All Of Me, Loves All Of You - IshRa SS | Last Chp - Page 89 - Page 56

Originally posted by: smilydear

Another wonderful update...

Why You are not in CVs Anni , they took the YHM in drain after picking up 2 really illogical plots for future.

These are the points to be focused... You wrote it so beautifully that I feel like i m watching a real episode. 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: usaonly

Emotional update Aani you bring us back to feel what Raman had feel before he met with Ishu and slowly he got heal the wound he had with Shagun . Now he feel relive and broke all the wall he had built up around him he said he can talk anything and evrything to Ishu that so lovely of him. I hope next update Ishu will geting better and bring Raman life to be happy more than before.😛

Originally posted by: shadeslayer

The last update was fantastic Aani!!! (I am right with your name right?) The emotions running through Raman penned down in a brilliant manner!!!

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is amazing... love how you went into his past, very realistic and very sad. Really says a lot about the depth of his pain and all the ways in which Ishita is so different and important for him.

And the silent comfort between them is just what the moment needed...

Can't believe this is a whole chapter with no words between ISHRA, definitely one of the best chapters... very well done!👏

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

awww i could feel his pain

Originally posted by: Preeah

FOR: Chapter 1 - The Edge of Desire

As promised! From the first chapter! I haven't forgotten the res. post, though! 😉

While this isn't the first fic of yours that I'm reading, I had become a fan of yours from the very beginning, Aani (you don't mind if I call you Aani, right?)! You'll have to forgive me for being quite inconsistent about commenting, though. 😒 It's a bad habit of mine, I'm afraid!

Hi Preeah please feel free to call me Aani 😊 and thank you for your kind words. Its always lovely to hear from a silent reader 😊

Anyway, GREAT start! 😊 I don't think I came across another fic that takes an alternative version of this scene, so this is exciting! 👏

What can I say about the characters that hasn't already been said?! Simmi and Rinki are in their teasing mode (I was hoping that Romi was there as well, but oh well!)

Romi had figured out his infertility at this point if you recall, so I dont think he would be in the mood to crack jokes and hence he wasnt around 😳

Ruhi is her same cute self! AWWW! [🤗 Ruhi] For once, Toshiji and Amma aren't being kabab mein haddis, THANK GOD! 👍🏼 And Raman! Well, he's a special snowflake! The more sarcastic and blunt he is, the more he's liked! 😉 It's so funny when his brain-to-mouth filter is missing! 🤣 And of course, apShagun! That B.I.G.G.E.S.T. KABAB MEIN HADDI! _ESPECIALLY_ for our IshRa! 😡 😡 😡 I'm glad Toshiji and Amma pulled her out of that room because I myself was tempted to kick her out! When she was doing her fish-out-of-the-water impression, all I could think was, "How _UNFLATTERING_!!" 😆

Well Raman has mentioned their kebab is full of haddis 😆

Raman was right about one thing, though! I would choose him over apShagun any time! I don't know how she thought Ishita would be any different! ApShagun ka toh akal hi nahi! 🤬

I'm looking forward to rereading this SS and commenting to the chapters, so please be patient with me! 😉 😊

Take your time Preeah 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

wonderful chapter- this chapter, to me, defines the "all" in the title. not just physical, not just now but "all" that makes "me" and "you".

that note beforehand, especially about the vividness of light and shadows was so perfect for ishra! love how you get these quotes just right for each chapter 👏

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Beautifully written Aani...Poignant and intense narration of a totally broken man who was betrayed and ridiculed by his own love and life.

Amazingly tells his hearts pain and despair. and how much it would be tough for him to move on and start trusting another woman in his life.

Ishita's patient listening of his venting out would have been a consolation and relief to him...

cont soon!

Originally posted by: lourel24

Beautiful

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

Res

There are times you really can't put your feelings to words. This is one of those.

Aani got to admit, after this one part, you made up for the wait.

All the words, Raman's feelings, it sort of drained me. And Ishita's silent understanding.

No matter what, it's hard to overcome all the rejection Raman faced but one simple gesture can brush all those past moments.

Emotionally very touching, nothing to add ❤️

And as usual, laziness is my trademark.

Also the adaptation was a show, talkhiyan. Classy, poetic but controversial too.

p.s: My past post was mere sarcasm..All of it. U're free to ignore 😳