The Beginnings track OS #3: Mere Ghar Aayi Ek Nanhi Pari

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Shravs

@shravsss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

thnks fr d pm dear...
it was very worth reading...
ur way of naration is just awesome...

ruhi's charactr n her inner feelings... yu hav potrayed thm well...

i must say im in love wid it...

abt ishu...
i know / can connect wid her inner turmoils...
she is a mother at heart...

... thnks dear...
love yu...

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Aww Ruhi's loneliness is so sad. :( I always say that for Ruhi and Ishita it was love at first sight, they are just soulmates, perfect mother and daughter, so there first meeting was beautiful! The part where Ruhi asks if Ishita will stay there, that was so beautiful. Can't wait for the next OS! Well done! 👏

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I love this... seriously love this.

prequel 1- Ishu, Prequel 2- Raman, Update 1- Ru... and all handled so beautifully as well.

You described her innocence so well... and her fascination with Ishu was on point.

I love this re-imagining of their story and I look forward to the future updates.

As always, thank you for the PM!

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This one brought a tear in my eye

just too gud di...truly amazing

this was wat i wanted to read about ruhi...and i could visualize not just scenes but every expression on her and on everyone's face.

she used to talk only wen she recieved award...her innocent question...papa kab ayenge

waking up early on sunday...perfect child psychology...maths problems...i could actually connect to that point wen she asked more about her father...its beautiful...utterly beautiful

the way you explained iyyer family entry from kid's point of view...wow...hatts off...so natural

and ishita ruhi convo...awww

any kid can fall for ishita then here to it is Ruhi...dil se dil ka rishta hai jo...

trust me...after reading this one...am missing those golden yhm days...such scenes and bonding

and those lines...mama ashok uncle ke sath or papa mumbai

thnkd for this one lucky di

looking forward to next part now

And yess...am wondering...Raman also wanted the same flat? Wat next?

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rutu83
so looking forward to this!
lovely part
started out feeling sad for ruhi with her wish for papa. and then her being embarassed about her family dynamics the children do suffer :(
i liked the little spark between the two- very sweet, very real. and ended the os on such a hopeful note ❤️
continue soon

Thank you so much Rutu... I am so glad you liked it 😳

I will continue (am struggling with different options about to get Ishita & Raman to meet for the first time 😆)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shravsss
thnks fr d pm dear...
it was very worth reading...
ur way of naration is just awesome...

ruhi's charactr n her inner feelings... yu hav potrayed thm well...

i must say im in love wid it...

abt ishu...
i know / can connect wid her inner turmoils...
she is a mother at heart...

... thnks dear...
love yu...

Thank you so much 😊 I am so glad you liked it 😳

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Good one lucky

Thanks Leo 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Aww Ruhi's loneliness is so sad. :( I always say that for Ruhi and Ishita it was love at first sight, they are just soulmates, perfect mother and daughter, so there first meeting was beautiful! The part where Ruhi asks if Ishita will stay there, that was so beautiful. Can't wait for the next OS! Well done! 👏

Thank you very much Soujanya 😳

As I was writing this, I remembered the look on Ruhi face in the earlier episodes and the calm but loving enerygy that Ishita & Ruhi shared whenever they used to meet. So it was really easy to write that part.

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

First things first - you are a very good writer. Just putting it out there.😆

Secondly, I love Raman with all his flaws, and his relationship with Ruhi is one of the cornerstones of show, but during the initial episodes, it was actually heart wrenching to see the little child yearn for some affection from her father.

Being left with your grandparents, without both of your parents, that too a six year old - I felt for her. And so I absolutely adored the way you brought back her tiny reflections into her relationship with her father and the fascination she had with Ishita. A complete stranger who didn't seem like a stranger after just a few seconds.

I'll be waiting for you to continue. :)

*Runs to go and read the first two OSes*

Neha

Edited by SurrealFantasy - 10 years ago

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: RomComFan
I love this... seriously love this.

prequel 1- Ishu, Prequel 2- Raman, Update 1- Ru... and all handled so beautifully as well.

You described her innocence so well... and her fascination with Ishu was on point.

I love this re-imagining of their story and I look forward to the future updates.

As always, thank you for the PM!

Thank you 😊 I am glad you liked all the 3 parts 😳

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