The Beginnings track OS #3: Mere Ghar Aayi Ek Nanhi Pari - Page 3

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

This one brought a tear in my eye

just too gud di...truly amazing

this was wat i wanted to read about ruhi...and i could visualize not just scenes but every expression on her and on everyone's face.

she used to talk only wen she recieved award...her innocent question...papa kab ayenge

waking up early on sunday...perfect child psychology...maths problems...i could actually connect to that point wen she asked more about her father...its beautiful...utterly beautiful

the way you explained iyyer family entry from kid's point of view...wow...hatts off...so natural

and ishita ruhi convo...awww

any kid can fall for ishita then here to it is Ruhi...dil se dil ka rishta hai jo...

trust me...after reading this one...am missing those golden yhm days...such scenes and bonding

and those lines...mama ashok uncle ke sath or papa mumbai

thnkd for this one lucky di

looking forward to next part now

And yess...am wondering...Raman also wanted the same flat? Wat next?

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Ankita 🤗

You know I was actually wondering ki tumko yeh part kaisa lagega 😛 I am so happy you liked it 😳

I am thinking about a couple of options about how Raman & Ishita would meet, and how them wanting the same flat would cause tensions... thoda sochke likhti hoon 😆

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

First things first - you are a very good writer. Just putting it out there.😆

Secondly, I love Raman with all his flaws, and his relationship with Ruhi is one of the cornerstones of show, but during the initial episodes, it was actually heart wrenching to see the little child yearn for some affection from her father.

Being left with your grandparents, without both of your parents, that too a six year old - I felt for her. And so I absolutely adored the way you brought back her tiny reflections into her relationship with her father and the fascination she had with Ishita. A complete stranger who didn't seem like a stranger after just a few seconds.

I'll be waiting for you to continue. :)

*Runs to go and read the first two OSes*

<3

Neha

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was Awesome OS.😊

The way You described the Incidents were So nice.😊

Please Continue it and Pm to me when you updated.😊

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

this is just very well written...too good..interesting...please do PM me whenever you continue...👏

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

A very heart warming update. Ruhi and Ishita being each other's "Pari" is a beautiful thought. Loved it.😊

Originally posted by: whitelily

amazing👏