Software Symphonies 5--Spice Route on 148 - Page 18

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Ashu25 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Intense I must say !
Such a "been there done that scene" for most couples it is...
A WALK turned into an emotional bicker
It all started off with clothes, her choice, his likes. She wanted to know if he likes it. And then comes the jolt.
She, out of sheer rage goes off to an unknown place only to escape her loneliness. It could sure have landed her in a pathetic, unimaginable situation, for a bold girl she is !! Her boss didnt know where she was until her fiance comes searching for her, while she was all cool with having a mattress for herself while being sick. SICK REALLY !!
We generalize men to be unemotional, less speaking, uncaring most of the times.RB turns out to be that exact generalization for all of us. He does have his emotional baggage which he carefully chooses not to carry with himself. His choice, of course. II is one kid at heart. Big time. She does have her baggage which she prefers to take along anywhere she goes and does want the whole world to know what she feels!
This emotional bicker was well placed here before they took off to marriage 👏👏. They had to talk it out. If not today, some other day later , yes, but I felt, today would be best! He rightly pronounced his care and protective nature towards her. She rightly put forth her turmoil before him well with an accusation which she always had in mind.
He chose not to speak emotional stuff with her. He let her believe what she wanted to like earlier. Is he doing the right thing again? She wants to be pampered and the need to be understood overtook her and she spilled out her mind.
I am really eager now to know what actually happens after this 😆😆. does he cajole her? Or will he leave by the time she wakes up ? It clearly is seen, despite the fight he still wants to marry her..What about her? Will she stay the night in the room with him or run away again ?😕😆😆 Or for a change leave him all alone by the time he wakes up 😲😲
Does he not need to tell her now at least what his super duper plans were after they get married ? 😕😕 I know it will lead to another outrage but they solve it now only and save time after marriage for some happy stuff 😆😆
This outrage was needed. She had to know how stern he could get. He would now know what she is like 😆😆.
I had a hearty laugh when she mentioned it unlawful to marry a 5 year old 😆😆 much like giving it back to him II 😉
Every relationship comes with baggages from either side. How people deal with them is what makes their relation appear simple or complex.
Beautifully narrated Nisha!!
Waiting for the next 😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi21

This is what I meant by normalcy. II seems to be coming around after talking to her Akka! She needs to get hold of few things and even raman. Raman is already on his way to the BIGGEST and MOST important factor in ANY relationship- "Communication", but Ishita is still not there.

She hesitates a lot. She feels she is going to lose her independence cause she doesn't trust him fully. So she doesn't come clean with him often.

If she starts trusting him a little more (not completely yet) it would become easier for them to be with each other I guess!

Only after Akka made her realize that she HAS to confide about her problems and opinions in him now, that she realized its importance.

As much fun as these fights are, Ishita does go through a lot of emotional turmoil before discussing even a smallest fact about her life with him which is not normal.

I think she will come around soon...

loved the update :)


Normal people dont make good fiction😃
If they constantly communicated u wouldnt read the story... it would sound like a documentary Arshi
I know I say that a lot... But I think its true... its over rated... its not a work place u know... personal life is not a work place it is where we get to be OURSELVES, we get to hold on to our fears and doubts and insecurities... WHY should she share everything on day one?😕

I bet there are millions of happy 100% understanding marriages out there
This one will NOT be one, so dont get your hopes too high😆
100% understanding is boring... there is no spark left afterwards...
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Posted: 10 years ago
For me, II sharing her feelings about NOT having kids right away is a BIG acheivement. If not for akka's warning, I am damn sure she would have gone on pill without letting him know. Thats II. But no she shared it and THAT according to me is a HUGE sensible and mature step😆
R&B had to go by 4 BUT he didnt. Isnt tht enough?

They love each other. But dont understand the way the other one is. I guess R&B has started understanding her kozhandai nature BUT II seldom wonders about his past or what he must have gone thru when his mom died. In her defence i wud say tht she is too caught up in her own family dillemmas to notice his.

Her comforting him like shravu tells me something about the future. Thrz nt just similarity between appa n R&B. Its between his mom n II too.

Both wil hurt each other. Both will comfort each other. Both will be motherly. Both wil be murderous. I am waiting for the proceedings.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

The Taming of the Shrew is what comes to my mind the more I read about II. Really it couldn't have been closer!! She just has to fight ALL the way through... but isn't that what is giving R&B the kicks! (And us 😉)

But II did not say yes to the Gyn ob visit straight away. Reckless as she may appear, there is a voice of reason fighting somewhere in her.

Good to see II tread carefully there with R&B... when she added the "now" to the no babies clause. Wouldn't want to tick him off too much. Would she? But again her impulsive nature TOPS all else...

