ff ' I am with u' updtd part 17 on pg 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai
I am new to this forum
I fell in love with ishra and fed up with current track so decided to write an ff.

Please spare with typing mistakes bcz this was the first time i was typing.

Here i prefer dialouges mosly in ENg but also include some hindi also(thinking less).

First I will write small part
If u want me to cont then I Will continue

All coments both ptv and ntv are accepted

Here all the characters are same as the show but here I prefered to ignore adi shagun and ashok. And mihika's fiasco was also ignored. and some new chrts will be introduced as per the story


PART 1

As per the Yhm the hotel Hm suit romance was interupted by Adi but

Here it is not interrupted.
Finally ishra confess their feelings and consummated their marriage. They were on cloud nine with their new level of their relation.

One month passed with many happy and sweet memories with family and their darling daughter RUHI.

Then Vandu's delivery date is within one month. As per Bala's mother vandu should deliver in chennai.
So vandu decides to go there next day but want Ishu and mihika to accompany her. So she decided to talk to Raman and mihir about that.

How will Raman react and what would be his decision???

Waiting for the comments


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mohabateinnnn thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am so excited to see Raman's reaction
continue soon
if possible PM me
shravani_2311 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice updte...
pls continue...

pm me if possible...
BJAN thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai
Thank you for your support.
Some asked for pm but actually sorry I don't know about it and how to do it.

So i am just updating 2nd part here.
Hope u enjoy it.

PART 2

Vandu called Raman and asked him to meet her, for whitch he readily agreed. That day evening he went to iyer's house. All iyers were sitting in the hall incl ishitha. Raman entered and greeted them.

R: Hai vandhu whats the matter ? Any thing serious?
V: Hai nothing serious just want to talk something.
So just relax and be comfirtable.
R: ho!! i thought u all madrasi sisters planned
Something against me.
Meanwhile vandu signed all others to leave them
Alone. All made some exuses and left them alone

Now only vandu, ishu and raman are left in the hall

R : Ha say it whats the matter?
V: Raman actually my delivery date is finalised and
As per my MILs order my delivery should be at
Chennai.
R: thats great news vandhu. Whats the problem in
This? Btw when is the date?
V: Its in next month. The problem is " u know bala is
in middle of educational tour so he cant
Accompany me to chennai. So , i think it will be
Helpful for me if i take ishu and miku along with
Me. ( completed in one go and trying to grab
The expresdions of raman)
R; shocked and became speechless
He was just staring at ishu...
Came out of his shock when vandu asked him for
Permission to take ishu.

R: I understand vandu but... he could'nt complete
then he composed himself and says " vandu
Dont MU me. But before i devide anything i just
Want to talk to ishu once"
V: ok raman as u wish..

Ishra room:

I: what are u thinking raman? (With a tensed face)
R: u want to go ? say genunely
I: To be frank i want to help my akka at her crucial
Time but ha its very difficult to be far from u. So
U only say what should i do
R: what yaar i just asked one simple qsn and u are
Giving this much lengthy ans. JKR!!!
I: kuch bhi!! Ok raman first tell me what to do?
R: actually i dont have any problem but only thing i
Am not satisfied is u are going to live in same
House where that balas mom (BM) and that
Blody subbu live. Thats why i am worried
I: raman dont worry i will handle them.
R: what u will handle ? Ha just stand there
Silently listening to their taunts and bearing
All the insults? u dont show my JKR to anyone
I: (smiling) ha JKR is sprcially made for u!!! raman i
Will promise u that this time i wont be silent.
R: Achha fine. But i will agree on one condition

What is that condition?

Waiting for comments


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prachi_vrushan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds interesting
do pm m for nxt part
IshraMiNeholic thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NYC...
Now I'm guessing wat is dat 1 condition... Lol
Kiss me or propose or anythng else
BJAN thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai guys
Thank u for ur support

Sorry for the typing problem. Next i will do it better

Many are asking for PM

Actually as i said i don't know how to do it.

So if any one suggest me the process for it , i will definetly send pms.

Thank u in advance
Next update will be soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BJAN

Hai guys
Thank u for ur support

Sorry for the typing problem. Next i will do it better

Many are asking for PM

Actually as i said i don't know how to do it.

So if any one suggest me the process for it , i will definetly send pms.

Thank u in advance
Next update will be soon



first click on inbox... to the right side top corner u will find new message option...
there will be new message option...
click on it...

select those members who asked pm and send it...


RomComFan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is cute and different... I like it. Please continue soon.😊
BJAN thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for ur suggestion

I will try to send pms from next update

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