita quickly rushed to his side. He was catching hold of his eyes tightly and yelled in annoyance, "aankhon mein kuch chalaa gaya yaar...my eyes are burning madrasan!!"

Ishita quickly made him bent to the sink and splashed water into his eyes. He kept his eyes closed while she kept muttering in concern, "maine bola tha ke yeh sab math karo...ab dekho"

She grabbed his hands "accha chalo, yahaan beito...shaayad woh dish wash liquid hoga...isiliye itna dhuk raha hai!"

She made him sit on chair and tried to open his eyes carefully. He refuses but then she forcefully opens it slowly and blows cool air into it which kind of relieves him from the torture his eyes were undergoing. He opened his eyes widely to see her so close to him. He silently wound his arms around her and locked her near him. She is unaware of his actions as she is busy treating his eyes. She was also smudging his eyes with wet cloth to give him relief.

When she saw a naughty grin on his lips, she realized that he was fine now and also understood where his actions were leading her too. She shook her head in negative and smiled "aap bhi na Raman?"

He just winked and pulled her further to himself. She fell into his lap and her hands encircled his neck automatically. In a moment, she was drowned in his eyes. His fresh cologne and aftershave doing a weird magic inside her. Sparks of intimacy and passion flying across both sides raising the temperature in the entire place! In fact, they forgot where they were and what they were doing.

He came closer to her and lightly pecked her cheeks. She blushed and lowered her face to rest on his shoulders. He turned sideways and tightened the grip on her. Hugging her intimately, he gifted her a wet kiss on her neck. She shuddered and held him on tighter, letting go of everything else but this togetherness.

Labon Ko Labon Pe Sajao
Kya Ho Tum Mujhe Abb Batao

Tod Dho Khud Ko Tum
Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein

Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein

That's when a burning smell caught her nose. She sniffed and disturbed his dreamy trance. She broke apart and rushed to the stove. The roti she had put lay deep fried on the tawa.

In an impulse, she quickly took the roti out and yelled ouch. Raman was in no mood to stop what he started after so much effort. He sprinted to her in 2 quick steps "Be careful Jhansi ki rani"

He held her waist and turned her to face himself as he blew her fingers to cool the light burn. While he did that, he switched off the stove "ab yeh sab baadh mein...chalo, chalkhe aaraam karo...dekho kitna jalaa hua hai!"

Ishita couldn't help smiling at his pretentions as the burn was not even seen and he was exaggerating it just to get her into the room. He pushed her lightly to the empty space of the kitchen counter and tried to get closer but she rolled her eyes and keeps distancing arching behind to the kitchen top. She whimpered in the effect that the entire situation triggered in her, "Raman..."

Her eyelashes fluttered at his proximity and battled itself to a close.

Her totally flushed face and innocent blush made him ask back teasingly, "KYA?"

But this time, she kept her shyness aside and decided to tease him a bit before giving in. She pushed him aside and sprinted out,"itna easy nahi haan?"

He grinned, trying to catch up with her and voice naughtily..."Ishita...ab itna bhi matth sathaao yaar...warna mujhe koyi aur raasta aasmaana padega"

Labon Ko Labon Pe Sajao
Kya Ho Tum Mujhe Abb Batao

Tod Dho Khud Ko Tum
Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein

Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein Meri Banhon Mein


Ishita was still running ahead of him and escaping his grabbing hands, "acchaa...aur woh kya kya hai, zara main bhi toh sunoom"

Raman grinned cheekily, "woh bhi samjhaadunga...just wait till I get you in my hands madrasan!"

Soon, she gave up panting and he grabbed her and swirled her into his arms. Her top knotted hair opened up and it swirled along too and fell over his face. He breathed in the fragrance of her smooth flowing hair and glided it off his face. His finger tip traversed along the contour of her beautiful face, playing unique rhythms all the way from her forehead to her neck making her tingle and she closed her eyes in the tantalizing sensation

Tere Ehsaasson Mein Bheege Lamhato Mein
Mujhko Doobati Tishnagi Si Hain
Teri Adao Se Dilkash Khatao Se
In Lamho Mein Zindagi Si Hai
Haya Ko Zara Bhool Jao
Mere Hi Tarah Pesh Aao

Hone Dho Khud Ko Tum Meri Tum
Raaton Mein Raaton Mein Raaton Mein


He didn't wait a second more. He picked her in his arms and walked to their private sanctum, closing the door shut behind with his feet.

Labon Ko Labon Pe Sajao
Kya Ho Tum Mujhe Abb Batao

Tere Zajbaaton Mein Mehki Si Saason Mein
Yeh To Mehek Sangali Si Hai
Dil Ki Panahon Mein Bekhri Si Aahon Mein
Sone Ki Khwasish Jagi Si Hai
Chehre Se Chehra Chupao
Sene Ki Dhadkan Suno
Dekh Lo Khud Ko Tum

Annkhon Mein Meri Annkhon Mein Meri Annkhon Mein

Labon Ko Labon Pe Sajao
Kya Ho Tum Mujhe Abb Batao

He laid her on the bed and quickly settled beside her not giving her a chance to escape from him. He glided his hand under her head and pulled her near. He turned to face her while his other hand slipped around her waist. His fingers played on her bare skin as he moved away her saree.

