The Beginnings track OS #3: Mere Ghar Aayi Ek Nanhi Pari - Page 4

I m speechless...truly lucky...where do i begin...the choice of song...or the beautiful words that flowed... i have never been good with penning down words... m more of a verbose..but i do appreciate good writing..n this one just takes the cake... i will be honest... i think this is my fav of urs...not tht i didnt like the other stories u wrte...but this one sits at the first place with ur Karvachauth one shot.. (remember tht one)... n so very thank u for pming me to inform... it wud have been a crime to miss this brilliant piece of writing...

Originally posted by: shalz_123

I m speechless...truly lucky...where do i begin...the choice of song...or the beautiful words that flowed... i have never been good with penning down words... m more of a verbose..but i do appreciate good writing..n this one just takes the cake... i will be honest... i think this is my fav of urs...not tht i didnt like the other stories u wrte...but this one sits at the first place with ur Karvachauth one shot.. (remember tht one)... n so very thank u for pming me to inform... it wud have been a crime to miss this brilliant piece of writing...

i m literally in tears...was a lil emotional anyway to start with... n ur story made me more... n amidst these emotional update i laughes so much at those lines.. "she declared, she needs more fingers..." it reminded me of my own childhood...

hope u continue this track... already in love with it...

Shalini

PS: off to read the prequel ones... i think i missed the raman's os..

I'm really loving the way you write! Please continue writing fantastic pieces!

Its for ruhi ishu tuk the grand decision,
ruhi-i feel always sad 4 ths kid in yhm bfr ishra marriage...
Her longing for mothers n fathers love..
She was an unlucky born girl that times...
Now everything changed...
Her life is full of love taught by ishu...
Once who nvr liked to look at ruhi... Today takes her in his arms... Love her as thr is no 2mrw...
Now ruhi s th lucky n blessed kid on earth...

Ruhi old days was superbly portrayed on ths os lucky...

Originally posted by: AVC92

I'm really loving the way you write! Please continue writing fantastic pieces!

Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Its for ruhi ishu tuk the grand decision,
ruhi-i feel always sad 4 ths kid in yhm bfr ishra marriage...
Her longing for mothers n fathers love..
She was an unlucky born girl that times...
Now everything changed...
Her life is full of love taught by ishu...
Once who nvr liked to look at ruhi... Today takes her in his arms... Love her as thr is no 2mrw...
Now ruhi s th lucky n blessed kid on earth...

Ruhi old days was superbly portrayed on ths os lucky...

Thanks Nichuss. I am glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy

very nice first meeting of ruhi and ishita . wow , at least his sister was jealous from him 😆

day dream was very good.😳

😳 Thanks ZD 🤗

Beautiful OS lucky thanks for let us know the world of Ruhi. It was her daily environment grow up with love and care of her family beside stay away from her dad and she got the love from all of them. I like the way Ruhi was comfortable and slowly talk to Ishu and can feel her sadness longing to be with her dad and her complete family when she mention about Adi and Shagun the way she tell her weakness about Math was cute too. Thank you so much for this beautiful OS dear.👏👏

awww such a beautiful os
loved it
ishru meeting was beautiful

Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful OS lucky thanks for let us know the world of Ruhi. It was her daily environment grow up with love and care of her family beside stay away from her dad and she got the love from all of them. I like the way Ruhi was comfortable and slowly talk to Ishu and can feel her sadness longing to be with her dad and her complete family when she mention about Adi and Shagun the way she tell her weakness about Math was cute too. Thank you so much for this beautiful OS dear.👏👏

Thank You 😃