TS: let's face it together...last part on pg 17

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Beautiful TS..

Awesome..

I loved reading it...👏👏

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hana_y

@hana_y

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

wow shravi read all in one go awesome too good yaar you are good writer yaar love your work thx for pm n I love the way he try to talk with ishita n happy when he shout on shagun n was about to raise his hand too good the bench wala convo wow when he said he want to have child with her n she said after he will say three words yaar cant you do another part in it
please if you see it will be necessary dont force you well done thx for pm sorry for late comment

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: VENBA
Beautiful TS..
Awesome..
I loved reading it...👏👏

thank u so much...

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: hana_y
wow shravi read all in one go awesome too good yaar you are good writer yaar love your work thx for pm n I love the way he try to talk with ishita n happy when he shout on shagun n was about to raise his hand too good the bench wala convo wow when he said he want to have child with her n she said after he will say three words yaar cant you do another part in it
please if you see it will be necessary dont force you well done thx for pm sorry for late comment

dnt be sorry...

thanks so much...

complete other updates too...

another part..i vl try bt nt sure...

i, just a normal writer yar...you guys made me spl by ur comments...

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Finally...read all three parts

awesum TS shavi👏good job

Ishita's problem and ishra managing it together...wonder wen will cvs come up with such track. Hope this drama ends soon.

Hero of the movie is bala. The way he explained Raman...superb. H eknows ishita inside out. Glad he made Raman realize wat ishita wNts from him.

I love this dctr ishita aka jkr...she knows how to compose herself. But there comes a time wen u need to talk out your insecurities, emotions and feelings.

Loved their convo in end. At midnight too...aww...do sweet.

Brilliant TS shavi. Well done

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Finally...read all three parts
awesum TS shavi👏good job

Ishita's problem and ishra managing it together...wonder wen will cvs come up with such track. Hope this drama ends soon.

Hero of the movie is bala. The way he explained Raman...superb. H eknows ishita inside out. Glad he made Raman realize wat ishita wNts from him.

I love this dctr ishita aka jkr...she knows how to compose herself. But there comes a time wen u need to talk out your insecurities, emotions and feelings.

Loved their convo in end. At midnight too...aww...do sweet.

Brilliant TS shavi. Well done

thanks yo so much dear...

u knw..hearing comments from you make my day...

glad u liked it all...

bala is the one who knws ishu inside and out and im missing their bond so much...so fitted in it..

no one can explain anythng to ishra excpt bala...

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Aww...hearing from me makes your day...thats. abig complement to me

Thnks dear🤗

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Aww...hearing from me makes your day...thats. abig complement to me
Thnks dear🤗

U always make me to realise wht i wrote and wht i miss...
Waiting fr ur commnt on reminiscng ishra memories...

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

wow...chinnu

read all parts in one go...

firstly liked the base of the story godh bharai...

...

part1- raman being behind ishu, protectiveness ...

raman being jealous so cute by ishu answer just superb- *ruhi is the reason if survival but you are soul of me⭐️...

awwah raman so cute - i cant sleep and start a day with your seeing madrasi chudail😆...

the line was mixture of love and naughtiness just perfect...

raman teasing ishu so funny😆...

shaggy😡 always waiting for opportunity ...

liked the way raman shouted to her👏...

ishra feeding food lovely...

Part2 -decoration with photo superb...

shaggy and Bala mom😡...

ishita defending herself was just awesome...

bala explanation just bravo👏, awesome...

Chinnu i am speechless, beautiful written👍🏼...

part3 - shaggy drama😡...

bala -raman talkperfect and good...

bala describes how ishu behaves was like elder bro do...

sidehug❤️☺️ , feeding ❤️ ...

ishra walk convo just beautiful❤️...

finally ishu spilt out her pain and insecurities...

naughty bhalla 😆😆...

chinnu just loved it...

well done dear...

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
wow...chinnu
read all parts in one go...
firstly liked the base of the story godh bharai...
...
part1- raman being behind ishu, protectiveness ...
raman being jealous so cute by ishu answer just superb- *ruhi is the reason if survival but you are soul of me⭐️...
awwah raman so cute - i cant sleep and start a day with your seeing madrasi chudail😆...
the line was mixture of love and naughtiness just perfect...
raman teasing ishu so funny😆...
shaggy😡 always waiting for opportunity ...
liked the way raman shouted to her👏...
ishra feeding food lovely...

Part2 -decoration with photo superb...
shaggy and Bala mom😡...
ishita defending herself was just awesome...
bala explanation just bravo👏, awesome...
Chinnu i am speechless, beautiful written👍🏼...

part3 - shaggy drama😡...
bala -raman talkperfect and good...
bala describes how ishu behaves was like elder bro do...
sidehug❤️☺️ , feeding ❤️ ...
ishra walk convo just beautiful❤️...
finally ishu spilt out her pain and insecurities...
naughty bhalla 😆😆...

chinnu just loved it...
well done dear...