ff ' I am with u' updtd part 17 on pg 28 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts one go..

great going. continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooow this is what we were waiting for lovely but why us this fool asha is jealous paagal raman knows everything lol aab iske reaction dekna banta hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ...
waiting for next
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story
read 4 parts in one go..
plz update index
coming back after reading rest of chp :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely updates... RKB gave a terrific surprise to Subbu and his mom, looking forward to next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb yaar
Updt soon
Can u plzz updt the index also plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent update
I would imagine the expressions of subbu, it was really beautifully written. Please continue your good work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
read 4 to14 prts in one go..
very nice story
eagerly waiting for next 😊 update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hai friends
thank u for ur lovely comments...

here is the next part hope u enjoy it

note: from next update i will update the index in first page ..

PART: 15

All enjoyed the party and reached home..all settled in the living room..
Rocky came running to Raman and started playing with him..
are rocky..u missed me..? i also missed u so much..
vaise inhone kuch pareshan tho nahi kiya na aunty??
ha..ha..kunch nahi kiya beta..ithni pyaari hena..(with fake smile)
Ruhi came and sat with her papa and switched on the TV..then starts the news with the main headlines of this launch and all praising MR &MRs bhalla...again the reaction started with some faces..but with no other option plastered smile on their faces..

all headed to their rooms..
subbu i think i can shift to ishus room..can u please send my luggage there??
ha..sure..u go on i will send them...
ho thats so sweet of u and thank u...

ishras room:
ishitha changed and came out by then they hear a nock at the door..
may be mere luggage aagayi me dekthi hu u take rest..
as expected subbu bought the luggage but actual intention was to take a glance at them

Raman aap ka luggage..
thanks subbu..
raman wo...wo..
kya baat hai bathayiyena??
can i talk to u for some time..
any thing serious or urgent..
nai..just a casual talk..
oh ok..i will change and come to terrace..
sure..by saying he left ..
Raman came back after changing and said ishu to sleep and he is going out for some fresh air...

on terrace:
ha..boliyena kya baat he..
kuch khaas nahi bas asi hi baat karna chatata..
vaise program achi thi..its a big success..
ha..i am also happy bcz this one is so special to me...
vaise ishu..i mean ishitha lucky he...
nai nai subbu i am lucky to have her in my life..and i think some people doesn't deserve her..
ha..i know her since 13 years she is nice girl..
raman uderstood where the topic is heading but remained silent..
raman what do think about first love..
first love..? ya it will be special to everyone..
they can't forget them right...
no they can forget..if such love breaks our heart with lame reasons and made our life miserable for certain period..then defnitely we can forget our first love..
actually love makes life colourful...so we need it in life..but such love which made ur life colourless..we need to forget and move on in life..which gives strength to live and may bring second chance to love or to be loved...

subbu was stunned by his answer..but ..
raman cut off his sentence..any ways it late subbu tmr we should start our work..so good night..
oh..gud night..
raman moved to his room with a smile on his face
meanwhile subbu thinking : actually what he mean..ha said it is special then all this..i could'nt understand what his intentions are...make it clear later..

Raman entered the room and saw ishu sleeping peacefully..he moved to his side laid on the bed turned to her side..pecked on her forehead..gud night madrasan
by saying he hugged her..she also came close to him and slept in his arms with a cute smile on her face..

precap: subbu complementing ishu raman jealous..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update!
This subbu 😡
Percap seems interesting

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