All Of Me, Loves All Of You - IshRa SS | Last Chp - Page 89 - Page 55

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

superb update

Originally posted by: 143rhb

Thanks for pm

As always superb update

I could literally feel the pain of raman and had visualized the whole scene.

looking forward for more such beautiful updates from u.

Originally posted by: exploringmyself

lovedd it!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

This was by far the best chapter yet, especially the end when Ishita takes Raman's hand and in that moment, so much is understood between the two even though there is no words uttered. The way you explained the whole scenario, how Raman felt completely exposed in front of Ishita but it was alright cause he was safe with her and how he fell in love with her even more at that moment, I just loved that whole part. It was sheer beautiful writing.

P.S. The part where Raman reflects on his relationship with Shagun and how it affected his relationship with Ruhi was heartbreaking-ly beautiful as well but I was so in awe of the end bit that I had to gush over it first.

Originally posted by: s_kavya

What an Brilliant... Wonderful update 👏 👏 👏 i don't have much words to say but yes falling more and more in love with your writing Simply OUTSTANDING... 👏 ⭐️

Thanks for the PM Aani 😊

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

oh my god

that was simply awesome...

perfect

all the emotions..so beautiful

am speechless

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

great update

it was

update soon n pm me

take care

Originally posted by: shravsss

Awesome..

Loved ur explanation n detailing...

I just wish such scenes in yhm...

Great work...

Lookin forward to its nxt update...

Hope I have one...

Thnks fr d pm..

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Reserve ..

I've to read the last few parts 😳 Will edit this by Monday with a long comment for all the parts.

Edited

Some relations, bonds, stories seem so simple on the outside, but deep down there are so many intricacies to be dealt with. And some relations seem so complicated on the outside but are so simple in real. IshRa are a mix of both these situations. Both people who've had a horrible past which has left them scarred and insecure, fearful to love, both in need of healing and hence matching perfectly. But their ghosts of past come in the way. The way you've written this piece penning down not just their growing fondness, their love and their passion but also what stops them or makes them want to wait. Apart from Ishita's injury, them being in a house full of people ready to torment them, their responsibilities as parents and then of course again the ghost of their past.

Hey Anku 🤗

@red - I love how you have worded the bit yeah. these two are a combo of the simple and the complex .

Yes, they have a truckload of issues in their ways - the superficial ones and then the ones which dont appear but run deep and are truly the strongest reasons that keep them apart.

I love how beautifully and flawlessly you described their rising passion, and their attraction, and desire to be with each other. And just how frank and honest they are with each other..Their playful banter between the moment just to lighten the situation for each other, such a thoughtful insight into the people they are.

When you are in love...physical attraction or should I say physical manifestation of that love is essential right? You cant love and not want to touch the person, hold them and be close to them in every possible way there is. And at somepoint no matter how much you evade things, you have to speak out about this 😳

Coming to the next part. LOVED RKB 😆 He just knows how to get Ishita to do what he wants. And he can be romantic, the Raavan Kumar that he is and then playful and witty all at the same time. Ishita is always entertained 😆

😆 well he wouldnt be Raavan Kumar if he didnt get down to his antics right

Beautiful parts. Loved each and every bit of the detail you've written. Like I said I love how through one situation you've explained every part of their relation and their being so beautifully. Their banters, their hesitation, their love, their past etc and through it all you managed to keep their characters the way they are.

😊

Some amazing talent Aani. You should try and put up a blog of your work, would get so many hits and followers.

😃

thanks Anku maybe in the future 😊

Originally posted by: -Anku-

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What do I say about the latest part. It's one of my most fav ones of this story so far. It's deep, its emotional,its moving and what's best is how it explains IshRa's relation here, even though its mostly an insight into Raman and Shagun's life.

Thanks Anku 😊 @red - yes, that was the intent...to compare and to heal and ergo move on 😳

Raman's scars are deep and they don't heal as quickly as they would normally because Shagun does not for even a moment not surround his life. In the form of the kids or her own presence, she's around and interfering in his life. It must be hard to deal with a part of his past he wants to long forget. It showed how he desperately didn't want to go through the same issues and abandonment that he did previously and it was brilliant how cool Ishita was on hearing this comment from him. Which wife would not react? But she understood him and how. She let him be, let him think over, let him have his space. And when he did look up at her, with all the love he had and with all honesty. She too just had love and trust to offer and probably a promise to never let that happen again.

Yes, but the scars experienced in this chapter, they are the ones that Raman never shared with anyone before. these memories are of a couple when they were in their bed, in the privacy of their bedroom. What she did openly everyone knows, but the slow disintegration of this marriage, the way it died with slow poison those wounds were the deepest and the one left unhealed until now 😳 And like you said Raman is scared so much because of his past he didnt realize what he said until he did and while he knows the two women are as different as could be he couldnt help it because the past still haunts him, especially the parts no one knows about. What I love the most about Ishita as a character frankly is that she keeps her cool in almost any and every situation, its so easy to react in a jiffy but so difficult to reign yourself in and try to think of the other person and put yourself in their shoes, I admire that trait she has.

They spoke so less in this part, but what they feel for the other and just how unique their relation is was blaring through every sentence.

They didnt share a word and yet...yet they spoke 😳

Love the flow of the story Aani and again just how amazingly do you express every emotion that exists. Can't wait for more.🤗

Thanks Anku 🤗