She shyly buried her face into his shirt. He smiled as her face nuzzled against his chest.

His naughtily roaming fingers on her body made her want for more of him too. Her fingers showed a hurry and fiddled with his shirt. He couldn't stop grinning and remarked "kuch dher pehle itna nakhre kar rahi thi aur ab dekho kitne desperate ho...chup chaap aa jaathi tho itna time waste nahi hota na?"

Ishita blushed at his remark and said, "aaap ke romantic adhaavon se main kitni dher bhaag sakthi hoom? I always surrender na?...You have that effect on me Raman!"


Tere Zajbaaton Mein Mehki Si Saason Mein
Yeh To Mehek Sangali Si Hai
Dil Ki Panahon Mein Bekhri Si Aahon Mein
Sone Ki Khwasish Jagi Si Hai
Chehre Se Chehra Chupao
Sene Ki Dhadkan Suno
Dekh Lo Khud Ko Tum

Annkhon Mein Meri Annkhon Mein Meri Annkhon Mein

Labon Ko Labon Pe Sajao
Kya Ho Tum Mujhe Abb Batao

He chinned her up and kissed her lips briefly. Then he moved to her shoulders and lined up kisses all along her hand till her fingers. Kissing each finger gently as if relishing it like an exotic delicacy, he cherished every moment slowly.

She quivered in passion within his hold. As his hands slowly entered in and tried to tug at the strings of her inner skirt, his phone rang.

Ishita giggled at the interruption as always, "aap phone utaalijiye...kuch important hoga,"

He didn't budge this time as he was determined to go on with what he wanted. Rather he just threw the phone under the bed muttering, "nothing more important than this now"

She had to nod to it because she also didn't want an interruption now.

He went ahead to do away with the remaining barriers separating them. What followed was a passionate love session! They were just immersed in each other and the phone calls and door bells went unheard.

Both their phones lay abandoned and forgotten similar to the passing time.

A few kilometres away, Romi and Simmi nodded meaningfully at each other as they disconnected their respective phone calls to Raman and Ishita!

They knew that their bhai and bhabi were busy and were not going to come for the holi game. They sure had better games to play with each other. They went back to a totally hyper Toshi ji

"Yeh Raman aur Ishita kahaan reh gaye? Itni dher hogayi..."

Simmi snapped her mother, "Mummy ji, woh Ishita ko kuch urgent appointment aagaya..."

And Romi added helping her sister, "Bhai bhi koyi client meeting mein phas gaye hai...unnone kaha ke shaam ko aa jaayenge"

Toshi ji wondered how this urgent works came up suddenly but then shrugged it off when Romi and Simmi dragged her to play holi all over again. They sure had their ways to keep the family away and busy because they knew that such moments were quite precious for their bhai and bhabi!

Back at Bhalla house, Ishita and Raman lay wrapped in each other's arms. They laughed out at the entire situation where they had literally stolen moments from their own life to be with each other. This was indeed the first time that they had chosen to be with each other ignoring the rest of the world. There was a small guilt for having ignored the calls and the missed the family holi celebration but then this bliss, these moments of love, ecstasy and solace that they found in each other could override every guilt.

He spoke up huskily, "We should do this more often...I loved it Jhansi ki rani"

She shyly hummed, "hmmm...me too"

He pecked her forehead for having shared the same feeling as his and whispered huskily, "Partners in crime, huh?

She managed to correct, "Partners for life!"

He replied with a cheeky smile, "I love you madrasan"

Somewhere buried in a whisper, he heard her say, "me too"

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So how was it? pls do reply!

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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me firsttt

unres


this was my reaction while reading part 1 n 2...

part 2 dammit ishu so much seductive...

raman really need chilled cold shower...🤣

waiting for the part 3
Edited by Nichuss - 10 years ago
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so romantic..
thnx 4 continuing it..
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This is so romantic... shower romance... holi... dough. Thanks for continuing... waiting for next part eagerly. Fabulous vidya
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Awesome vidyaa..romantic n naughty...loved it
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thanks and lots of love...for continuing it...vidya...
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1st of all THANK U VIDYA for this SURPRISING GIFT for me...when i saw this topic,i opened in the excitement to read yet another wonderful story frm u...bt ws pleasantly surprised seein ur dedication for me...!!

i read part 1 then n omg wht a HOLI SPL treat tht ws...pure KK tha in ur os jabse he started "game"...😆😉...

n then i read part 2 n it ws hot n romantic too...but ending is cliffhanger types...n thts wht u alwz do na?😡😆... so dough prop i had suggested u will be in full swing in next update na...so plz update soon

rockin sensuous romantic naughty TS vidya n spl thnx for dedication...i LOVED it...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 10 years ago
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so so hot n romantic
love their scene
update soon n pm me
take care

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It was sooo romantic.next part ka besabri se intezaar rahega.

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