She reminds me of a teeny bit of myself in the past. I didn't want to go the family way straight after marriage, and my hub just played it by the ear ... actually, in retrospect I think I was played 😆

But ...today have got 2 kids and wouldn't have it any other way😊

And this last update...seeing a storm brewing...

more later

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Posted: 10 years ago
such a wonderful chapter nisha...u made my day...absolutely gorgeous...
from her masti to texting to shopping to the lovely passionate encounter...just so wonderful.. im gushing so much i dont have words to write...
"When u touch me I cant breathe"...this was a sweet admission of her feelings... she just burn in passion when he touches her..and he just gets aroused when her hands touches his head...

i seriously don't have words to describe such a bful chapter
..words will fail to describe the sensuality, passion , boldness and love with which this chapter is written...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kg1404

I have been carrying on for the last couple of days, outwardly appearing sane,doing the usual stuff (including reading symphonies , many posts , including ashu's laundry man wala post brought out a resigned smile in me yest) but inwardly feeling and telling myself that it's just equally enjoyable to read and not comment,that's until five mins ago, a little sulking that life could be better though (my goddamn dishwasher and the kitchen sink decided to make their presence felt too in the last couple of days tantruming with water leaking,) and as I am waiting at home for the goddamn plumber to come, I see this post of Ranu and N too and a happy smile lights up my face. Ah !! The bell, plumber, yippee, guys more ltr!!

Lol...My typical house wife wali KG returns!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yayieee😆😆😆
More than happy to see ya back
Laundry wala, well, errr..Lets not get back at him...bechara mar jayega ab toh 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
This had R&B's first note to self 😳
Reading more of them would be fun...now that he speaks enough 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

I loved the last two updates, it was a delightful to see that R&B was the sane one. Loved their banter during the lovemaking too. OH Nisha, you are casting a spell with your words. I think most people read this last chapter at least a few times. You keep outdoing yourself. I today recommended your story to my elder sister (she is just 2 years older then but she pretends its more than that, full of advice). She is snob in reading, just likes books of substance, no fluff, and romance books for her. She just texted me and said that she is hooked. I will feel as I have been given approval for something big in life.😕

R&B is becoming more charismatic by each passing hour, he is understanding II needs, and he is even making notes to self, that's totally endearing. II must be realizing that he is mad about her, that's why he came and took care of her, even went to the event with her (totally out of his comfort zone), endured her tantrums rather emotional bursts, shopping and made her feel special. And sure he could go all the way, but he restrained as he wants her life.😳

II protective instincts will come in full bloom in front of Appa. She will defend him but will not offend appa's sensibilities.😭 And I think now appa will see firsthand that R&B is very integral for II's wellbeing.😊

Plz appa ab mane bhi jaoo! Appa knows he is the best but it's his pride that gotten hurt. His beautiful, intelligent daughter has fallen for an experienced, Punjabi, meat eating man ,comes from a scandalous family and most of all social strata is very defining.(I am over thinking about appa now as I bracing myself for a show down.

Edited by Hsp.canada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ranu,
It's incredibly nice of you to have made that morning post. Touched. Thank you.
Software symphonies is , I reiterate , the only thread I am on. IF was not on my favourite list at all, just one of the links to visit, if I hv to kill time, up until SoSY. Hv a few posts here and there, very random in BALH and another JA, which I forgot to add previously.in fact, I hv not even made one single post in the banned word here up until N's thread. ( no surprises there, I told you all that I will not stop reading)
Books , good reading have been equally important as family is to me in my life .
I randomly, chanced upon SoSy in one of our family holidays around the christmas new year break, and soon , in fact, in a couple of days time, I realised that I was on to something special.
I felt compelled to interact, which I do not normally do , a little uncomfortable in general to be out expressing myself in public forums and plainly lazy . I was surprised to find myself posting here more , a thing I hv mentioned before too. I hv looked forward to the interactions every evening with all of you.
I do not understand to care about what generally happens in IF, So how can I start a new thread to mention that I differed with Nisha. I hv to do it here, right.?? I felt, these pages r incredibly special, the story , contents, the narrative style brilliant , it has no place for other things that I consider trivial,(right or wrong I do not know). I don't know, strongly felt that it should be much much above any of those insignificant trivialities like my daughter talking about cliques in school and the other banned word here, ha ha and that was the only point I thought I had to make, which I did too in more posts than one, before my much discussed last post. On that note, beware guys, tomorrow, somebody could turn up with an offer to N for SoSy as a movie script for its story and our reviews too , as the pages has all, it has a mind boggling story as it's center plot, a family appeal, gripping romance, tear jerkers, suspense, intense drama and comedy both in the story as well as in the comments/reviews. So only classy comments from my end from now on. I am laughing like mad as I am typing this.
I would not like to defend or attempt to justify the post I made. Too much has been already said on that . Definitely disturbs the flow of the story and we cannot allow that to happen another time again. Would appreciate , a request pl for you and N to understand, even if you do not agree.
Just would like to say, that it was incredibly , incredibly nice of you and Nisha to put your hands out reaching out this morning and that meant a lot to me,a connect beyond words. Happy to be bk . Missed you girls like crazy. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think its just me but I hv started enjoying these fights/verbal spats b/w any of the characters more than the couples physical intimacy... Earlier i use to get really excited... The times at sams, the previous hotel room, and der homes...it was all new territory but now it comes as expected the kind of physical desire that plays b/w any couple ( well written and as modern said the line well maintained) but like i knew this is wats gonna happen in jaipur... They would reach a limit but not cross it...
But when it comes to these conversation it still is very surprising, there are many layers still to unshed in that aspect i believe...
May be because dey explored bodies b4 they explored the words...
So ya the previous few parts were good (and steaming hot) but i somehow enjoyed this more...
Edited by taara113 - 10 years ago

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